限时训练--写作2

写作训练 写作训练 1515 看图说话类文章看图说话类文章 三亚一中三亚一中 邢宏梅邢宏梅 题型的特点题型的特点 形象 直观 内容具体 且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明 因 此考生一般都有话可写且不会走题 写作指导写作指导 看图作文写作应考虑的几点 1 看懂图片 把图片展示的人物 地点 时间 事件等有机地串联起来 使之 成为内容连贯的句子 2 确定短文的时态和人称 3 确定体裁 说明文还是记叙文 接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意 4 根据图片或图表大意进行议论 比如 一幅图或是 漫画 要先对漫画的内容 进行描述 然后对这一现象发表自己的看法 写作训练 1 假设你是李华 你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校 学中文 来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房 请根据图画提供的信 写信介 绍住房的情况 并告知住房面积为 25 平方米 月租 500 元 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 参考词汇 房租 rent n 参考答案 Dear Bob I m so glad to learn that you re coming in September I ve found a place for you It s a small flat of 25 square metres with a bedroom a bathroom and a kitchen In the bedroom there is a bed a sofa a desk and a chair The rent is 500 yuan per month The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School Bus No 11 can take you straight to the school In fact it is only one stop Do you think you d like it If not I can try and find another place for you Just let me know Yours Li Hua 写作训练写作训练 2 假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生 暑假打算去乡村度假 请根据下面 两幅图提供的信息 写一篇短文 简要说明城市生活的不足 重点说明你去乡 村度假的原因 注意 1 短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息 并做适当发挥 使短文内容连贯 完整 词数 100 左右 解析 此书面表达有图画兼文字提示 因此考生在动笔前先要审阅提示 如 文章的体裁为说明文 说明要去乡村度假的原因 注意人称和时态 One possible version I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside Although the city is modern and convenient there are still some problems such as air pollution crowdedness and noise In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life There the air is fresh and the water is clean trees are green and birds are singing I can also go boating fishing and swimming in the lake What s more I can climb the hills All this will be interesting and good for my health Above all I can learn more about nature So I want to go to the countryside for a change I m looking forward to the coming of my summer holiday 写作训练写作训练 3 简要描述如下图片 并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法 命题目的与解题技巧 本题考查对温画的理解 解析 这是一个识图题 体裁为说明文 说明自己的观点看法 1 本文要求用第一人称 2 时态 一般现在时 3 写作要点 业余时间 学生补习太多 没有自己的时间 表达自己的观点 学生 应有自己的时间 理由 答案 One possible version We Want to Have Our Own Time As we all know today students have more and more homework they use their spare time to do the homework and to take lessons Then students have no time for themselves In my opinion I think students Should have more time to develop themselves First students should have some time to relax and play This doesn t mean that they will waste time We can also study and learn from the play After doing the homework for a long time it is necessary to have some time to relax No play and no games makes Jack a dull boy We don t want to be dull boys We want to be good students in many ways Second we can have our own time in order to make our body strong