广东省张静中学2014届高考英语一轮复习 书面表达训练题（9）

1 20142014 高考英语书面表达一轮训练 高考英语书面表达一轮训练 9 9 附参考范文 附参考范文 2013 湖北孝感一次统考 请根据下面提示 结合你的校园生活中的一个事例 就英语格言 Failure is the mother of success 这一话题 用英语写一篇短文 In fact there aren t always bright sunshine and gentle breeze birds singing and flowers fragrant in our daily life We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success but life is what you make it 注意 无须写标题 不得照抄英语提示语 除诗歌外 文体不限 词数为 130 左右 参考范文 One possible version Success will be gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing That is the message carried in the proverb Failure is the mother of success 2 For example when I began to learn English I was slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong from time to time My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates But I didn t give up and kept practising reading aloud English every day And my teacher gave me a helping hand getting me right whenever I made an error In a word as long as we don t lose heart and keep on trying we are sure to go through failure and achieve our aims 结束 图表式书面表达思路与技巧图表式书面表达思路与技巧 图表式书面表达是常见的一种写作形式 现笔者结合下面一则实例 谈谈怎样写好这类书面表达 根据以下表格内容 请以 How to Reduce the Present City Population 为题 用英语为杂志社写一 篇短文 阐述你对这一问题的见解 建议 I 具体措施 A 晚婚 B 一对夫妇 一个孩子 目的 减少人口自然增长 人口出生率 建议 II 具体措施 严格控制外地人进城务工经商 目的 减少外地人口对城市的压力 建议 III 具体措施 A 在郊区 建造生活 商业 文教 卫生 娱乐 休闲生活小区 B 在城外建造卫星城 目的 吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 参考词汇 严格控制 have a tight control 卫星城 satellite town 一 认真审题 准确把握提示要求 1 审体裁 准确把握体裁是写好一篇文章关键的一步 体裁的形式直接决定着考生用英语表达信息的途 径和形式 并影响着书面表述语句的正确性和准确性 2 审人称 根据体裁要求 要准确把握人称的使用 是用第一 二人称 还是用第三人称 3 审时态 不同的体裁 其动词时态的使用也各有不同 一般情况下 故事 日记等体裁常以一般过去时 为主要动词时态 书信 便条 通知等体裁常以一般现在时为主要动词时态 分析以上实例 应以第一人称的口吻进行描写 从题目要求 表内要点以及体裁可知 本文时态应以一般现 在时为主体时态 二 理清表内要点 进行合理发挥 图表式书面表达其主要内容常被列在表内 考生首先必须理清表内内容要点 抓住主要信息进行描写 可 先把表内所提供的内容要点用英语列出 尽量使用一些较高层次的词汇或短语以及所学过的句法结构 如定 语从句 分词结构等 进行描述 例如上述实例图表中的内容可用英语列出以下几个短语或句式 1 practice a policy of Late Marriage and One Couple One Child 2 reduce the birth rate 3 have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs 4 lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population 3 5 build apartment blocks with shopping centers schools hospitals as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities 6 encourage city citizens to move there to live and work 三 正确使用过渡性词语 提高文章的连贯性 过渡性词语的使用是语言的连贯性得以实现的最常用手段 在句子与句子之间 段落与段落之间恰当地使 用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的 例如上述实例 我们可在要点 1 前插入表示时间顺序的过渡 词语 first firstly 在要点 3 前插入 secondly 在要点 5 前插入 finally 在要点 6 前可以插入表 示终结关系的过渡短语 in this way by this means 现将中学课本中应掌握的过渡词语总结如下 1 表示起始关系的有 first of all according to so far as far as to begin with in my opi nion 等 2 表示时间顺序的有 first then later in the end finally at last after that since the n immediately suddenly soon 等 3 表示空间顺序的有 on the right left on one side of at the top foot end of in the middle of in front of at the back of 等 4 表示并列关系的有 and or also too as well as neither nor not only but also eith er or not but 等 5 表示转折关系的有 but yet however while on the contrary 等 6 表示因果关系的有 because since as for thanks to thus therefore as a result of one reason is that another reason is that 等 7 表示条件关系的有 if unless as so long as on condition that 等 8 表示让步关系的有 although though even if in spite of after all in fact what who when where how ever 等 9 表示递进关系的有 what s more further more besides what s worse to make the matter wor se also still on the one hand on the other hand 等 10 表示列举事实的过渡性词语有 for example instance such as take for example as follo ws and so on 等 11 表示总结性的有 in short in brief in a word on the whole 等 13 表示过渡性的插入语有 I think believe suppose imagine guess I m afraid you kno w as is known to us all as we all know 等 根据以上图表式书面表达题写作思路 上述实例可整理成文如下 How to Reduce the Present City Population Our modern city is crowded and to solve the problem three proposals are put forward Most of the people think that we should first practice the policy of Late marriage and One Cou ple One Child in order to reduce the birth rate Secondly the city governments must have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs so as to lig hten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population Finally more and more pe ople suggest that we should build apartment subdivisions with shopping centers schools hos pitals as well as cinemas and theaters around them or even build satellite towns around the cities In this way city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work If th ese three proposals are well carried out the population will be greatly reduced 结束 4 20 万元会使中国令世人瞩目 中国运动员创造了新的奥运会金牌纪录 获金牌的运动员除了得到政府奖 金 20 万元以外 还会从地方得到更多的奖励 对此 社会各界反响不一 赞成 不赞成 1 运动员为国争了光 2 运动员付出了许多辛苦和汗水 3 奖金有利于中国体育后备力量的培养 1 运动员是国家培养出来的 为国争光理所当然 2 得到大量奖金后 有些队员不会退役 3 一些企业趁机炒作 从中获取广告效应 请你就此现象进行简单阐述 并提出自己的一些看法或建议 130 词左右 提示词汇 奖金 bonus 参考范文参考范文 China has become a shock to the world in Olympic Game 20 the Chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of 200 000 local reward not included which has become a household talk Some say the players have won honor for our country after taking great pains so they deserve it What s more it will benefit the training of future players Others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country It will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money Besides it s said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their products I think I will admire the sportsmen who worship not moneny but the spirits of the Olympic Games 结束 作文 目前 家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象 人们对此做法褒贬不一 下面是就此现象所做 的问卷调查结果 请根据下列图表提示 描述被访者的看法 并就此现象发表自己的观点 注意 1 词数 100 左右 文章的开头已经给出 不计人总词数 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 Nowadays it s a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home which causes a heated discussion A survey has just been conducted about it and the findings are as follows 5 One possible version Nowadays it s a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home which causes a heated discussion A survey has just been conducted about it and the findings are as follows We can see that half of the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep Another 30 think children can rest or have meals comfortably in their own cars About l5 consider it reasonable just for the sake of children s safety The rest of them think it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children However other people hold different opinions 55 of them believe that it results in more traffic jauls especially around schools in rush hours And 30 think that driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parents burdens in aspects like time energy and expenses Still 15 worry that in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents which does no good to them In my opinion we can take buses to school 结束 7 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华 你校将于 6 月 26 日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团 你受学 校委托 负责安排在津的一日活动 请根据以下提示 用英语给该团的领队 Smith 先生写一封电子邮件 介绍活动计划并简要说明理由 最后征求对方意见 上午与我校学生座谈 话题如校园生活 文化差异等 中午与我校学生共同进餐 午餐包括饺子 面条等 下午与我校学生游览海河 注意 1 次数不少于 100 2 可是当加入细节 以使内容充实 行文连贯 3 信的开头和结尾已给出 不计入总