必修一-Unit1-Writing交友建议信ppt课件.ppt

Howtowritealetterforadvice Shirley recentlyIfinditdifficulttogetalongwithmynewclassmates WhatshouldIdo 根据下列要求和提示 完成审题谋篇 遣词造句 连句成篇等写作过程 假设你是李华 你的好友Harry在交友过程中遇到了困难 请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信 给他提出一些建议 1 帮他分析原因 2 给他提出建议和原因 3 陈述你帮助他的具体打算 4 100个词左右 DearHarry AIhopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful Lookingforwardyourletters BFirstofall youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates likesanddislikes What smore youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively andatthesametime learntolistentootherspatiently Inthisway youcanmakefriendswithmorepeople Lastbutnotleast itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary Withtimegoingon peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandotheabove C Iamsorrytohearthatyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely However thesituationiseasytochangeif solongasyoutake followmyadvice Yours Lihua 第一步 Whatmustwepayattentiontowhenwritinganarticle 题材 人称Person Thefirst secondperson 时态 Tense thesimplepresenttense 要点 aletter 写作攻略2 建议信写作的注意事项a 第一段要表达情感 写出目的b 提出问题的原因 说明建议的内容 建议的原因 因此要注意各条建议之间的衔接 c 熟悉建议信的常用句型 Structure Whichparagrahisthemostimportant Para1 Para2 Para3 Wishesand Feelingsandpurpose Advice hopes Advice1 reason Advice2 result Advice3 Howtocomeupwithsuggestions 我建议你把零用钱花在这些事情上 我觉得你该这么花零花钱 为例 Youcan should hadbetter mightaswellspendyourpocketmoneyinthisway Ithinkyoushouldspendyourpocketmoneyinthisway Whynot Whydon tyouspendyourpocketmoneyonthesethings It sagoodideato 6 Itwouldbebetterifyou7 Ithinkit lldoyougoodto8 Isuggestthatyoushould9 Iwouldadviseyouto 第一步 审题养成重视审题的习惯 虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的 但审题仍然十分重要 现以样题为例 谈谈如何审题 第二人称 一封信 好友Harry在交友过程中遇到了困难 给其建议 说理逻辑性 现在时 建议信篇章结构 提出问题的原因 说明建议的内容 注意事项 语言要委婉 礼貌 顾及对方感受 适当运用模板 DearHarry I m toreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto 引出主题 Hereareafewsuggestions First itisimportantto Then italsohelpsto Besides itshouldbeagoodideato Youcanalso 此三句不同的句式提出建议 Asto Isuggest 有时根据需要具体到某一反面 Inaddition 其他建议 I msure 预测可能的结果 给对方以行动的信心和决心 I mlookingforwardto 表达愿望 Sincerelyyours LiHua 第二步 搜索相关词组或句型 1 词汇 1 积极参与beactivetotakepartin activelytakepartin 2 耐心听他人说话bepatienttolistentoothers 3 随着时间的流逝astimegoesby withtimegoingby 4 和 交朋友makefriendswith 第二步 搜索相关词组或句型 1 词汇 1 很难与他人交流havetrouble difficultincommunicatingwithothers 2 感到孤独feellonely 3 采纳下面的建议adoptthefollowingadvice suggestions 4 了解他人的兴趣learnabouttheirinterest hobbies 1 你在信中说 你与别人交流时有困难 Inyourletter yousaidyouwerenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothers B Inyourletter yousaidyouhaddifficulty troubleincommunicatingwithothers C Inyourletter yousaidyoufoundithardtocommunicatewithothers 2 句式练习一句多译 2 我相信你可以克服的 只要你能遵循一下几点建议 A Ibelieveyoucanjustovercomeitsolongasyoucanadoptthefollowingadvice B Ithinkyoucangetoverit solongasyoucanfollow taketheadvice 2 句式练习一句多译 3 在班级举行讨论的时候 你要积极参加 并且积极表达自己的观点 Inaclassdiscussion you dbetteractivelytakepartinitandexpressyourviews opinionsactively B Whentakingpartinaclassdiscussion youshouldtakepartinitandtellotherswhatyouthinkactively C Youshouldparticipateinthediscussionpositivelyandmakeyourvoiceheardactively 2 句式练习一句多译 4 这样你就可以结识更多的人 Inthisway youcanmakefriendswithmorepeople B Thenyoucanmakeacquaintancewithmorepeople 2 句式练习一句多译 5 必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主意 A Itwillalsobeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary B Itisalsoagoodideathatyoucanhelpotherswhennecessary 2 句式练习一句多译 DearHarry Iamsorrytohearthatyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely However thesituationiseasytochangeif solongasyoutake followmyadvice Firstofall youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates likesanddislikes What smore youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively andatthesametime learntolistentootherspatiently Inthisway youcanmakefriendswithmorepeople Lastbutnotleast itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary Withtimegoingon peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandotheabove Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful Yours Lihua Whatmakesanexcellentwriting 主谓宾拼写检查三段谚语刚学习的单词语法句式连接词 ShowTime 假如你是李华 你的朋友Mary最近刚升入高一 在英语学习方面遇到困难 询问你如何学好英语 根据以下内容回