高考英语书面表达的最后冲刺.ppt

首先要认真审题 读懂题目所给信息 初步确定要点内容 并可用序号标出以免遗忘 列题纲使用要点条理化 序化 统筹安排布局 勿要直译 需意译 尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构 不可逐句罗列了事 要刻意把好语言关 要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语 力求文理通顺 语言准确 没有把握的词句不要写 确有把握的的可以锦上添花 解书面表达题的基本技巧 遇到一时想不起的词语 需变通 可以用同义近义词代替 也可以用否定词加反义词来表达 亦可变换句式 不可钻牛角尖 更不能生造词语 汉化表达 注意文章的长度 看具体内容而定 如果内容多 应多用复杂句式 如果内容不多 为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式 并适当增补合理内容 注意保持卷面整洁 书写工整清楚 书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪 最后应注意复查全文 看内容要点有无遗漏 标点 格式 大小写是否规范 是否有语病等 学会使用较高级的词汇词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志 从评分标准可知 运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要 掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式 学会使用较丰富的句式在整篇文章中 避免只使用一两个句型 要灵活运用各种语法结构 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少 从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 学会使用恰当的连接词使用恰当连接词 对写出一篇有 英语味 的文章很重要 能使整篇文章上下衔接自然 紧凑 使文章有一定的流畅性 以使文章层次清晰 行文连贯 书信格式示例 25TianshuiRoadLanzhou ChinaJanuary3rd 2003208HopeRoadSydney AustraliaDear Laura How are you getting on now Yourssincerely ZhouLan 掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式 Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool Ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday 97 Hownicetohearfromyouagain YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina 01 I msogladtolearnthatyou recominginSeptember Doyouthinkyou dlikeit Ifnot Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou Justletmeknow 03 I mgladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinaandwillstayatmyhome I mlookingforwardverymuchtomeetingyousoon 04全2 IamsosorrythatIwon tbeabletoattendthelectureonAmericanhistorytomorrowafternoon I mLiHuafromBeijingHongxingMiddleSchool I mveryhappytolearnthatyou regoingtostaywithmyfamilywhileyou reinBeijing Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorrequests pleaseletmeknow We lltryourbesttomakeyourstayinBeijingapleasantexperience I dliketotellyouthatourschoolhasworkedoutanewprogram 04福 Welcometoourschoolifyouhaveanychance I mverygladtohavereceivedyourletteryousentmetwoweeksago I vebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskedme Therefore Ithinkit sagoodideaforyoutoreturn Sowhatareyouwaitingfor 05湖 I mwritingformoreinformationaboutthedaytourtoLondon 05全1 经典语句汇编 常用的结束语 Bestwishes regards Goodlucktoyou Wishingyousuccess goodluck Givemybestwishes regardstoyouparents Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply Pleasegivemybestregardsto 通知格式示例 书面通知格式示例NOTICEInordertoarousethestudents interestinlearningEnglish theStudentUnionhasdecidedtosetupanEnglishClubwiththehelpoftheteachersofEnglish StudentUnionNovember9 2004 掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式 通知格式示例 口头通知格式示例Boysandgirls MayIhaveyourattention please Ihaveanannouncementtomake TheStudents UnionisgoingtoholdapartyonSundayevening November12th towelcomeourfriendsfromtheUnitedStates That sall Thankyou 掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式 经典语句汇编 通知 DrGreen aphysicistfromEngland willbeinvitedtogiveusatalkon ScienceandFuture AfriendlybasketballmatchwillbeheldbetweenClass10andClass12onourschoolplayground Pleasegetprepared Pleasebethereontime Youarewelcometocomeandhelpus I msureyou llhavealotoffun I msorrytotellyouthatthevisittothecountrysidewhichweplannedforthismorningwillbeputofftotomorrowbecauseofrain 致词 speech 格式示例 欢迎词格式示例Ladiesandgentlemen MrPresident etc Welcometo That sall Thankyou 欢送词格式示例Dearfriends Goodluckto Goodbye dearfriends 掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式 经典语句汇编 致辞 I mverygladtowelcomeyoutoourschoollonbehalfofusstudents Nowletmegiveyouabriefintroductionofourclass It sanhonorformetospeakformyclassmates Firstofall Ihopethatthefriendshipbetweenyouanduswillexistforever WeallhopeyouwillkeepintouchwithusandwehopeyouwillcometoChinaagain Nowlet sexpressourheartfeltthankstohimandwishhimapleasantjourneyhomeandgoodhealth Asaresulttheplanwasafailure Theplanturnedout tobe afailure Whensheheardhehaddied shewentpalewithsorrow Atthenewsofhisdeath shewentpalewithsorrow ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic ShewenttoAustriafor withthepurposeofstudyingmusic Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited Themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt Youcanfindmyhouseeasily You llhavenotrouble difficultyfindingmyhouse Whenhewasachild hewantedtolearneverything Whenhewasachild hehadastrongappetite desireforknowledge Inourschool therearetwenty sixclassrooms Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty sixclassrooms or Twenty sixclassroomsmakeupourschool Ilikesportswhilemysisterlikesreading Ilikesportswhilemysisterenjoysreading I llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmyapplication I llappreciateitverymuchifyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsideration We lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus We llsparenoefforttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown Moreandmorepeoplehaveboughtcarsinrecentyears Thenumberofpeople whohaveaccesstotheirowncars haverisensharplyintherecentyears 使用非谓语形式 Theyoungmanpointedtoapolicemannotfarawayandexplained PWe llmostlystayathomewatchTV playgames andmeetpeopleintheevening We llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV playinggames andmeetingpeople Pointingtoapolicemannotfaraway theYoungmanexplained 97 使用非谓语形式 Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher FIfoundthatanewteacherwassittingatthebackoftheclassroom Ifoundanewteacherseatedatthebackoftheclassroom Followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab 使用非谓语形式 Wewillhaveadiscussionabouttheproblematthemeetingthatwillbeheldtomorrow FTheysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool Singingandlaughing theywentbacktoschool Followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab 合并句子 Chinaisabigcountry Ithasalargepopulation Mybrotherwasriding Iwassittingontheseatbehind Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswhoisexperiencedinteachingforeignstudents Chinaisabigcountrywithalargepopulation Mybrotherwasridingwithmesittingontheseatbehind Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents 合并句子 It sasmallflatof25squaremeters Thereisabedroom abathroomandkitcheninit Thelivingstandardisdeveloping Wegetmoreandmorepocketmoneygivenbyourparentsandrelatives Withthedevelopingofourlivingstandard wegetmoreandmorepocketmoneygivenbyourparentsandrelative It sasmallflatof25squaremeters withabedroom abathroomandakitchen 使用短语 Ourcityhaschangedalotinthepastfewyears Thequalityofthecarisgood Thepriceofthecarisreasonable Itwasrainingheavily buttheywentonwiththework Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcityin Inadditiontothegoodquality thepriceofthecarisreasonableaswell Despite Inspiteoftheheavyrain theywentonwiththework 使用倒装句 ThoughI mweak I llmaketheeffort Hedidn thavesupperuntilhismothercameback Whenthewarwasover hecouldhappilygobacktowork Butbeforethecompletionofthenewcabin astormcame WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort Notuntilhismothercamebackdidhehavesupper Onlywhenthewarwasovercouldhehappilygobacktowork therecameastorm 使用强调句 ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittle 93 Itwaswhattheheadmastersaidatthemeetingthatreallysurprisedus Itwasmyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacestudy healthandsafetybeforeotherthings 05江 Howwasitthatthelittlegirlgotintouchwithherfather 使用感叹句 Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell 98 Howtimeflies IthasbeentwoyearssinceMr Greencametoourschool Howhardmumwasworking 04重 Weweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell 98 定语从句 Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves 02 TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy 05江 Part2 时间状语 HelovedswimmingwhenhewasasmallboyandateighthebecameamemberofthedivingteaminGuangdongProvince Hestudiedhardatschoolandtrainedhardforfiveyearsbeforehecametothenationalteam Ayearlaterin1990 hewonagoldmedalatthe11thAsianGamesandbecameaworldchampionatthe6thWorldSwimmingChampionshipsearlythisyear 时间状语 Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver 93 ItwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet 00 Atastand awomanwasbuyinganice creamwhenayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway 04辽 Asthesnatcherwasrunningpast Therewasanoldmansittingquietlyonabenchnearby 04重 时间状语 HelovedswimmingwhenhewasasmallboyandateighthebecameamemberofthedivingteaminGuangdongProvince Hestudiedhardatschoolandtrainedhardforfiveyearsbeforehecametothenationalteam Ayearlaterin1990 hewonagoldmedalatthe11thAsianGamesandbecameaworldchampionatthe6thWorldSwimmingChampionshipsearlythisyear Suchas Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks visitingmuseums andtakingcomputerlessons 01 Althoughthecityismodernandconvenient therearestillsomeproblems suchasairpollution crowdednessandnoise 04南 However therearesomeproblems suchaswaterandairpollutionandheavytrafficinrushhours 04江 使用虚拟语气 Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexambutfor withoutyourhelp Ifyouhadnothelpedme Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexam 改变语态 HehasmademuchprogressinhisEnglish Weshouldmakeeffortstoreduceairpollution Ourgovernmentshouldtakestrongandeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment Strongandeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectoutenvironment MuchprogresshasbeenmadeinhisEnglish Greateffortsshouldbemadetoreduceairpollution 高级词组的使用 Becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable Weallthinkheisagreatman SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea cameupon Thestudentsthereneedn tpayfortheirbooks Asaresulttheplanwasafailure Whensheheardhehaddied shewentpalewithsorrow Thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywascomfortable Weallthinkhighlyofhim Agoodideaoccurredtome Agoodideasuddenlystruckme Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere Theplanturnedout tobe afailure Atthenewsofhisdeath shewentpalewithsorrow 高级词组的使用 ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited Inourschool therearetwenty sixclassrooms Youcanfindmyhouseeasily ShewenttoAustriafor withthepurposeofstudyingmusic Themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty sixclassrooms Twenty sixclassroomsmakeupourschool You llhavenotrouble difficultyfindingmyhouse 联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察 假定你是接待人员 请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况 1 大小 近100户人家 约500口人 2 变化 过去很穷 78年后变化很大 人们生活比以前好多了 现已旧貌换新颜 3 教育 原来的学校很小 现已经过改建 新建的教学楼有4层 是村里最美的建筑物 村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读 注意 1 要点齐全 前后连贯 2 词数 100 120之间 依据要点 草拟提纲 将所需要的语言材料准备好 可以只列出主要的词 词组 短语及句型 暂不考虑动词的时态 语态 单数第三人称等词形变化 100familiesand500people usedtobeverypoor changealot richerthanbefore takeonanewlook wasverysmall havebeenrebuilt newly built have4storeys mostbeautifulbuilding school agechildren enjoyfreeeducation 扩展成句 连句成篇 本文为一篇发言稿 其格式与口头通知大体相同 因此 短文应有称呼 开场及结束语 既然介绍的是小村 所使用的人称应为it 应注意时态 语态的正确运用 并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇 全文应结构紧凑 前后连贯 Ladiesandgentlemen Welcometoourvillage Thisvillageisverysmall Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people Itusedtobeverypoor Ithaschangedalotsince1978 Peoplehere arericherthanbefore Nowitistakingonanewlook Inthepast theschoolherewasverysmall Nowithasbeenrebuilt Thenewlybuiltteachingbuilding has4storeysanditisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage Alltheschool agechildrencanstudyhere Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit Thankyou 这篇书面表达要点齐全 表达也没语法错误 但语言平淡 表达方式单一 逻辑性也差 因此很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次 如果使用一些恰当的连接词 并尽量使用较高级的词汇和较复杂的语法结构 这个平