广东英语高考基础写作-地点描写.ppt

Basicwriting Howtodescribingaplace Whenyouwanttodescribeaplace whataspectswillyouwriteabout 1Location 位置 2Area 面积 3Surroundings 周边环境 4population 人口 5History 历史 6Placesofinterest 名胜 7somethingspecial 特色 8 climate 气候 1 Location 位置 1 lies 2 stands 3 islocated situatedin 4 stretchesitselflazilyalong 2 Area 面积 1 covers 2 takeup 3 has withanareaof 4 thesizeofourcityis 1 TiananmenSquare with coveringanareaof isthelargestsquareintheworld 2 Ourschool whichtakesup63thousandsquarekilometers isverylargeinsize 3 Surroundings 周边环境 1 stands 2 surroundedby 3 faces 4 with onitseast west left right5 atthebackof在 的后面6 infrontof在 的前面7 inthenorthof在 的北部 内部 8 onthesouthof在 的南方 接壤 9 totheeastof在 的东面 相离 1 Westofthecitystandsatallbuilding 2 Surroundedbymountainsonthreesides thesmallvillagefacesaclearriverontheeast 4 Population 人口 1 has withapopulationof 2 thepopulationof is 3 eightypercentofthepopulation are Eightypercentofthepopulationherearefarmers 5 History 历史 1 has witha long historyof 2 haswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory 1 EgyptisanArabiancountrywithalonghistory 2 Builtinthe16thcentury thecastlehaswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory 6 Placesofinterest 名胜 1 Theplacesaroundourcityarerichinnaturalresources 2 Thecity knownas attractsmillionsofvisitorsfromallovertheworld 3 Thecityiswell known famousforits as 4 Thecityishometo 5 isamust seefortourists as 7 气候特征 1 Thereisavarietyofclimate warm dry humid cold sunny stomy rainy 2 TheaveragetemperatureofHongKongisabout220C TherainyseasonisbetweenMayandJuly 8 somethingspecial特色1 Theplace isfamousfor Thespecialcharacterof theplace is 2 Youcangoonthecitytourstoenjoythesights tastethelocalfood explorethelivelynightlifeandlearnaboutitshistoryandculture 3 Whereveryougo thereareplentyofactivitiestochoosefrom 汕尾市位于广东省东部 是一个有很长历史的沿海城市 总面积5271平方千米 总人口359 23万人 东临汕头 西接惠州市 深圳 东莞市 广州市 素有 粤东桥梁 之称 汕尾自然资源如矿产 森林 农产品等非常丰富 气候宜人 冬不寒冷 夏不酷热 汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙FengshanTemple旅游景区红海湾旅游景区等 每年都吸引大量游客 练习 请根据以下的情景说明 使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息 Let smakepreparations Usefulexpressions 1 lies stands islocated situatedin stretchesitselflazilyalong2 coastalcitycovers takeup has withanareaof with hasapopulationofeasternGuangdongClimatenaturalresourcesfarmproduceFengshanTemple RedBay 第一步 提取信息 注意句子内容的完整性 Completeness Translatethefollowingsentences 1 汕尾位于广东东部 2 汕尾是一个有很长历史的沿海城市 3 汕尾总面积5271平方千米 4 汕尾总人口360万人 5 汕尾东临汕头 西接惠州市 深圳 东莞市 广州市6 素有 粤东桥梁 之称7 汕尾气候宜人 冬不寒冷 夏不酷热 8 汕尾自然资源如矿产 森林 农产品等非常丰富 9 汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙FengshanTemple旅游景区红海湾旅游景区等 每年都吸引大量游客 Let stranslatetensimplesentences 1 Shanweiislocated situated liesintheeastofGuangdongprovince 2 Itisacoastalcitywithalonghistory 3 Ittakesup coversanareaof5271squarekilometers 4 Ithasapopulationofabout3600thousand 5 withShantouonitseastandHuizhou Shenzhen Dongguan Guangzhouonitswest 6 itiscalledthe bridgeofeasternGuangdong 7 Theclimatehereispleasant neithertoohotinsummernortoocoldinwinter8 Itisrichinnaturalresources suchasmine forest farmproduceandsoon 9 Everyyear thefamousplacesofinterestsuchasFengshanTemple RedBayattractsmanytouristsfromdifferentplacesforitsbeautifulscenery AnalysisandFinding 分析与探究 Howtocombinesentences 连句成章 句子结构的正确性 correctness 句子结构的复杂性 Variety 句子内容的连贯性 Coherence GroupDiscussion Howtowritecomplexsentences Organizethesentences Howtowritecomplexsentences 1 汕尾位于广东东部 是一个有很长历史的沿海城市 1 LocatedintheeastofGuangdongprovince Shanweiisacoastalcitywithalonghistory 2 Shanwei acoastalcityintheeastofGuangdong hasalonghistory 尽量用分词短语 同位语结构 with结构等 使文章简洁 通顺 2 汕尾总面积5271平方千米 总人口360万人 Itcoversatotalareaof5271squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout240thousand 巧用介词短语和with结构 Howtowritecomplexsentences 3 汕尾东临汕头 西接惠州市 深圳 东莞市 广州市 素有 粤东桥梁 之称 WithShantouonitseastandHuizhou Shenzhen Dongguan Guangzhouonitswest Shanweiisalsocalledthe bridgeofeasternGuangdong 4 汕尾气候宜人 冬不寒冷 夏不酷热 自然资源如矿产 森林 农产品等非常丰富 Theclimatehereispleasant neithertoohotinsummernortoocoldinwinteranditisrichinnaturalresources suchasmine forest farmproduceandsoon Howtowritecomplexsentences 巧用连词 如and 用好并列句 5 汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙FengshanTemple旅游景区红海湾旅游景区等 每年都吸引大量游客 Therearemanyfamousplacesofinterest amongwhichistheFengshanTemple RedBaywhosesceneryisverybeautiful attractslotsoftouristsfromdifferentplaceseveryyear Howtowritecomplexsentences 尽量用复合句 倒装 状语从句 therebe句型等 Exchangeyourcompositionwithyourdeskmateandhelpeachothertoimproveyourwriting Don tforgetyourhomework Improveyourwritinginyourcompositionbook LocatedintheeastofGuangdongprovince Shanweiisacoastalcitywithalonghistory Itcoversatotalareaof5271squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout240thousand WithShantouonitseastandHuizhou Shenzhen Dongguan Guangzhouonitswest Shanweiisalsocalledthe bridgeofeasternGuangdong Theclimatehereispleasant neithertoohotinsummernortoocoldinwinteranditisrichinnaturalresources suchasmine forest farmproduceandsoon Therearemanyfamousplacesofinterest amongwhichistheFengshanTemple RedBaywhosesceneryisverybeautiful attractslotsoftouristsfromdifferentplaceseveryyear Conclusion 课型 写作课教学目标 通过这节的讲授 让学生掌握如何用英语描写地点 重点 讲授描写地点的常用词汇及句型 难点 灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文 教学方法 归纳演绎法 写作要求 1 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容 2 介绍必须包括所有内容要点 但不要逐条译成英语 3 要有标题 写作内容 Homework Thankyouforattending AustraliaLocatedinthesmallestcontinent Oceania Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld Itcoversatotalareaof7 686 850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million