2011版考研英语写作160篇的范文

2011 版考研英语写作 160 篇的范文 txt 一人行 必会发情二人行 必会激情 三人行 必有奸情就不会被珍惜 真实的女孩不完美 完美的女孩不真实 得之坦然 失之淡然 顺其自然 争其必然 1 毅力与恒心 Directions Write an essay of 160 200 words based on the following drawing In your essay you should 1 describe the drawing briefly 2 explain its intended meaning and then 3 give your comments You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2 20 points 背诵范文及高分语言和结构点评 As we can see from the picture a disabled young man is making efforts to climb a hill By the sweats all over his face we may deduce that he may have a hard time before But with his austere perseverance he is close to his destination the top of the hill However the meaning of the picture goes beyond mountain climbing Rather it proves that perseverance is a great element of success those who persevere will win in the long run because their silent power grows irresistibly greater with time According to recent studies the quality many successful people share is persistence They are willing to spend more time accomplishing a task and to persevere in the face of many difficult odds Helen Keller is a proof that great things can happen to everyone even though he or she may be handicapped if he or she works hard and never gives up Helen was born blind and deaf However throughout all her life she never lost her heart Instead she kept on learning how to read and write and later became a very famous writer Whether you are strong or weak you must keep fighting to succeed No matter who you are or what your position is you must keep fighting for what you want to achieve Permanence perseverance and persistence in spite of all obstacles discouragements and impossibilities it is this that in all things distinguishes the strong soul from the weak 坚持 的不同表示 persist 和 persevere 学习本文 应注意掌握 坚持 的相关单词的使用方法 在表示坚持做某事时 persist 后 加 in doing sth 而 persevere 的形式为 persevere to do sth 文中表示 残疾 的单词有 disabled 和 handicapped disabled 主要是指肢体上的残疾而丧失某种能力 handicapped 则表示生理上的缺陷和智力 上 的不健全 在日常写作练习中应注意辨别其正确的用法 表示某人天生就 的短语 sb be born adj 文中的用法为 Helen was born blind and deaf 这个句子还可以说成 Helen was a born blind and deaf person 此时 born 为形容词 应学会区分其不同点 No matter who when where what how 的用法表示无论谁何时何处 什么 怎么等 例 如 Don trust him no matter what he says 无论他说什么 都别相信 文中最后一句是个强调句型 It s that 句中的 in all things 还可以说成 among other things 表示在所有的 当中 范文精译 我们从这幅画可以看到 一位残疾人正在奋力登山 从他脸上的汗可以得知他前面的艰 辛 但是因为他坚持不懈 不屈不挠的精神 他快到目的地 山顶了 但是这幅画的意思超越了爬山 应该这样说 不屈不挠是迈向成功的重要因素 从长 远看 那些坚持不懈的人会成功 因为随着时间的推移 这种沉默的力量变得越来越大 挡 都挡不住 根据最近的研究表明 许多成功人士共有的一种品质就是坚持不懈 他们愿意花 更多的时间成就一件事并且面对很多困难都坚持下来 海伦 凯勒就是例证 如果努力工 作永不言弃 每个人都可以成就伟大的事业 即使他们有残疾 海伦生下时双目失明 而且 还听不见 但是她的一生从来没有丧失信心 相反 她一直学习阅读 写作 后来成为非常 著名的作家 不管你是强是弱 你必须不断奋斗才能成功 不管你是谁 处境如何 你都必须为你 的目标不断奋斗 尽管存在各种障碍 挫折与绝境 有时让人气馁 有时让人放弃 但是只 有强者才能够持之以恒 坚持不懈 永不退却 而这是弱者无法做到的 语言注释 disable v 使无能 使残废 deduce v 推断 austere a 严格的 严厉的 perseverance n 坚定 不屈不挠 destination n 目的地 persevere v 忍耐 熬住 irresistibly ad 不可抗拒地 odds n 不和 相争 handicap n 妨碍 使不利 11 permanence n 持久 永久 12 persistence n 坚持不懈 13 distinguish v 区分 辨别 高分佳句 No matter who you are or what your position is you must keep fighting for what you want to achieve 不管你是谁 处境如何 你都必须为你的目标不懈地奋斗 Permanence perseverance and persistence in spite of all obstacles discouragements and impossibilities it is this that in all things distinguishes the strong soul from the weak 尽管存在 各种障碍 挫折与绝境 有时让人气馁 有时让人放弃 但是只有强者才能够持之以恒 坚 持不懈 永不退却 这是弱者无法做到的 写作思路 写作提示语中有三个要求 因此写作应该围绕这三个要求展开 第一段 描绘漫画的内容 重点说明登山需要毅力和恒心 第二段 展开图画的寓意 不仅登山需要毅力 生活事业要 获得成功 也需要毅力 接着文章以美国作家海伦为例说明毅力和成功的关系 最后一段 作者发表评论 作者首先通过模仿英语名言 Whether you are a lion or a goat you must sprint to survive 不管你是狮子还是山羊 你要生存就必须会快跑 改写 Whether you are strong or weak you must keep fighting to succeed 不管你是强壮还是软弱 你必须不断奋 斗才能 成功 2 爱心捐赠 Directions Write an essay of 160 200 words based on the following drawing In your essay you should 1 describe the drawing briefly 2 explain its intended meaning and then 3 give your comments You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2 20 points 背诵范文及高分语言和结构点评 As is shown in the picture on a cold snowy day a donation box from a charity is beginning to thaw the snow and ice around it It is not difficult to find the symbolic meaning of the picture nowadays donation can play an important role in disaster relief and in helping the poor and the disabled The picture reminds us of the fact that in the recent earthquake in Sichuan China people at home and abroad donated a large sum of money to the quake victims As we know the strong quake flattened tens of thousands of houses and other buildings It is reported that a sizable majority of people in the devastated zones lost their homes and property Many people were buried in the rubbles and lost their lives However the donations help them pick up the pieces and give them composure confidence and courage to live on The value of life lies not only in devotion but also in donation So what counts most in life is what we do for others Contributing money and other necessities to people who are in great need reflects individuals sense of social responsibility It also generates a feeling that is beyond words and is difficult to obtain no matter how rich one is Therefore I strongly advocate that everybody offers a hand to others Only with our love and contribution I am sure would our society become more beautiful and more harmonious it 作形式主语 真正的主语是不定式短语 to find 冒号的使用 则引出具体的同位 语 成分 同位语中动句词 helping 和名词短语 disaster relief 并列 共同作固定搭配 play an impontant role in sth 中介词 in 的宾语 其中 the poor 和 the disabled 是构成表示一 类人的特殊 用法 即 the 形容词 类似的有 the old the young 固定搭配 remind sb of sth 使某人想起类似或相关的事 可用于引出具体事例 其 中 that 引导同位语说明 fact 关于 大量 很多 的表达 文中用 a large sum of 其他表达为 a large great number of 尽量避免使用 much many 等简单词汇 It is reported that 为固定句型 也可转化为短语表达 according to reports 使 句式更加 灵活 a sizable majority 替代了简单词汇 most 综合体现了考生的语言功底 习语表达 pick up the pieces 指在受挫后的恢复和改进 在文中就具体事例来说则指 恢复 自信 重新站起来 考生一般想到最直接的表达可能是 stand up again 而句中习语的运 用则 给评阅老师留下一个很好的印象 特色在于主语和表语均使用 what 引导的从句 因而使得句子简炼 前后工整对仗 这 点值得考生模仿学习 动名词短语 contributing 作主语 其中 who 引导定语从句修饰 people 这两点主要 体 现了句式结构的多样化 是评阅老师的关注点之一 句首状语由 only with 引导的介词词组构成 因此谓语需局部倒装 助动词 would 提至 主语之前 考生一般只了解 only 为首的句子需倒装 但如何做到局部或全部倒装 还不清 楚 此处的局部倒装则要求考生在基本语法上避免出错 范文精译 这幅漫画表现的是 在寒冷的雪天 赈灾捐款箱融化了周围的冰雪 我们不难发现画的象征 意义 目前捐赠在赈灾 帮助穷人和残疾人方面起到了重要的作用 这幅画让我们想起在中国四川最近发生的地震灾难中 国内外人士捐献了巨资帮助灾区人 民 我们知道 强烈的地震毁掉了成千上万所房子和其他建筑物 据报道 绝大多数的受灾 人民失去了他们的家园和财产 许多人被埋在大石头下面失去了宝贵的生命 但是 捐赠帮 助受灾人民重新站起来 帮助他们镇静 自信 勇敢地活