高一英语短文改错专练(一)

高一英语短文改错 一 Dear Elli I m a senior student I like make friends with people but I do my best to get on well everyone But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and that he didn t want to be my friend any more Now she has started to make fun of me because of I m fat I m kind to her but why can t she be friend of mine Other problem is about my weight Should I do less exercise or use pills And do you know any other way Please give me some advices Yours Mary 二 Dear Sir I am now a college student at Peking University I m quite interested in the position offering by your website for part time English reporters I think I m fit the job As a student I ve read a lot and have many knowledge in different field I m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing Besides I m easily to get along with and I enjoy working together with another Above all I once work as a reporter for my college broadcast station So I m sure I can do the job well if I will get the chance work for a website I m looking forward to your reply 三 Have you ever heard from the saying All work and no play make Jack a dull boy What this means is that if you study all the times you will become a boring person You must go out and having fun with your friends otherwise you will lose him No one wants to be friends with the person who that only works and studies Perhaps you have a confidence problem Please try remember that the work you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else You do not have to compete your classmates No one can be happier in studying seven day and seven nights a week 四 Dear Tracy Although I m 1 6 years old but my father still treats me as a careless children He doesn t value my opinions He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time I think he fails to set an example me to follow But he often says Doing as I say not as I do Even worse he points out my past mistakes to guests making me feel hurting I love my father but I can t bear what he does I have been tried many times to talk with he but he never listens Please help me 五 Every morning Steve went to work by train As he has a long trip he always buys newspaper It helps make the time passing more quickly One Tuesday morning he turned over the sports page He wanted to see the report about an important football match the night before The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station He did not know it unless he saw the sea He got on at the next station and had to wait a long time for a train to go back It was no doubt that he arrived late at the office His boss was angry when Sieve told to him why he was late Work is very important than football he shouted 六 When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for me in last year I felt very excited As we all know computers are getting more and more usefully now Much information can be stored in them We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet In past people had to do lots of work which was very dangerous Now but computers can do it instead When an exam is coming I often did some exercises on my computer Then it will correct it and tell me the right answers In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare the exam than before The computer has become my real friend 七 In 10th April this year as Li Ming was leaving his home in the morning he got into the lift together a woman When the lift got to the four floor it stopped and a middle aged man enter Once the man got in he snatched the woman shandbag He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the lift Li Ming ran downstairs When he reached for the ground floor he saw the man walked out He told the caretaker at once and they both followed thief to a restaurant nearby which they met two policemen Li Ming told them all about the case and the thief has finally caught 八 One day last week I went a walk in the country In the morning the weather was well and the sun was shining the sky was blue and there were no could Soon a cool wind started blown and black clouds were covered the sun and then it started to rain There were no houses in sight but I got very wet After a hour or so I managed to catch a bus which took me home But when I arrived I has shiveringand I knew I had caught a bad cold I must have taken my coat I had nothing to do but to stay at home and wait for a doctor 九 I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city in last week I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside Take my aunt s family for example We supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have over ten workers working for themselves Their family s income reached as much 100 000 yuan last year Nor only did they have a house a car and computers they can also afford a trip abroad every year When asking what else they needed most they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that they could do business with foreigners directly To their delighted my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade 十 Thank you for your e mail You asked me about my friends and how we like to do Well I guess I do what most people to do I like reading books watching films and listen to music My favorite sport is volley ball Most of my friend play volleyball together with me My best friend is two years elder than me She goes to a different school but we always get together after school to talk and have funs We sometimes do homework together What about yourself Tell me something about yourself your friends and what you like to do I had also like to know something about China We have read China in school and I am very interesting in learning more about it Please e mail me soon Lisa 十一 Here is a photo which I ve kept for many years Look the child in it is me Do you think it that I was very lovely Yes You see I was making face There was a hat on my head while there were no shoes on my foot I asked my mother how old I was them Mother said that I was three years old in that time Can you see the house all making of wood The house which was new then but it is very old now I was born in this old house and lived here for eighteen years I like living here because there were many friendly neighbors we get along very good with each other but it s a great pity that We will move away soon To tell a truth I really can t bear to part from them 十二 Good morning everyone Yesterday I received a letter from a elderly gentleman He told me the other day he saw that some student in our school uniform crowded onto a bus without waiting their turns On the bus they refuse to offer their seats for old people What was worse they even said dirty words to each other I am very much sorry for this Today s youth are tomorrow s old people Respect the old and caring for the young is a fine tradition of our Chinese Every one of us have the responsibility to keep it up I hope that you can learn something this incident and you will have good manners whether you are inside or outside the school Thank you 十三 Henry Royce did not like his car that ran badly and often broke up So he decided to make better car himself but in 1904 he produced his first new model Charles Rolls a car maker was very interesting in Royce s car and soon Rolls and Royce go into business together One of their first model was the Silver Ghost In 1907 a Silver Ghost broke the world s record by drive 14 371 miles without breaking down once After the drive it was cost just over 2 to put the car back into perfect condition This is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded the best car in the world 十四 How much times do you spend with your parents When did you last tell them what is on your mind You parents are your dearest people in the world when you are young And they always care of you deep But even though many children still love their mum and dad families may become more close as you get older The end of the year is a time for families to get together Have you ever thought what you can show your parents that you love them Find chance and do something for them or to have a sincere talk withthem If you can do this your parents will be very happy 十五 Practice makes perfect was an old saying It tells us that it does not any matter if we are slow at doing something As long as we keep on trying and practice we ll do a good job in the end The saying is especial useful in English study Since a student is poor at speaking he should grasp every chance to open mouth and speak English His oral English may be excellent one day due to his hard works Not only is the saying useful in English study it is also helpful in our day life To an extent it is no short cut in doing everything since key to success lies in Practice makes perfect 十六 At a Friday night a poor young artist stood at the gate of the subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on the ground Before long he was surrounding with people who were all attracted by the word on that paper It said last night a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken Please come to claim it soon Seeing this people wondered why it could be After about half an hour a man came and brought back his lottery which won a prize of 500 000 Late someone asked the violinist Why don t you take the lottery ticket for yourself He said While I don t have much money I live happily However I lose honesty I won t be happy forever 十七 A few months after returning the US from Germany I took part in a college course in French Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language At the first class the teacher asked us do a pronunciation exercise in which he would say one word or two in French and each student would do their best to copy When he got to me he kept having me to say more words and I finally asked him why I find it great funs It s the first time I ve heard an American speak French with a German accent he explained it 十八 One day I happen to find a chatting room on my QQ there people were chatting in English I tried to chat with some of them To my surprised I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions With time went by I found that I could even communicate some college students freely 十九 While traveled to Paris on a bus I became very sick A well dressing man on the bus helped me great He took me off the bus found out where the doctor s office and took me to there himself The next day he came to visit me I didn t speak French well so I can t talk with him very much However even if we couldn t talk but we could communicate I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness and he communicated his concern for my healthy Through this experience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all 二十 The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life On the net we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as well We can also make phone calls send messages by e mail go to net schools learn foreign languages by ourselves Beside we can enjoy music watch sports matches and play the chess or cards The net even help us do shopping make a chat with others and make friends with them In word the Internet has made our life more easier 二十一 During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life I generally travel by train and bus It is both cheaper and safe But this was a short journey In the beginning I did not feel very happily but this feeling did not last longer The journey was very exciting I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud The views of mountains fields and rivers were interested I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much This experience have shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys 二十二 I went to see the film after supper On my way to the cinema I met an English woman whom had lost her way I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel While go there I told her about great changes that had been taken place here in the past few years and she had told me something about her country Although I missed the film but I still felt very happy for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practiced my speaking English If I had not worked hard on English I would not have been able to help him 二十三 One day I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings I went to answer it immediately She was my close friend Lisa When we were talking on a phone the fire alarm sounded I ran back to the kitchen The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt I quickly turned off the gas opening all the windows and then went out of the house In my surprise two fire engines were outside my house I am rather worried I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke 二十四 I received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday All of o