六级写作点睛十道题

2013年6月六级写作点睛十道题 2013 06 05 11 08 37 这是我讲的六级写作点睛班讲义里的一部分练习题 想来想去 还是发上来吧 到现在一篇没练的同学 至少练一下前四道 练过的同学 可以选择自己没练过的题型练 练 各种题型都练过的同学 可以侧重看看这些模拟题范文里的论据和关键的话题词 也 可以用默写或对译的方式来检查自己的语言质量 想要瞒天过海 侥幸过关的同学可以只 背前四篇里面划线的部分 你要说押题押中的可能性有多大 我即使告诉你有百分之九十九也没用 因为你很可能死 在那剩余的百分之一上 那百分之一可能是像四级曾经考过的事故见证书 导游词 招新 启示 有个锤子模板可用 所以 在背诵一些模板句垫底的基础上 更应该动手练几篇 找找写作的手感 夯实一批 自己喜欢用的好词好句 暴露自己的常见词汇和语法问题 然后通过查字典和对照范文来 改正 写作模拟题写作模拟题 一 对立观点型 一 对立观点型 Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following information Currently a number of schools allow students to grade their teachers and even decide if the teachers can teach on or not This has given rise to a heated debate with some approving of the pratice and others strongly opposed to it Now discuss both views and give your own opinion 二 单一观点型 二 单一观点型 Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled MyMy ViewView onon PlasticPlastic Surgery Surgery You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 三 解决问题型 三 解决问题型 Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled CollegeCollege StudentsStudents PlayingPlaying Truant Truant You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 四 名言警句型 四 名言警句型 Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A A CurseCurse CanCan BeBe a a BlessingBlessing inin Disguise Disguise You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 五 图表图画型 五 图表图画型 1 Directions For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topicFightingFighting DrugDrug AbuseAbuse You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below 2 Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 3 3 Directions Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 这里没有水 换个地方挖 六 书信型 六 书信型 Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a job You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words and base your composition on the following information 假定你是李明 是北京外国语大学 Beijing Foreign Studies University 一名英语专业 的学生 你在 China Daily 上看到一则招聘广告 Microsoft China 要招聘口译员 你认 为自己符合条件 请写一封求职信 七 读后感型 七 读后感型 Directions Read the story in Chinese below and then write a composition of no less than 150 words under the titile of TheThe GoalGoal ofof LifeLife Your composition should be based on the story and the following outline 1 What have you learned from the story 2 What is the goal of your life If you have achieved the goal of your life what would you do 目目 标标 在英国有一位残疾青年 他双腿走起路来很困难 却凭着坚强的信念和毅力创造了一次又 一次的壮举 他19岁时登上了世界最高峰珠穆朗玛峰 21岁时登上了阿尔卑斯山 22岁时 登上了乞力马扎罗山 28岁前他登上了世界上所有著名的高山 然而 就在28岁这一年他 自杀了 原来在他11岁时 他父母在攀登乞力马扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩双双遇难 他的父 母临行前给他留下了遗嘱 希望他能象父母一样 登上世界上所有著名的高山 这位残疾 青年把父母的遗嘱作为他人生奋斗的目标 当实现全部目标的时候 他感到前所未有的无 奈和绝望 他留下遗言 如今 功成名就的我感到无事可做了 我没有了新的目 标 八 其他类型 八 其他类型 Directions For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition of at least 150 words but no more than 200 words on the topic Volunteering Volunteering Activities Activities and base your composition on the outline below 1 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作 2 志愿者工作的意义和 或存在的问题 3 我个人的经历或打算 参考范文参考范文 一 对立观点型 一 对立观点型 1 1 IsIs ItIt UpUp toto StudentsStudents toto EvaluateEvaluate Teachers Teachers The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of universities allowing students to evaluate their teachers and even decide if they can stay on their positions or not To this practice people s attitudes differ considerably Some applaud it warmly whereas others criticize and even condemn it harshly Proponents of the practice may list the following reasons In the first place they assert thatstudents are the people who know the most clearly about the teaching performance of a teacher so they should have the say in evaluating him or her In the second place they contend that students have paid for their education so they have the right to decide which teacher should be employed Opponents however point out that it is dangerous to leave the right to students to evaluate teachers For one thing students may not know what ought to be taught and how it should be taught they may only judge a teacher according to his temper and even accent or appearance For another in order to please students some teachers may resort to some improper means Personally I believe that both views are justifiable and we should achieve a balance between them by employing the evaluating approach in a reasonable and beneficial way To be specific students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers but they may not be the only decision maker in the teachers fate Personally I think that both sides have something right Actually lottery games should be viewed as a two edged sword which presents us with both benefits and troubles But we should not give up eating for fear of choking The best policy as I see it is to maximize their advantages and eliminate their unhealthy side effects Or in other words we should further develop lottery games and exert proper supervision over them so that they can benefit us in a better way 二 单一观点型 二 单一观点型 MyMy ViewView onon PlasticPlastic SurgerySurgery The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people undergoing plastic surgery To this practice people s attitudes differ considerably Some applaud it warmly whereas others criticize and even condemn it harshly Personally I am opposed to plastic surgery and I base my position on the following reasons In the first place I deem that physical appearances are always of less great importance than inner beauty and practical ability In the second place I am definitely opposed to the concept that there is an established norm of beauty Instead I hold that beauty even in the physical sense manifests itself in varied ways Last but not least as is well known plastic surgery can be very dangerous resulting in some irreversible injuries Indeed there are some individuals who have achieved success in their career or life with the help of plastic surgery but it must be pointed out that they belong to the absolute minority and that their success depends far more than their improved physical appearance Taking into consideration all the above mentioned we may safely come to the conclusion thatplastic surgery is definitely unnecessary for normal people We should focus more on our inner world and try to attract others with our personality and intelligence 三 解决问题型 三 解决问题型 CollegeCollege StudentsStudents PlayingPlaying TruantTruant The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of college students playing truant Taking a look around one can find examples too many to enumerate Sometimes even less than half of the students in a class attend the lecture A number of factors may be responsible for this phenomenon Personally I can come up with the following ones In the first place there exist faults with the arrangement of curriculum In other words some courses are irrelevant or far beyond or below students In the second place some teachers are responsible for the phenomenon Their teaching is far from attractive or efficient Lastly there exist reasons on the part of students many of whom have become restless under the influence of some social trends This phenomenon is definitely unhealthy and requires remedying Naturally measures should be taken in the three aspects mentioned above For one thing it is imperative that the school perfect its arrangement of courses For another teachers should be constantly urged to improve their work Last but not least students should be warned against some vicious trends in society and concentrate on their study Only with these measures taken can we expect a solution of the problem 四 谚语警句型 四 谚语警句型 A A CurseCurse CanCan BeBe a a BlessingBlessing inin DisguiseDisguise A famous saying goes that A curse can be a blessing in disguise Simple as the saying is its meaning is profound and thought provoking Evidently it is meant to tell us that unfavorable conditions can one day prove to be favorable ones ant that we should not be indulged in depression after we have met setbacks Actually history abounds with examples to prove this saying Taking a look around we can also find examples too many to enumerate Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than the experience of my own Though performing well enough in the college entrance exam I was only provided with the opportunity to enroll in a second class university However I did not lose my heart Instead I found the remoteness and quietness of the campus a favorable condition for my study In terms of English I have passed CET 4 with a high score Now I believe I can do the same with my CET 6 Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion we may say that a curse can also turn into a blessing So one should not indulge himself in bitterness and complaint after he meets setbacks What he really has to do is to seek opportunities and turn adversities into favorable conditions In a word we should truly understand the profound meaning of the proverb and take the right actions in our life and work in the future 五 图表图画型 五 图表图画型 1 1 FightingFighting DrugDrug AbuseAbuse It can be seen from the charts that drug abuse has become a grave problem in China As we can see from the first chart on the left in 1996 there were only slightly more than 200 thousand drug addicts while in 2011 the number soared to over 1 000 thousand The other chart conveys a more shocking message about 70 percent of the drug addicts in China now are young people aged under 35 A number of factors could account for this dramatic change but the following might be the most critical ones In the first place as China opens its door to the outside world its people tend to be influenced by western values and life styles More or less the drug addicts in China are imitating their counterparts in the U S and other western industrialized countries In the second place with China transforming from a planned economy to a market oriented one there has appeared a vacuum in some people s faiths especially in the youngsters Confronted with increasingly fierce competition in study and work many of them resort to drug abuse as a way of relaxation In view of the seriousness of the situation effective measures must be taken before things get worse For one thing it is imperative that pertinent laws should be worked out and rigidly enforced to crack down on drug dealing cutting off the supply of drugs For another a deep going and ever lasting campaign should be launched to help the young establish the right philosophy and world view Only with these measures taken can we expect a brighter future 2 2 OnOn thethe RelationshipRelationship betweenbetween PeoplePeople This is a simple but meaningful drawing This is an artfully designed and thought provoking drawing As we can see the man living on the upper floor of a building is watering a plant whose roots have grown downward so far that they have barred the window of an old man living downstairs making his apartment a prison Simple as the drawing is the message it conveys is profound and far reaching Evidently it is meant to reveal the fact that some people tend to base their own happiness on other s bitterness Actually our society abounds with such people It never too rare to see some people walking their dogs outdoors and let them shit everywhere Nor is it to find some honking the horn of their cars while driving in the street disturbing people living around Actually what these people do has more or less infringed upon other s interest They should either be condemned or be punished To sum up this picture is indeed instructive It is essential to take others benefits into consideration if we want to see a harmonious society As is often advocated we should regard it as an honor to help each other and a shame to benefit oneself at the expense of others 3 3 Perseverance Perseverance KeyKey toto SuccessSuccess This is a wittily designed and inspiring picture As it shows is searching for water He has already dug many holes in the ground but none of them has reached the water In fact the water is just a few inches below the bottom of one of the holes With a cigarette between his lips and his spade in his hands he walks away leisurely saying to himself in mind that there is no water here and I shall try another place Simple as the story is the message it conveys is profound and far reaching Obviously it is meant to tell us about the importance of perseverance on our way to success There is no denying the fact that nowadays an increasing number of youth lack the spirit of persisting on A case in point is that many of them change their jobs or careers too frequently Faced with a bit setback or difficulty they choose to quit and change their goals If the situation goes as it is the consequence will be disastrous not only for individuals but for the society as a whole Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion we may say that the lack of perseverance is a major barrier on our way to success In a word we should truly understand the profound meaning of the picture and try various means to cultivate our perseverance 六 书信型 六 书信型 A A LetterLetter ofof ApplicationApplication forfor a a JobJob June 16th 2013 Dear Sir Madam I am responding to your advertisement in China Daily on June 16th 2013 which invites applications for interpreters Enclosed with this letter is my resume which details my background I believe that I am the best candidate for this position In the first place I have been studying for four years in Beijing Foreign Studies University one of the most prestigious language schools in China which has provided me with a desirable command of English skills In the second place I have taken part in a number of social activities in the past years which have helped cultivate my team spirit and creativity Last but not least I have worked as a part time interpreter so I am well prepared for this job I would treasure the chance and exert every effort to do a good job if I had the luck to be provided with the position Besides I shall be much obliged if you will afford me an opportunity for an interview and I appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience Thank you for considering this application Yours sincerely Li Ming 七 读后感型 七 读后感型 TheThe GoalGoal ofof LifeLife A story goes that a disabled young man managed to reach the peak of every famous high mountain in the world before he was 28 He did all this just as his parents told him to do in their will But the young man committed suicide in the end and his last words were now I have nothing to do with all my goals achieved and my fame well established I have no new goals Simple as the drawing is the message it conveys is profound and far reaching Evidently it is meant to reveal the fact that first one should have a grand ideal and associate it with the needs of society and secondly one should have his own pursuits and should not follow others blindly The story is especially instructive when we think of similar happenings around us Some people after making a fortune feel empty and desperate resorting to drugs or other low style of life Still more young people do the same because they