河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（4）

1 郑州市郑州市 20142014 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 4 4 附参考范文 附参考范文 passage 5 Dear Mr Brown I am writing to thank you with your kind help 1 Before you came to teach us I had not interest in 2 English My pronunciation was terribly I could 3 only speak a few words But one and a half year later 4 I now think English fun to learn I got a lot from your 5 encouraging words I will always remember what you 6 said If you try to you can be No 1 I hope you ve had pleasant journey home and will come to china again sometimes in the future I will write again 9 and send you the photos we take together 10 参考答案 KEY 5 Dear Mr Brown I am writing to thank you with your kind help for Before you came to teach us I had not interest in no English My pronunciation was terribly I could terrible only speak a few words But one and a half year later years I now think English fun to learn I got a lot from your is encouraging words I will always remember what you right said If you try to you can be No 1 I hope you ve to had pleasant journey home and will come to china a again sometimes in the future I will write again sometime and send you the photos we take together took 结束 结束 2 高考英语书面表达讲义 要点作文 4 2525 min min 2012 长郡月考 假如你是李华 你们学校最近开展了创建 平安校园 的活动 你们 班为此组织主题班会 请你用英语写一篇发言稿 谈一谈你对如何创建 平安校园 的一些 想法 短文应该包括下面的内容 1 安全意识的重要性 2 在运动中要注意安全 3 在校内要注意人身安全 4 同学间发生矛盾时 一定要保持冷静 理智 5 逐步将 平安校园 活动转化为全体师生的实际行动 注意 1 不要逐句翻译 可适当增加细节使行文连贯 2 词数不少于 120 参考词汇 校园安全 safety at school 3 参考范文 OneOne possiblepossible versionversion My dear classmates There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay in I consider this as indeed a good practice which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life whether when we stay at school or outside it When we are doing sports we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt Furthermore when we get into trouble with our classmates we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically As far as I m concerned I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and try to keep the safety at school activity in mind Besides we are supposed to observe the law discipline wherever we are at any moment Thanks 结束 2012 武汉武昌五月调研 请根据以下提示 结合自己的学习生活 就 如何缓解压力 这一话题 用英语写一篇 短文 谈谈自己的建议或做法 Nowadays students study hard and they are always under a lot of 4 pressure It s necessary for them to have some ways to ease stress and minds 注意 无须写标题 不得照抄英语提示语 除诗歌外 文体不限 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 词数为 120 左右 参考范文 One possible version Pressure is a common serious problem nowadays Many students in our class worry about their exams Much pressure as we have from our studies we need a relaxation after heavy work to renew our energy Furthermore burying ourselves all day under piles of books is not the only way to study I m always under pressure too My parents expect me to go to a key university One evening I had a talk with my mother I told her I was not lazy and I really felt tired I needed time to relax My mother agreed with me at last 5 So I think a conversation with parents or teachers or good friends is an essential way to solve the problem Besides we can listen to music after class or we can even cry or shout in the open in order to refresh ourselves 结束 短文改错短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右 边横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Although all the students seem very happily at our school as 66 far as we concerned the buildings would be more beautiful 67 if the school could be decorated We students thought the school 68 looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69 a rainy day We would be much happier and are able to study70 better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters 71 photos and paintings that could certainly broaden our horizons 72 and enrich our lives Original art work are too expensive but 73 unless we buy art posters the cost will be low Using only a 74 little money it can make our school a nicer place 6 75 参考答案 短文改错短文改错 66 happily happy 67 we 后加 are 68 thought think 69 in on 70 去 are 或 are be 71 正确 72 that which 73 work works 74 unless if 75 it we 结束 2013 高考英语 写作综合训练集 1 参考范文 发言稿篇发言稿篇 90 后出生的学生 思想特殊 行为方式和价值观令人担忧 假如你是一名 90 后出生的 学生刘林 请根据下表中所提供信息以 Do trust us a generation born in the 90s 为题 写一篇英语演讲稿 以消除人们的忧虑 90 后的境遇 面临更多的升学和就业烦恼 所处环境竞争更加激烈 人们的忧虑 1 注重自我 轻视合作 2 缺乏毅力 容易气馁 3 盲目追求 渴望成名 我们的长处 敢于挑战 请考生联系自己拟定内容 再列举两至三点 注意 1 对所给要点 逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数 150 左右 开头和结尾已经写好 不计入总词数 3 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名 参考范文 One possible version Good afternoon everyone 7 The topic of my speech today is Do trust us a generation born in the 90s Living in an environment full of fiercer competition we a generation born in the 90s are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed Under these circumstances we are developing our special manners and values which has raised people s concern They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do Besides they consider us as lacking in perseverance and this is what it takes to do any job well Without it we may easily give up in time of difficulty They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly which will in turn ruin our values and future However we a generation born in the 90s have our own advantages despite some weaknesses Firstly we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks which helps realize our dreams In addition we are quick minded and creative We can do our work more efficiently Yet we still need to learn more from those experienced Please do trust us Thank you for your listening faithfully Li Hua 文章针对 90s 后的特点 让学生写一篇演讲稿 文章素材贴近学生生活实际 他们本身 作为 90s 后所以他们感到格外亲切 有话可说 文章人称用第一 三人称 时态应用现在时 态 结束 高考英语作文精选范文 看图作文类看图作文类 2 2 根据以下图画 写一篇英语短文 描述今昔通讯方式的变化 以及这些变化给人们生活根据以下图画 写一篇英语短文 描述今昔通讯方式的变化 以及这些变化给人们生活 带来的影响 注意 带来的影响 注意 1 1 词数 词数 100100 左右左右 2 2 生词 通讯 生词 通讯 communicatecommunicate 互联网 互联网 thethe InternetInternet 8 GreatGreat changeschanges havehave takentaken placeplace inin thethe wayway ofof communicationcommunication inin people speople s lifelife InIn thethe past past peoplepeople keptkept inin touchtouch withwith eacheach otherother mainlymainly byby writingwriting lettersletters oror usingusing thethe publicpublic telephone telephone ButBut nownow almostalmost everyoneeveryone hashas hishis ownown mobilemobile phone Peoplephone People cancan communicatecommunicate withwith eacheach otherother almostalmost atat anyany placeplace andand atat anyany time time What sWhat s more more peoplepeople havehave easyeasy accessaccess toto thethe Internet Internet whichwhich enablesenables themthem toto sendsend andand receivereceive e mailse mails wheneverwhenever theythey like Withlike With thesethese changes changes people speople s pacepace ofof lifelife hashas beenbeen quickenedquickened andand people speople s workwork hashas beenbeen mademade moremore efficient efficient ItIt usedused toto taketake severalseveral daysdays toto hearhear fromfrom eacheach other other butbut nownow itit takestakes onlyonly severalseveral minutes minutes eveneven ifif theythey areare inin twotwo differentdifferent countries countries InIn a a word word peoplepeople havehave anan easiereasier lifelife nowadays nowadays 结束结束 201 重庆调研 Today is Sunday We had not lessons After breakfast1 I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me 2 He asked me to go to the cinema with he I agreed but3 I have to finish my homework first About an hour later 4 we went out In the way we saw Kate she was mending5 her bike She looked very worry Let us help you Li Lei6 and I all said All right And we stopped to help her 7 There was nothing much wrong with the bike so it cost8 us only several minutes time to finish it Kate was very 9 thankful When we hurried to the cinema the film had10 been on for ten minutes But we felt happy 答案与解析 9 1 not no 没有课 应是 have no lessons 或 don t have any lessons 2 去掉 with do 是及物动词 直接跟名词作宾语 3 he him 介词后跟代词时要用宾格 4 have had 本文是叙述过去发生的事情 5 In On 在 途中 是 on the way 6 worry worried 她看上去很着急 应该用形容词作表语 7 all both 因为只有我和李蕾两人 8 cost took 花费时间做什么 要用 It takes some time to do something 9 去掉 time 有具体的时间名词 minutes 无须再用 time 10 结束 1 据报道 几位慈善人士最近几年一直在资助五名贫困大学生 但是 这些学生从来没有 表达过他们的感激之情 所以这几位慈善人士决定停止资助 此事在社会上引起了广泛的争 论 某英文报