2011年高考英语备考作文例举及评析素材 新人教版

1 20112011 年英语高考备考作文例举及评析年英语高考备考作文例举及评析 作文作文 1 1 2020 分 分 最近 你校同学针对是否应该每天留家庭作业进行了讨论 讨论详情见下表 请根据表格内 容为你校的校刊写一篇英文报道 并表明你自己的看法 赞同 占 70 不赞同 占 30 巩固课上所学内容减少与家人的相处时间 增进记忆与理解减少参与其他活动的机会 理 由 提高时间管理与安排的能力身感疲惫 学习兴趣降低 Recently Recently ourour schoolschool studentsstudents havehave hadhad a a discussiondiscussion aboutabout whetherwhether itit isis necessarynecessary toto havehave dailydaily homework homework DifferentDifferent studentsstudents havehave differentdifferent opinions opinions 已已 给的开头给的开头 Almost About 70 percents of students support say yes to the idea of having daily homework Some of them think that homework helps students understand better about the knowledges knowledge and memorize them better as well Also others consider it necessary because it makes them learn again about the lessons they are taught thus ensure a higher score at the exams Moreover some students believe that daily homework can improve their abilities about managing and arranging to manage and arrange time However there are still 30 precents of students who don t want to have daily homework Firstly they worry that doing homework may reduce the time communicating with families Secondly it provides fewer chances to take part in different activities especially the voluntary works Thirdly they said that they have studied so long that they are tired and not interested in it anymore In my opinion we shouldn t have daily homework I I don tdon t thinkthink itit necessarynecessary toto dodo homeworkhomework everyevery day day for we want as we really need to have more time to do what we like Only in this way can we doing things better and live happier every day 上作文得分 13 分 是月考试题 得分得分 1515 分分 作文作文 2 2 2020 分 分 北京市政府发出限行通告规定私家车每周限行一天 下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查结 果 请根据下列图标提示 叙述被调查者的不同看法 并简单谈谈自己的看法 BeijingBeijing governmentgovernment hashas announcedannounced a a carcar restrictionrestriction thatthat privateprivate carscars shallshall taketake turnsturns offoff thethe roadsroads oneone ofof fivefive workdays workdays 已已有的开头 A survey has just been conducted about it and the findings are as follows 60 of the supporters think that it will reduces reduce the number of 2 traffic jams especially during the rush hours And as fighting against pollution is becoming more and more important for us 30 of them consider it reasonable for the sake of enviornmental protection There will be fewer less pollution so that the air will be fresher Also another 10 believe that it will save the energy and benefit for benefit our earth On the contrary But there are still many people don t who disagree with it 75 of them think that it will be unconveinent for them to go out for the public transportation are is not good enough And 25 of them worry that it will make people buy more cars and cause more traffic jams In my opinion the restriction is good for us As as it can make people aware of the importance of enviornmental protection and can be benefit not only for benefit us but also for our children 以上作文得分 12 分 benefit n 1 A carcar restrictionrestriction willwill bebe ofof benefitbenefit toto everyone everyone 2 It will be to everyone s benefit to carry on a a carcar restriction restriction 3 We should carry on the car restriction restriction whichwhich will benefit everyone 作文作文 3 3 15 分 请根据下面的提示写一篇短文 In an English speech competition you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judge how to you understand it 学生作文点评 学生作文点评 As you can see in the picture a person is walking quickly in a big Chinese character This Chinese character s meaning is me She has walked in it many laps In my opinion she never gives s up on this winding road She never stops s her step when she faceses difficulty instead instead sheshe makes s efforts for her goals Life is a difficult journey andand we must keepkeep perseverance all the time TryTry ourour best best andand wewe willwill surelysurely succeed succeed 流畅流畅 自然自然 文字值得肯定文字值得肯定 1212 分分 只是审题还有问题只是审题还有问题 该人走了半天该人走了半天 走不出自走不出自 我我 请从这个角度请从这个角度 重写发来重写发来 As can be seen from in the picture there is a shape of Chinese word meaning me A teenager is walking on in it but the line she walks is 3 always the same As can be imagined the teenager will never walk out of me because she just walks and follows the same line I think the picture reflects a common phenomena in our society that is teenagers are always concern only about herself themselves and don t care about others such as her parents or teachers So they are very selfish If they have something good they wouldn t want to share with others and they always hate dislike refuse their parents suggestions How can they make rapid progress and get out of me very soon In my opinion it is not a good behavior I myself is always important but we should also see others in the world Only in this way can we broaden