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HowtoWriteaComposition 作文 1 记叙文2 说明文3 议论文英语写作多数为指导性写作或称 半命题写作 也就是说 是先给一定的材料 然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文 方法 组写 缩写 扩写 改写 或看图作文等 如何写好英语作文呢 一 写好句子1 句子要正确 2 句子要平行 3 句子要连贯 4 句子要有逻辑性 5 句子要避免过多重复 6 句子要避免头重脚轻 7 句子要避免汉式英语 二 写好段落三 用好过渡词四 写好开头和结尾 一 写好句子 1 句子要正确 1 DoyouknowwhereisthePeople sPark 2 Therearemanyvisitorsenjoythedish Manyvisitorsenjoythedish Therearemanyvisitorswhoenjoythedish DoyouknowwherethePeople sParkis 2 句子要平行 3 句子要连贯Gointothepark Goforward Crossthestreet Turnright Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate walkstraighttillyoucometoastream Crossthestreamandturnright Inmysparetime Ienjoypopularmusicandcollectingstamps Inmysparetime Ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps 5 句子要避免过多重复 Youwillcontinuetowalk You llseeahill Youwillgoaroundthehill You llgettoalake Afterwalkingforawhile you llcometoahill Walkroundtotheothersideofthehillandyou llseealake 4 句子要有逻辑性I mveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear Iwasveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear 6 句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese maths English physics chemistryandcomputerarethemainsubjects ThemainsubjectsareChinese maths English physics chemistryandcomputer 7 句子要避免汉式英语Myspareloversareswimming skating collectingstampsandlisteningtopopularmusic Inmysparetime I mfondofswimming Inmysparetime myhobbiesareswimming skating Inmysparetime Ienjoyswimming skating 某英语杂志社 家长之友 栏目要举办一次征文比赛 要求围绕 Youcanleadahorsetowater butyoucan tmakeitdrink 这一主题发表意见 请根据下列提示写一篇文章 内容提示 许多家长望子成龙 不惜重金送孩子上私立学校 到国外留学 请家教 给他们买大量的资料 电脑等 但往往这些都 注意事项 投稿人应提示内容 表明自己的观点 Nowadays knowledgeisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantwiththedevelopmentofsociety somanyparentsexpectthechildrentobeusefulorsuccessful Theysparenoefforttooffertheirchildrenasgoodachanceaspossible Theynotonlysendthemabroadforfurthereducationandtoprivateschoolsatgreatexpenses butalsohirepersonalteachers Theybuyall kindsoflearningmaterials computersandsoon Butnomatterwhattheirparentsdoforthechildren whatbecomesofthechildren Someofthemreallymakeit butmostofthemwanttoenjoyandrelaxthemselvesandatlasttheyarereallydisappointing Thisprovesthemeaningofthesaying Youcanleadahorsetowater butyoucan tmakeitdrink Thatistosay youcangivesomeonealltheopportunitiesforsuccess butyoucan tmakeeverypersonsuccessful 二 写好段落 二 写好段落段落本身又是一篇小短文 包括主题句 支持句和结尾句 高考题参考范文 主题句往往在段落的第一句 SunShuwei aworldchampionindiving isaboyof14fromGuangdong 结尾句即最后一句 Ayearlaterin1990 hewonagoldmedalatthe11thAsianGamesandbecameaworldchampionatthe6thWorldSwimmingChampionshipsearlythisyear 假设你是李晓平 是 江苏中学 的学生 请你围绕 建设和谐社会 的主题 根据下面所给出的要点提示 用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书 提示1 人与社会 祖国 家乡 学校 热爱关心2 人与人 家人 师长 同学 诚信互助3 人与自然 能源 环境 动植物 爱惜保护4 你的态度 内容由考生自己决定 注意 1 词数 120左右 2 内容可适当发挥 注意行文连贯 Ashighschoolstudents whatshouldwedo Firstofall weshouldloveourmotherland Let stakeagreatinterestinthedevelopmentofourhometownsandtakeanactivepartinourschool sactivities Dearfellowstudents Ourgovernmentisaimingtobuilda harmonioussociety Ithinkitiseverycitizen sdutytoworkhardtoachievethisgoal Finally let sworktogethertosaveenergyandprotectournaturalenvironment includinganimals trees flowersandgrass Secondly let sfilltheworldwithlove Weshouldshowourrespectforoldpeople ourparentsandourteachers Weshouldalsocareforeachotherandhelpthoseinneed Mostimportantofall allofusmustbefaithfulandhonest 三 过渡词 1 and inaddition first second third 2 before after when later immediately 3 beyond beside behind below inside 4 but still however even though 5 because so therefore thus otherwise 6 sothat indeed aboveall forexample 7 finally inotherwords inbrief 四 开头和结尾开头方法 开门见山 解释和描述主题 小故事引路 提出问题 倒叙 悬念 名言 描写等等 结尾方法 总结主要观点 重复开头或题目 提出结论 提出问题暗示答案 引言 故事等等 请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文 陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由 短文须包括以下内容 1 大部分同学都反对兴建 2 尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少 但弊大于利 3 可能造成噪声污染和空气污染 4 侵占学校部分操场 注意 可以补充若干理由 不要仅仅翻译以上各点 词数 120以上 写作的步骤 1 在头脑中搜索你想用的单词 beagainst construction chemicalfactory makealotofmoney pollute prevent takeup harm playground havesports takemeasures 2 想好开头句 Moststudentsofourschool includingme areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalfactorynearourschool 3 写好其它句子来支持你自己的观点 Althoughthefactorywillmakealotofmoneyforourcity wedothinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood Theairwillbebadlypollutedandwecan tpreventthenoisefromenteringourclassrooms Besides thebuildingofitwilltakeupapartofoursmallplayground Wecan thaveenoughplacetoplaygamesandhavesportsafterclass Ofcourse theyhavepromisedtotakemeasurestodoitwell however itisfarfromenough Ontheotherhand Wewillneverbeabletobreathefreshair 4 适当加上一些评论 5 写出结尾句 Wherewouldwegoifitweretakenup 6 补充 完善 加上过渡词 Sowedon tagreetobuildthefactoryhere Moststudentsofourschool includingme areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalfactorynearourschool Althoughthefactorywillmakealotofmoneyforourcity wedothinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood Theairwillbebadlypollutedandwecan tpreventthenoisefromenteringourclassrooms Besides thebuildingofitwilltakeupapartofoursmallplayground Wecan thaveenoughplacetoplaygamesandhavesportsafterclass Ofcourse theyhavepromisedtotakemeasurestodoitwell however itisfarfromenough Ontheotherhand Wewillneverbeabletobreathefreshair Wherewouldwegoifitweretakenup Sowedon tagreetobuildthefactoryhere 假期即将到来 你 李华 打算做一次为期三周的旅行 希望找个外国朋友作为游伴 Travel mate 拟一个寻游伴的启示 交代清楚日程安排 费用分担情况 对对方的要求 说明对方和你一起出游的好处 Travel mateWantedI ma19 year oldfemalesophomorenamedFuPing Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady collegestudentpreferred tomakeathree weektouringtripwithme Myplanistosetoffnextweekend whenthesummervacationofficiallybegins ThefirststopisKunming theworld renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature We llgettherebytrainandstaytherefor2days andthenwe llheadforJinggangshan aformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot Aftera3 dayvisitthere wewilltakealong distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheChangjiangRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghai sotha