高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错（含解析）1.doc

专题五短文改错训练1AAt present，I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it at the full.It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoped to lighten my parents financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort，I succeeded.At the ceremony，my mum was the most poorlydressed woman，and with the brightest smile on her face.答案：At present，I am happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it the full.It feels good to study hard with my classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped all.It was a time when my family going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship， to lighten my parents financial burden.After making tons of painstaking ，I succeeded.At the ceremony，my mum was the most poorlydressed woman， with the brightest smile on her face.BOn September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if they visited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology.答案：On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced to us briefly and told us we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later，we were divided into five groups began our separate .Some students took notes carefully as they visited.All the students were at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my interest in science and technology.CThis morning，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face，I felt happy that I was able to help.答案：This morning，I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it，I found some money a card with a phone number. that the owner would be worried，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an voice.Hearing that I had his wallet，he with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes ，the man arrived.After confirming he was owner，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up，he expressed his gratitude to me .Seeing the smile on face，I felt happy that I was able to help.DWhen it comes to the TV，there will be different word in different peoples minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.Therefore，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do it do harm to our eyesight，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.答案：When it comes to the TV，there will be different in different peoples minds.Some people think that TV is a good way to relax.Firstly，we can broaden our horizons know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally，we can predict may happen in the future and be prepared.，every coin has its two sides.There also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only it do harm to our eyesight，but it also has a bad on our studies and everyday life.Definitely，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat it in a right way.训练2AMy name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao，Shandong Province on February 1995.I started the school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at it.Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.答案：My name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao，Shandong Province February 1995.I started school in 2001 when I was six.I studied in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best I am very good at .Last year I first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting .My favourite sports swimming in summer and skating in winter.BOne day，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snowcovering road.Many people passed by，and no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business；others worried that if they helped him，they might got into a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened，I called 120 immediately.While waiting the ambulance，I took down my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time did the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance，I felt relieved.In my opinion，this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.答案：One day，I was walking home after school when an old man fell onto the road.Many people passed by， no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business；others worried that if they helped him，they might into a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened，I called 120 immediately.While waiting the ambulance，I took my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into ambulance，I felt relieved.In my opinion， is our duty to help those who are in .CIm going to study in the senior middle school on September.I can live either at school and at home.But I cant decide because both has advantages and disadvantages.At home，I have my own room，but I can have a good sleep.However，I have to share one room with 56 student at school.Maybe I cant sleep good.Its a problem.Although I can have better food at home，I enjoy eat with my classmates.I think its a great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home，Ill have ride to school.Its a waste of time and not safely.Its so hard to make a decision.答案：Im going to study in the senior middle school September.I can live either at school at home.But I cant decide because both advantages and disadvantages.At home，I have my own room， I can have a good sleep.However，I have to share one room with 56 at school.Maybe I cant sleep .Its a problem.Although I can have better food at home，I enjoy with my classmates.I think its great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home，Ill have ride to school.Its a waste of time and not .Its so hard to make a decision.DBeijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago，visitors behave badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers，cutting down trees and hurt animals.And even better，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily，things has changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily.As student，I think we should know its our duty to protect the environment.Lets to change our behaviour when we travel.答案：Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago，visitors badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers， down trees and hurt animals.And even ，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily，things changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly animals. smokes in the woods.All these changes make us .As student，I think we should know its our duty to protect the environment.Lets change our behaviour when we travel.训练3A(导学号59430108)Dear Friend，As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.Love always.Your Friend，Jesus答案：Dear Friend，As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me， my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too .I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew would be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello，but you were too busy.At one point you to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your .I thought you wanted to talk to me you ran to the phone and a friend.Love always.Your Friend，JesusBRecently，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought，“Oh no，its probably a package from some companies that I will not want.But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back.” Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him.Well，my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office change immediately.Because I now knew who had been sent it！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.答案：Recently，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought，“Oh no，its probably a package from some that I will not want. I will have to go to the trouble of it back.” that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting in the mail from him.Well，my attitude the package waiting for me at the post office immediately.Because I now knew who had sent it！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.CIt was an unusual cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So a cold front had brought winters cold back.I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were especially good that day.As we talked，my attention was drawn outside，across the street.There，walking into town，was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She was carrying a wellworn sign，reads “I will work for food.” My heart was sank.We continued with our meals，but his image lasted in my mind.答案：It was an cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour. a cold front had brought winters cold back.I with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food especially good that day.As we talked，my attention was drawn outside，across the street.There，walking into town，was a man appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back. was carrying a wellworn sign， “I will work for food.” My heart sank.We continued with our ，but his image lasted in my mind.DWhen I was seven years old and my sister were only four，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twentyseventh birthday.Mum was disappointing.Although we were really so young to understand what was going on，but I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home，plenty of that we needed，but we miss our father.About every evening we would go to our grandparents house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken.His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.答案：When I was seven years old and my sister only four，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two after his twentyseventh birthday.Mum was .Although we were really young to understand what was going on， I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home，plenty of we needed，but we our father.About every evening we would go to our grandparents house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken. boss was a nice young man named Charles got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.训练4A(导学号59430109)Dear John，I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me plan to see you next week.Dont hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you.In addition，dont worry at your school work.We will help you make it up when you return back to school.During recovery in hospital，try to keep a good mood，which help improve your health.Whats more，eat more fruits or drink more water than usually.Always follow the doctors advices.Its very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours，Li Hua答案：Dear John，I heard you were injured in accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and plan to see you next week.Dont hesitate to to us if there is we can do for you.In addition，dont worry your school work.We will help you make it up when you return to school.During recovery in hospital，try to keep a good mood，which improve your health.Whats more，eat more fruits drink more water than .Always follow the doctors .Its very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours，Li HuaB(导学号59430110)In our life，everyone is surely to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following my teacher in the English class.Beside，my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly，I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends.They willing shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.Whats more，you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result，I made great progresses in learning English.答案：In our life，everyone is to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to my teacher in the English class.，my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly，I took part in the English Corner I met many friends.They shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.Whats more， talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result，I made great in learning English.CThe trip of Shanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so excited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train，I found it crowded with people but we didnt get a seat.Therefore we keep standing all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie in bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day，I jumped out of bed excited.My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit many places of interests.I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my own mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.答案：The trip Shanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was excited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train，I found it crowded with people we didnt get a seat.Therefore we standing all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was in bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day，I jumped out of bed .My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we many places of .I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.DI want to share one of the things that Im proud here.It dated back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that I needed in a big box.The big day had arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and then