河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达（10）

1 河南省信阳市第四高级中学河南省信阳市第四高级中学 20142014 届高考英语专题训练 届高考英语专题训练 短文短文 改错 书面表达 改错 书面表达 1010 201 郑州质检 We all know that healthy is very important to us Both1 study and work depend by strong bodies Doing sports2 and games helps us keep strong and healthy If we do not3 take any exercise we may feel tired but get sick easily 4 There s many different kinds of sports we can do them 5 such as playing ball games running walking and swim 6 However now we have too much homework to do in7 every day We hope that we ll be giving less homework8 and have more time take part in sports We also hope9 that our school can hold a sports meeting every term 10 答案与解析 1 healthy health 这里是句子的主语 因此用名词形式 2 by on upon depend on upon 是固定搭配 3 help helps 这句话的主语是动名词短语 doing sports and games 动名词短语 作主语表示一件事时 谓语动词用第三人称单数形式 4 but and feel tired 和 get sick 是并列关系 不表示转折 因此将 but 改为 and 5 去掉 them 这是一个定语从句 从句中作动词 do 的宾语的关系代词 that 或 which 被省略了 因此 them 是多余的 6 swim swimming 应用动名词与前面的 running walking 并列 故应用 swimming 7 去掉 in every day 可以单独作状语 前面不需要加介词 2 8 giving given 这里是被动语态 因此用过去分词 9 take 前加 to 此处考查的是 have time to do sth 的结构 10 结束 高考英语书面表达讲义 要点作文 2 2525 min min 写作要点 1 表明自己的看法 2 陈述自己的理由 可举例说明 3 提出至少两条建议 写作要求 1 短文字数不少于 120 不含已写好的部分 2 内容充实 结构完整 语意连贯 3 书写须清晰 工整 3 参考范文 OneOne possiblepossible versionversion Hi WolfDad What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission health and life attitude should never be ignored There are many examples around us Some all A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities Furthermore punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically So I suggest that you take your friends advice More importantly let him live like a lovely boy let him have more friends and social activities and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do Yours Li Hua 结束 4 重庆南开中学 第一节 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 请对标有题号的每一行作出判断 每行只有一个错误 按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线 划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 If you park your car in a wrong place traffic 76 policeman will soon find it You will be very unlucky 77 if he lets me go without a ticket But this does not 78 always happen Traffic police is sometimes very 79 polite During a holiday in Sweden I find this 80 note in my car Sir we welcome you to our city 81 This is a No Parking area You will enjoy you your 82 stay here whether you pay attention to our street signs 83 This note is simple a reminder If you receive a 84 request like this you can fail to obey it 85 改错 76 traffic 前加 a 77 unlucky lucky 78 me you 79 is are 80 find found 81 in on 82 去掉 you 83 whether if 84 simple simply 85 can can t can 后加 not 或 never 结束 表格提示类表格提示类 2 2 去年 上海复旦大学开始通过面试自主招收学生 今年又有一些学校加入到这一行列 去年 上海复旦大学开始通过面试自主招收学生 今年又有一些学校加入到这一行列 这一新的招生方式在学生中引发了一场讨论 假如你是李华 请根据下表提供的内容给二十这一新的招生方式在学生中引发了一场讨论 假如你是李华 请根据下表提供的内容给二十 5 一世纪报编辑写一封信反映讨论情况 一世纪报编辑写一封信反映讨论情况 注意 注意 1 1 开头已为你写好 不计人总词数 开头已为你写好 不计人总词数 2 2 词数 词数 100100 左右左右 3 3 参考词汇 参考词汇 comprehensivecomprehensive 综合的 综合的 subjectivesubjective 主观的 主观的 one sidedone sided 片面的 片面的 evaluateevaluate 评评 价价 DearDear Editor Editor Recently Recently a a discussiondiscussion hashas beenbeen heldheld inin ourour schoolschool onon whetherwhether itit isis reasonablereasonable forfor thethe universitiesuniversities toto admitadmit studentsstudents throughthrough interviews interviews TheThe resultsresults areare asas follows follows 60 60 ofof thethe studentsstudents supportsupport thisthis action action TheyThey expressexpress thatthat interviewsinterviews cancan evaluateevaluate a a studentstudent inin a a moremore thoroughthorough andand comprehensivecomprehensive way way ItIt cancan encourageencourage studentsstudents toto developdevelop theirtheir ownown interestsinterests andand personalities personalities What sWhat s more more withwith thethe developmentdevelopment ofof society society a a moremore openopen andand efficientefficient wayway toto testtest a a student sstudent s abilitiesabilities isis needed needed OnOn thethe otherother hand hand thethe otherother 40 40 studentsstudents areare againstagainst thisthis idea idea TheyThey argueargue thatthat first first interviewsinterviews maymay bebe subjectivesubjective andand one sided one sided whichwhich couldcould leadlead toto unfairness unfairness Second Second notnot allall studentsstudents areare goodgood atat showingshowing theirtheir talentstalents inin interviews interviews LastLast butbut notnot least least a a studentstudent can tcan t bebe judgedjudged inin onlyonly threethree oror fivefive minutes minutes 结束结束 广东卷 写作 共两节 满分 40 分 第一节 基础写作 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道 基本信息 书名 Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 作者 Amy Chua 美籍华人 耶鲁 大学教授 出版时间 2010 年 内容 作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事 效应 引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道 中文版 2011 年初开始在中国销售 意外反应 多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 最新消息 17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛 和耶鲁录取 60 60 的学生赞成的学生赞成40 40 的学生反对的学生反对 1 1 面试可以全面综合地评价一个学生 面试可以全面综合地评价一个学生 2 2 鼓励学生发展个性和特长 鼓励学生发展个性和特长 3 3 社会需要一种更加开放和有效的录取方式 社会需要一种更加开放和有效的录取方式 1 1 面试带有主观性 片面性 可能不公正 面试带有主观性 片面性 可能不公正 2 2 并非所有学生都擅于在面试中展示自己 并非所有学生都擅于在面试中展示自己 3 3 不可能在不可能在 3 53 5 分钟内评价一个人 分钟内评价一个人 6 耶鲁 Yale 哈佛 Harvard 写作内容 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍 内容包括 1 图书的基本信息 2 图书的相关报道 写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章连贯 2011 年广东省高考英语基础写作是一篇说明文 让考生对 Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 这本书进行介绍 今年的基础写作题材较新 有些考生可能不知道虎妈教育孩子的事 情 但不影响本文写作 考生只把它当作一本图书介绍即可 试题详细地给出了内容要点 为控制性写作 在文章结构方面 一定要紧扣考题已给出的 写作提示 1 图书的基本信息 2 图书的相关报道 要写好此文 考生需要注意四点 一 要认真审题 确定体裁 人称和时态等 二 要运用适当的句型 合理地组织文字 三 切 忌照译 要适当地增加细节 恰当地使用连接过渡词 以使行文连贯 四 在句型方面 为 了用五个句子表达全部内容 复合句的使用依然是考查的重点 结束 高考英语作文 经典好句 7 二 中间段落句 二 中间段落句 1 相反 有一些人赞成 他们相信 而且 他们认为 On the contrary there are some people in favor of At the same time they say 2 但是 我认为这不是解决 的好方法 比如 最糟糕的是 But I don t think it is a very good way to solve For example Worst of all 3 对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的 也是 非常重要的 首先 而 且 最重要的是 is necessary and important to our countries development and construction First What s more Most important of all 4 有几个可供我们采纳的方法 首先 我们可以 There are several measures for us to adopt First we can 5 面临 我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来 一方面 另一方面 Confronted with we should take a series of effective measures to For one thing For another 6 早就应该拿出行动了 比如说 另外 所有这些方法肯定会 It is high time that something was done about it For example In addition All these measures will certainly 7 为什么 第一个原因是 第二个原因是 第三个原因是 总的来说 的主要原因是由于 Why The first reason is that The second reason is The third is For all this the main cause of due to 8 然而 正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样 也有它的不利的一面 象 However just like everything has both its good and bad sides also has its own disadvantages such as 9 尽管如此 我相信 更有利 Nonetheless I believe that is more advantageous 10 完全同意 这种观点 陈述 主要理由如下 I fully agree with the statement that because 结束 8 passage Mary was an university student She didn t have much1 money and her parents were not rich and she had an uncle2 who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth 3 He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents 4 When her uncle s birthday came round Mary wanted buy him 5 something really special but because she was rich she did not 6 know how to get him She went into the best shop in her7 town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful 8 shop assistants Finally she asked What do you have for9 someone who has already got everything he wants or needs 10 The assistant sighed deeply and answered Envy only envy 参考答案 Key 13 1 an a 2 and but 3 fortunately fortunate 4 give gave 2 5to buy 6 she he 7how what8the helpful 3 9 assistant assistants 10 right 结束 结束 20 万元会使中国令世人瞩目 中国运动员创造了新的奥运会金牌纪录 获金牌的运动员除 了得到政府奖金 20 万元以外 还会从地方得到更多的奖励 对此 社会各界反响不一 赞成不赞成 1 运动员为国争了光 2 运动员付出了许多辛苦和汗水 3 奖金有利于中国体育后备力量的培养 1 运动员是国家培养出来的 为国争光理所当然 2 得到大量奖金后 有些队员不会退役 3 一些企业趁机炒作 从中获取广告效应 请你就此现象进行简单阐述 并提出自己的一些看法或建议 120 词左右 提示词汇 奖金 bonus 9 结束 作文 Pasasage14 As the world enters the 21st century the development in the 1 science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and 2 chance we ve never imagined before People are hoping have 3 a peacefully and highly developed