2003年下半年高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试.doc

2003年下半年高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作试题参考答案及评分标准（课程代码 0603）I.Supply the missing paragraph (20分) Another of my childhood fears was that I would get lost. When all the buses were lined up along the curb, I was terrified that Id get on the wrong one. I would scan the bus for the faces of my friends, make sure the bus driver was the same one that had been there in the morning, and even then ask the others over and over again to be sure I was on the right bus. On school or family trips I wouldnt let the leaders out of my sight. And of course, I was never very adventurous when it came to taking walks or hikes, because I would go only where I was sure I could never get lost.评分标准1第一部分满分20 分， 按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。2提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的回答与参考答案意思相近，或思路新颖，且有创见，即使在整体上不够全面，也应酌情给高分，但不得超过该题最高分值。如果考生的答案与参考答案不完全吻合，但上下一致，语气连贯，条理清晰，应按正确答案给分。3写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。4答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。5分值不得出现.分。第一档：分上下连贯，意思完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，很少有语法错误和拼写错误。第二档：分上下基本连贯，语言基本通顺，表达较清楚，少有语法错误和拼写错误。第三档：分上下不连贯，语言不通顺，表达不清楚，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。第四档：分上下不连贯，语言不通顺，表达不清楚，有大量语法错误和拼写错误。IIWrite an outline (20分)1. Introduction: The working conditions of American workers have been improved.A. American workers used to work long days and long weeks.B. Unions improved the working conditions of American workers.C. Thesis: Today, American workers have workweek options that were unheard of earlier in the last century.2. There have been changes in the American workweek.A. American workers now have a shorter workweek.B. American workers now have variable hours options.C. Both management and workers benefit from the use of overtime.3. What does the future hold for American workers?A. The typical workweek may continue to shrink.B. They will have more free time to themselves.C. Under the financial pressure and given the work ethic, many workers may have two jobs instead of more leisure.评分标准第二部分满分为分，按四个档次给分。其中分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。考生只能按题型要求写出“Sentence Outline”，如果”Topic Outline”或两种混用，则降档处理。提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的答案在层次划分上与参考答案不一致，但条理清晰，合理，概括完整，应按正确答案给分。答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣分，但不重复扣分。分值不得出现.分第一档：分概括准确，内容完整，语言通顺，表达清楚。第二档：分概括较完整，个别要点有遗漏，语言基本通顺，表达较清楚。第三档：分概括不全面，要点遗漏较多，语言不通顺，表达不清楚。第四档：分无法表达内容和概括意思，几乎没有要点，语言不通顺。IIICompose an essay (分)参考答案略评分标准第三部分满分分，按五个档次给分。其中分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。分值不得出现.分第一档：分作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词准确，没有语法错误，很少有拼写错误。第二档：分作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词基本得当，有个别语法错误和拼写错误。第三档：分作文基本切题，内容较充实，结构较清