【创新设计】2012版高考英语总复习 Unit 3 Looking goodfeeling good写作模板 牛津译林版

用心 爱心 专心1 模板模板 发言稿发言稿 典例 最近 你们班上将要组织一场以 To be self confident 为题的主题班会 你是英语 课代表 请根据以下内容写一篇不少于 120 词的文章作为发言稿 开头已为你写好 不计入 总词数 提示 1 简述自信的重要性 2 假设你以前缺乏信心 1 谁给了你鼓励 2 什么事让你改变了一切 3 可适当加入自己的评论 Girls and boys Life is but a hard and bitter journey 写作策略 1 仔细审题 1 体裁 发言稿 2 时态 一般现在时与一般过去时 3 人称 第 一人 称 2 确定结构 1 自信重要性 2 自身经历 3 自己的评论 3 筛选词汇 lack of self confident success encourage try my best to 等 4 句型搜索 I d like to I feel strongly that 等 5 组句成篇 When Later Since then 等 范文赏析 Girls and boys Life is but ahardandbitterjourney Therefore I I wouldwould likelike toto saysay No matter what happens be self confident When I was 14 Isufferedsuffered fromfrom a lack of confidence I didn t dare to answer teachers questions in class and was afraid of speaking in public Later Later something happened and changed my life It was a speech contest held in our school MyMy mothermother persuadedpersuaded meme toto participateparticipate becausebecause sheshe hadhad greatgreat confidenceconfidence inin meme Ichoseatopicmostappropriatetome Self confidence and Success I triedtried mymy bestbest toto recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror With my mother s great love and encouragement I won the first prize in the contest Since then I I havehave feltfelt stronglystrongly 名师点评 是非常重要的句式 平实地道地表达 笔者思想 准确真实地再现了缺乏自信时笔者自 身的感受 自然地实现了上下文的过渡与衔接 母亲的鼓励促成了自己的超越 自己的努力与勤奋是获得成功的关键 因素之一 首尾呼应 再次论述自信的重要性 总体评价 语言运用得体 过渡自然 情感真挚 情景真实 有较强的感染力 用心 爱心 专心2 thatthat self confidence is the first step towards success So friends be confident and you will have a bright future 写作指导 Elegance 优雅 原文 So so 普通 1 Therefore I would like to say No matter what happens be self confident So I think we should be self confident when anything happens 2 When I was 14 I suffered from a lack of confidence When I was 14 I was not confident at all and I experienced much disappointment 3 My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in me My mother asked me to take part in it and she had great confidence in me 4 With my mother s great love and encouragement I won the first prize in the contest Because I worked hard and my mother loved and encouraged me I won the first prize in the contest 5 So friends be confident and you will have a bright future So friends be confident and have a bright future 用心 爱心 专心3 临摹翻译 1 范文佳句 Therefore I would like to say No No mattermatter whatwhat happenshappens bebe self confident self confident 临摹翻译 在我看来 无论发生什么事 我们都必须同样努力工作 In my opinion no matter what happens we should work hard the same 2 范文佳句 When I was 14 I I sufferedsuffered fromfrom a lack of confidence 临摹翻译 现在的学生苦于大量的作业和睡眠时间不足 Many students nowadays suffer from too much homework and lack of enough sleep time 3 范文佳句 My mother persuadedpersuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in me 临摹翻译 老师最终说服他报名参加下周举行的英语演讲比赛 The teacher persuaded him to enter for the English speech contest to be held next month at last 4 范文佳句 WithWith mymy mother smother s greatgreat lovelove andand encouragement encouragement I won the first prize in the contest 临摹翻译 在老师的帮助下 我的写作能力自去年以来得以很大的提高 With the help of my teacher my writing ability has been greatly improved since last year 5 范文佳句 SinceSince then then I have felt strongly that self confidence is the first step towards success 临摹翻译 自从他来到这里 他每天都花一个小时练习英语口语 Since he came here he has spent an hour practicing spoken Engl