2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(八)天气与环境

1 2018 年广州市中考英语作文专题复习 八 天气与环境年广州市中考英语作文专题复习 八 天气与环境 一 相关话题一 相关话题 天气 Weather 自然 Nature 世界与环境 The world and the environment 二 与专题相关的知识准备 二 与专题相关的知识准备 1 相关单元 天气 七年级上 Unit 4 Seasons 自然 环境 七年级上 Unit 3 The Earth 七年级下 Unit 4 Save the trees Unit 5 Water 八年级下 Unit 5 Save the endangered animals 2 相关词汇 高频词 关于天气 seasons weather plant spring summer autumn winter sunny rainy snowy foggy grow rain swim 关于自然 环境 the Earth the moon forest river mountain field environment pollute pollution protect destroy dirty clean burn waste gas area pour nearby serious public improve endangered save 高频短语 关于天气 get warm turn green heavy snow go to the beach fall from the trees go on a picnic take a trip play in the snow 关于自然环境 pollute the water throw away put waste rubbish into rivers and seas take in harmful gases fight against pollution cut down stop doing sth plant trees dig holes water the plants as a result turn the tap off have a bath take a shower in the wild lose one s home kill for millions of thousands of in danger stop from turn off 拓展词及词语 shower muddy the importance of in our lives decrease valuable drinkable the World Wild Fund for Nature a nature reserve live in harmony with nature atmosphere environmental 2 problem 3 经典句型 关于天气 I like season best My favourite season is The wind blows gently strongly The sun shines brightly It s exciting to take a trip in spring It s nice exciting to do sth 关于自然环境 The Earth provides us with air water and food The Earth is our home Trees are important in our daily lives Trees are home to birds and animals There is a lot of pollution We burn things to make energy This pollutes the air What can we do to protect the Earth We must stop We must do our best to We mustn t throw rubbish into the river The fish will die if the river is polluted We should write to factories and ask them to stop polluting the river We can take our own shopping bags to the supermarket Remember not to waste or pollute water The problem is very serious People often We can t live without They throw rubbish into rivers too Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted We should use the both sides of paper collect waste paper Don t buy caps or boxes which people can use only once Turn off the lights when you are not using them You d better ride a bike instead of driving a car You d better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a bus or a taxi if you re traveling a short distance Something must be done to stop the pollution 3 Panda are strong enough to protect themselves It s important for us to protect the endangered animals It is cruel of people to kill animals 二 经典例题 二 经典例题 2010 年广州市中考题 你校准备举行 节约用水 从现在做起 的英语征文比赛 你打算投稿 请根据以下表格内容 写一篇英语短文 必要性没有水人类就无法生存 不良现象不关水龙头 tap 洗澡时间很长 没 喝完水就把瓶子扔掉 建议 你的 2 3 个建议 注意 1 词数 80 左右 计划的开头已给出 不计入词数 2 不能透露个人的任何信息 例如 具体的学校和姓名等 否则不予评分 Act now to save water Water is important to us 解题思路 1 审题 a 本文共有 6 个要点 b 时态主要采用 一般现在时 c 人称是 第一人称 2 可能用到的短语和句型 a 主要连接词 but so in my opinion b 主要短语句型 some some others can t live without turn off throw away 3 成文 Act now to save water As everyone knows water is important in our daily life One can live without food for a week but one can no longer exist without water in three days Now in the world water is fewer and fewer We 4 should not waste even a drop of water There are many examples of wasting water such as not turn off the tap after using it have a too long shower and throw bottle with water In my opinion people should start out small to save water Try to use the water again and again For example after washing clothes you can use the water to mop So please don t wait Act now to save water We will have a brighter future 点评 1 从内容上须写 2 3 个建议 学生只写了一个 2 本文出现一些可以避免的语法错误 如水是不可数的 不能用 fewer and fewer 等 3 还有些中式的英语 have a too long shower 4 最后一段人称比较乱 有 I you people 和 we 改为用第一人称更好 5 整篇文章描述比较流畅 用到较好的句子如 One can live without food for a week but one can no longer exist without water in three days 所以整篇文章得分 5 4 5 2 5 12 4 检查思路 完成作文自查表 1 如果没有问题的 请在项目后打 2 如果有问题 请在项目中圈出来 并在文中做出修改 项目 第一次自查第二次自查 布局与内容要点 人称 时态 主谓一致 动词搭配 介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 5 分项分档评分表分项分档评分表 项目要素给分表 内容 6 分 切合题意 体现要点 6 5 5 5 4 5 4 5 4 3 5 3 2 521 510 5 有所发挥 语 法 词 汇 准确 性 6 分 机械性 大 小写 拼写 和格式等错 误 6 5 55 4 54 3 5 4 3 2 521 510 流畅 性 3 分 结构3 2 52 1 5 2 10 50000 自评总分 6 参考例文 Water is very important to us Without water people cannot live But in our daily life we can see many people waste water Some people do not turn off the tap after using it Some take long showers and others throw away plastic bottles when there is still water inside To save water we should always turn off the tap when we are not using it We can wash our clothes twice a week instead of every day And we d better flush the toilets with used water The last drop of water could be our tear so take actions from now on to save water 四 实战演练 四 实战演练 环保和建设 美丽中国 是 2013 年我们国家热门的话题 作为广州市的一名小市民 针对广州 目前出现的灰霾问题 请你根据以下四个方面的提示向广州市环保局局长写一封以建设 美丽 广州 为主题的倡议信 1 主要问题 灰霾 haze n 天气 2 原因 工厂和汽车排放废气 工地 building site 产生粉尘 3 重要性 健康问题 4 相应的措施 禁止工厂排放废气 工地释放过多的 Spring Festival 粉尘 小车限行 6 注意 1 词数 80 左右 开头和结尾已给出 不计入词数 2 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名 3 可适当发挥 Dear Sir Environmental protection and building beautiful China have become Chinese hot topics in 2013 because there is a serious air pollution problem Sincerely yours Debbie 注意 1 词数 80 100 个 开头和结尾已给出 但不计入词数 2 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名 3 可适当发挥 解题思路 审题 本文共有 个要点 时态主要采用 人称是 可能用到的词语 写在要点旁边 可能用到的句型 7 成文 检查思路 完成作文自查表 如果没有问题的 请在项目后打 如果有问题 请在项目中圈出来 并在文中做出修改 项目 第一次自查第二次自查 布局与内容要点 人称 时态 主谓一致 动词搭配 介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 参考例文 Dear Sir Environmental protection and building beautiful China have become Chinese hot topics in 2013 because