四级写作教案(二)

四级写作教案 第二课 四级写作教案 第二课 分类法有时候可以很快帮我们产出内容 分类要明确对象和标准 比如电视机的优缺点 可以以人为对象 年龄为标准 分成老年人 中年人和少儿 再比如计算机的优缺点 可以以人为对象 职业或身份为标准 分成学生 老 师 工程师等 句法和句型 写出最基本的正确的句子你就可以拿到8 11 分的档 What is the most important factor of a sentence for the first step Correct Right or Wrong He has three sons most of them are middle school students 五大简单句基本句型 主 谓 主 谓 宾 主 谓 宾 补 主 谓 宾 宾 主 系 表 如何在正确写出短句的基础上把句子加长 方法一 写并列句 compound sentence 并列句 两个或者两个以上的简单句通过连词连接起来的句子 方法二 写复合句 complex sentence 三种针对上文错句的改法 He has three sons Most of them are middle school students He has three sons and most of them are middle school students He has three sons most of whom are middle school students 复合句的概念引入 定语从句 状语从句 名词性从句 主语从句宾语从句表语从句同位语从句 X 语从句即为句子做X 语 句子做主语 主语从句 你所说的非常重要 is very important What you said is very important 句子做表语 表语从句 你所说的正是我想要知道的 What you said is what I wanted 1 他们为什么离开家乡去云南 is still a secret Why they left their hometown for Yunnan 2 这么做是故意的 became obvious That this was done on purpose 3 It is none of your business 玛丽与谁订婚 whom Mary is engaged to 4 Finally the workers got an answer 政府做不了什么事 来提高他们工资 that the Government could do nothing to raise their wages 强调句和倒装句的写法 It is was 被强调的部分 that who 原句其它部分 Tom met me on the street the day before yesterday 强调Tom It was Tom who met me on the street the day before yesterday 强调时间 It was the day before yesterday that Tom met me on the street 强调地点 It was on the street that Tom met me the day before yesterday 正是Jefferson 写下了 the Declaration of Independence It was Jefferson who wrote 正是因为水涨了 we could not cross the river It was because the water had risen that 人们听见正是Jim 这个无情的家伙 shouting at his mother in the dead of night It was Jim the heartless fellow who was heard When you badly twist your ankle on the playground your friends will send you to the hospital nearby give your parents a call immediately and take care of you without any complaint It is your friends who will send you to the hospital nearby give your parents a call immediately and take care of you without any complaint when you badly twist your ankle on the playground When you fail in an very important exam your friend will not only help you pass the exam successfully but also stand right beside you and encourage you When your parents are in a quarrel your friend will do whatever he can to help comfort you and tell you that no matter what happens he will support you firmly and constantly 句式训练 倒装句 必杀 总结 Only 句首状语 Only then 那个医生才意识到他的病人需要手术 did the doctor realize that his patient needed surgery Only when you adjust down your price 我们才能做成这笔 买卖 can we conclude the business Only under special circumstance such as wedding or celebrations do we drink wine 总结 否定副词位于句首 No sooner had Anne arrived 就生病了 than she fell ill Scarcely had she fallen asleep 一阵敲门声就把她吵醒 when a knock at the door awakened her 推荐句型 A small city does not have as much excitement as a big city in general 改 Seldom hardly scarcely does a small town have as much excitement as a big city A new factory would contaminate the living space of most of our city sinhabitants to some degree 改 Seldom can a factory be established without contaminating the living space of our city s inhabitants to some degree 二大句式改变 一 more and more 1 More and more people who become more and more fortunate can afford a car 替换 growing number of increasingly The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a car 2 More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy 替换 改换句式 There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy 3 More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years 替换 on the rise Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years 二 I People We People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious foods 改 All kinds of nutritious or organic foods are increasingly demanded throughout the country People should realize the dreadful consequences of taking up the smoking habit 改 Real