《写作的注意事项》PPT课件.ppt

如何提高英语写作水平 高分特点 1 外在美 书写清楚 字母大小均匀 单词间距离适当 没有明显修改的痕迹 2 结构美 一篇好的书面表达不能一段到底 应有合理的段落层次 让人感觉条理清晰 每一段要有一个主题句和支撑句 最好采用缩进式段落格式 3 词汇美 从书面表达的评分标准看 运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的档次和得分至关重要 但并等于是用一些偏词 怪词 而是使用一些生动 具体 形象的词语 大家可平时阅读时积累一些富有表现力的词汇 例句 Ourschool sEnglishclubintendstoholdaactivitynamed TheNightofDrama Thetopicshouldbeconnectedwithourschoollife MyclassmatesandIareinlowspirits Honestlyspeaking itisprettydifficultforustofindafitplaywhichisnottoolong Thecontentsofthedramaaresupposedtohaveacloseconnectionwithourschoollife Asforthis wehavedifficultyinchoosingtheplay Wemustlimitourperformancetimeto40minutes WehaveachanceofputtingonashortEnglishplay Thedramashouldbeaseasyaspossible Asforasweareconcerned it sdifficulttopickoutagoodplay 4 句式美 句式单一 缺乏生气的文章 哪怕无任何错误都不可能的高分 精彩句式的合理使用会使文章形象生动 为文章增色 简单句虽然短小精悍 但是在语言表达上不能单一地注重简单句的正确使用 还应多应用一些并列句或复合句 使句式灵活多变 优美句式 Weareseekingforashortplaywhichisnottoodifficult IknowyouareanexpertwhoisgoodatdramainEngland Wefindithardtochooseagoodplaywhichisnottoolong Wedon tknowhowtofindaproperplaywhichisnottoolong Ifwehaveyourhelp wewillhaveagreatsuccess Itiswell knownthatthedrama stimeisimportant WegainitfromourteacherthatyouareaprofessionalplaywrightinEngland Ourschool sEnglishclubintendstoholdaactivitynamed TheNightofDrama 5 衔接美 有效地使用语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 是高考书面表达的重要评分依据 为了使文章结构紧凑 自然流畅 段落之间要使用适当的过渡语 句子之间要使用符合逻辑上合理的衔接词 表示对等关系的连接性词语 either or neither nor or aswellas and both and 表示因果关系的连接性词语 therefore so asaresult asresultof becauseof duoto owingto thanksto表示时间顺序的连接性词语 atfirst then later meanwhile intheend beforelongforthefirsttime表示转折关系的连接性词语 yet but while onthecontrary however表示解释说明的连接性词语 thatis thatistosay inotherwords suchas forexample表示递进关系的连接性词语 what smore what sworse besides inadditionworsestill moreover 此外 aboveall表示总结陈述的连接性词语 inaword onthewhole inshort briefly inbriefly tosumup allinall 失分的原因 1 审题错误 1 要点不全或者要点表述错误 2 时态和语态选用错误 2 词汇不过关 单词拼写错误百出 词不达意将大大文章的写作 表现 单词拼写错误或词汇运用不恰当 尤其是动词的运用 甚至出现汉语拼音来滥竽充数 Youareaprofessionaldramaer Butit sdifficulttochoiceaplay Weareseekingforashortplaywhichisnottoodifficultandbiref Wehopeyoutohelpus 3 中式英语 4 语法错误 表现 人称混乱 句子结构不完整 主谓一致 缺少谓语或谓语动词使用不当 从句运用错误 词类误解 OurschoolEnglishclubisgoingtoholdaDramaNight Wewanttoshowanotlongtimeplay Wegetintotroublewhenwechoicetheplay Allclasswilljoinintheactive Wouldyoubewillingtoit SowewanttothatyoucanhelpustoputonashortEnglishplay Inordertoit weneedtochoosedramas Weneedthedramaisaboutschoollife Wehopethatlimitthetimeofdramatofortyminutes Thebiggestproblemisthatwedon tknowtohuntforagoodplaywhichnottoolong TheEnglishclubofourschoolwillholdingaDramaNightonOctober20th 10 TheEnglishclubofourschoolwillholdingaDramaNightonOctober20th 11 Itshouldcloseourschool 5 语篇结构不完整 表现 结构松散 句与句之间连贯性不强 缺乏体现句与句之间逻辑关系的连接词或乱用连词 6 卷面问题太多 表现 字迹潦草 标点符号使用混乱 涂抹严重 词数偏少或偏多 没有按要求的黑色笔或出现笔细 色淡 字小的现象 1 Theplayalsoshouldnotbetoodifficult However thecontentsshouldbeinterrelatedwithschoollife 2 Butit sverydifficultforustohuntforagoodplay What sworse wemustfindsomethingaboutschoollife 3 Themainideashouldbeconnectwithourlifeinschool Also thetimeweactisaboutfortyminutes 4 Wehearthatyouareaexpertwhoisgoodatplay Butitisverydifficulttofindagoodplay 5 Ontheotherhard thecontentsarebasedonourschoollifeandconnectedwithsomethingsimple Generallyspeaking youarewell knownasexpertindrama 5 语篇结构不完整 表现 结构松散 句与句之间连贯性不强 缺乏体现句与句之间逻辑关系的连接词或乱用连词 6 卷面问题太多 表现 字迹潦草 标点符号使用混乱 涂抹严重 词数偏少或偏多 没有按要求的黑色笔或出现笔细 色淡 字小的现象 1 Theplayalsoshouldnotbetoodifficult However thecontentsshouldbeinterrelatedwithschoollife 2 Butit sverydifficultforustohuntforagoodplay What sworse wemustfindsomethingaboutschoollife 3 Ontheotherhard thecontentsarebasedonourschoollifeandconnectedwithsomethingsimple Generallyspeaking youarewell knownasexpertindrama 4 Wehearthatyouareaexpertwhoisgoodatplay Butitisverydifficulttofindagoodplay DearProfessorTaylor We restudentsformNo 2MiddleSchool Ourteacher Mrs toldusthatwemaywritetoyouforhelp Here stheproblem TheEnglishClubofourschoolisgoingtoholdDramaNightonOctober20th OurclasswouldliketoputonashortEnglishPlay Butitisverydifficulttofindagoodplaywhichisnottoolong about40minutes andwhichisnottoodifficult Itisevenmoredifficulttofindsomethingaboutsch