2007年广东高考英语作文及答案

2007 年广东高考英语作文及答案 写作 共两节 满分 40 分 第一节 基础写作 共 1 小 题 满分 15 分 上周 我们以 谁是你的偶像 为题 在 2600 名学生中进行了一次调查 survey 以下是调查数据 偶像 idol 女生 男生 伟 人 18 18 父 母 25 11 影视明星 50 14 体育明星 6 48 没有偶像 1 9 写作内容 根据以上数据 写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 调查时间 调查问题以及调查对象 2 男女生 在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生 在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 5 你的偶像及理由 写作要求 1 只能使用 5 个 句子表达全部内容 2 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 句子结 构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 参考答案 Version1 Last week we did a survey among 2 600 students on Who Is Your Idol The survey shows that half of the girls choose take regard film and TV stars as their idols while 48 of the boys favor are in favor of have a preference for are fond of sports stars As date shows parents ranks the second for the girls but the fourth for the boys However the percentage of the boys choosing great figures is the same as that of the girls Of which the percentage is 18 As for Great figures the percentage of boys and girls are equal As for 可多个替换 myself Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life Version2 Last week we did a survey among 2600 students on who is your idol Among the students interviewed 50 of the girls take film stars as their idols while 48 of the boys prefer sports stars Parents ranks the second for the girls but the fourth for the boys However the same percentage of boys and girls 18 think their parents are their choice As for me Bill Gates is my idol because I want to earn a lot of money to make our country more powerful 注意事项 1 注意信息处理 不可把所有的数据都盲目地写出 2 一般从最多 最少 或排名角度 出发来写 信息处理的结果 上周 我们以 谁是你的偶像 为题 在 2600 名学生中进 行了一次调查 survey 词汇积累 进行调查 Make have do a survey investigation about on sth among 对象 成句 Last week we did a survey on Who Is Your Idol among 2600 students on Who Is Your Idol 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 影视明星 50 14 体育明星 6 48 信息处理 50 女同学喜欢影视明星 48 男同学喜欢体育明星 词汇积累 喜欢 like be fond of prefer have preference for favour be in favour of sb s favorite is of which the percentage is what sb like love most is of which the percentage is 选 择 最为偶像 take choose as their idol Regard as their idol 然而 while 成句 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols while 48 of the boys favor sports stars 句子衔接 The survey shows us According to the survey data result What the survey shows us is that 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序 差异 偶像 idol 女生 排名 男生 排名 伟 人 18 18 2 父 母 25 2 11 4 影视明星 50 14 3 体育明星 6 48 1 没有偶像 1 9 词汇积累 排名 rank 成句 As date shows parents ranks the second for the girls but ranks the fourth for the boys 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 伟 人 18 18 信息处理 男女同学以伟人为偶像的数值是一致的 词汇积累 数据一致 百分比一致 As for the number percentage of boys and girls are equal the same The percentage of A choosing is the same as that of B 成句 However the percentage of the boys choosing great figures is the same as that of the girls 5 你的偶像及理由 在我看来 我认为 In my opinion view point of view As for me myself As far as I am concerned 第二节 读写任务 共 l 小题 满分 25 分 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 Dear Ari As you sleep in my arms I m amazed at how light you feel I stare at your tinybody so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society That s why your mommy and I have named you Ari which means lion It s our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others Before you came into the world we had spent months imagining what you d be like Would you be a boy or a girl Would you look like Mommy Daddy or your elder brothers Anyway we would find out soon Finally your mother s labor came And several hours later we met the first time I held you high up in the air I then was able to cut your umbilical cord 脐带 and put you in your mother s arms She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face And here we are tonight As I hold you close you sleep so peacefully I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength I am listening to the first beats of a lion s heart Welcome to the world Ari Love Daddy 写作内容 假设你就是信中的 Ari 父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信 今天是 父亲 50 岁生日 你准备以写信的方式 祝贺他的生日 以下是信的内容 信的开头和结尾 已经为你写好 1 以约 30 个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望 2 以约 120 个词表达你 对父亲的感恩 并包括如下要点 1 读信后的感受 2 以你自己成长的经历说明你的感 受 3 表达你对父亲的感激和祝福 写作要求 1 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚 构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子 2 信中不能 出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 2008 年广东高考英语作文及答案 写作 共两节 满分 40 分 第一节 基础写作 共 1 小 题 满分 15 分 你很荣幸地成为 2008 北京奥运会的一名志愿者 负责编写奥运比赛 项目的英语介绍 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲 编写射击项目的英语介绍 背景 射击最初只是生存工具 19 世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动 1896 第一次成为奥运项 目 1904 中断 1928 中断 1932 重回奥运会 1968 第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状 稳步发展 1896 奥运会只有三项射击项目 现今有 17 项 写作要求 只能使 用 5 个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 参考答案 基础写作 写作指导 今年的基础写作命题切中社会热点 奥运 具有强烈 的时代感 题目提供的写作内容的排序已成逻辑 不需考生重新安排 写作的难点主要体 现在写作内容的组合方式和词句的选择上 其中 1904 年中断和 1928 年中断 两条含有 相同内容的信息的意义表达是张显考生思维能力和语言水平考点 考生应采取措施避免表 达的重复 而 背景 与 现状 两方面内容的表达则能体现考生使用复合句的功力 范文 Version 1 Shooting originated as a means of survival developed into a sport only in the late 19th century The sport first appeared in 1896 but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932 Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968 The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympics and now there are seventeen vents in all Version2 It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting originated as a means of survival earned its status as a sport Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896 Yet twice in history 1904 1928 shooting was suspended at the Olympics It returned to the Games in 1932 and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968 The sport has been growing steadily from 1896 s three events to today s seventeen 第二节 读写任务 共 1 小题 满分 25 分 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 Hi I am Mike I just went through my first year of college The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment 1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills such as balancing a check book laundry and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life I loved it good facilities helpful instructors and a good library The Students Union organizes various parties every week I also go to cinemas and concerts and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground 写作内容 学校最近组织了一次中美学生 交流活动 你参加其中的 大学校园生活 讨论 听完 Mike 的发言之后 你准备写一份 发言稿 题目是 Preparing Myself for College Life 内容要点包括 1 以约 30 个词概 括 Mike 的发言要点 2 然后以约 120 个词谈谈你理想的大学生活 内容包括 1 对 中学生活的感受 2 理想的大学生活 3 中学生活和大学生活的差别 以及你打 算如何适应 写作要求 1 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事 也可以参 照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 参考答案 写作指导 Preparing Myself for College Life 这个题目贴近考生的生活 引导材料清楚 考生不易 跑题 写作内容的弹性很大 考生有尽情发挥的空间 写作内容符合考生的思维水平和语 言表达水平 整体难度不大 但审题时有几个易错的点 可能会对部分考生造成影响 首先是文体方面 题目要求写一份发言稿 这就对写作的格式和语气有特定的要求 其次 是人称方面 应该写自己的感受和打算 而非所有学生的情况 最后是时态方面 写作的 基调时态从过去时向现在时和将来时转移 需要考生有扎实的时态知识和较好的语篇能力 2009 年广东高考英语作文及答案 写作 共两节 满分 40 分 第一节 基础写作 共 1 小题 满分 15 分 你是校报小记者 最近进行了一次采访 以下是这次采访的情 况 时间 上周末 对象 眼科医生 eye doctor 王教授 主题 我国中小学生近视 short sightedness 问题 基本信息 1 发生率 略高于 50 2 人数 世界第一 专家解读 1 原因 很复杂 2 治疗 没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 3 建议 不要过度用眼 多参加户外活动 4 特别提示 如何握笔也和近视有关 写作内容 根据以上情况写一 篇采访报道 并包括如下内容 1 采访的时间 对象和主题 2 中小学生近视的发生率 及人数 3 专家解读 写作要求 只能使用 5 个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句 子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 参考答案 Last weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang an eye doctor about the issue of short sightedness of the school children in China According to Professor Wang slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short sighted which ranks the first in the world He also pointed that the causes for short sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short sightedness So he suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short sightedness 评析 一 作文话题从 学生实际生活中采点 今年基础写要求学生用 5 句话写一篇关于中小学学生近视眼的校报 采访报道 这个话题真正的做到 话题来源于学生实际生活 近视眼是每个校园所必不可 少的现象 是学生校园生活得隐形热点 因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说 二 作文话题选材贴近新课程标准理念 作文话题在引用了医生建议的同时也在暗地里给 考生提示该如何保护眼睛 单从这一点来讲 今年的基础写作题目成功的做到了 时刻关 注每一个学生的健康成长 成功的把新课程标准理念注入到学生的考卷中 三 作文的 话题具有极高的深思熟虑性 考试的作文话题只有保证每一个考生都熟悉才能真正的做到命 题的公平合理性 今年的作文话题从每一所学校学生的实际生活中采点 彻底的革除了城 乡考生因对某一个话题了解程度的不同而导致的不合理性 这也说明今年基础写作题目的 命题人经过了多方面的深思熟虑 第二节 读写任务 共 1 小题 满分 25 分 阅读下 面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala 考拉 at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off That s right sleep it off The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal which is understandable How would you react my friend if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you 考拉即树袋熊 178words 写作内容 1 以约 30 个词概括这 段短文的内容 2 然后以约 120 个词就 该不该禁止游客和动物拍照 进行议论 内容 包括 1 人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照 2 假如你处在那些动物的 处境 你会有什么反应 3 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照 写作要求 1 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 参考答案 The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals while others may consider it just sort of fun to have But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed No having peaceful surroundings to sleep don t you suffer restless and fidgets No doubt we do and so do the animals I think it necessary to ban tourists taking pictures with animals making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends so as to found harmonious relations with animals 评析 主要有以下特点 一 在 考察学生基础知识的同时也在培养学生价值观的形成 今年的读写任务让学生就 该不该禁 止游客和动物拍照 展开议论 议论文的写作有助于培养学生正确的价值观 纠正不正确 的价值观 今年的读写任务暗中旨在培养学生保护野生动物的观念 把多一点的空间还给 动物的观念 与动物和谐共存的观念 二 阅读材料具有很强的倾向性 通过浏览读写任 务的阅读材料 我们可以感觉到文章运用了一种抱怨的写作方式 即抱怨游客过频繁的与 动物园里的动物进行拍照从而影响到动物的正常生活 而读写任务的写作要求 又让学生就 该不该禁止游客和动物拍照 展开议论 因此如果考生从 应该禁止游客和 动物拍照 这一观点入手的话就迎合了阅读材料 同时也能够受到改卷老师的青睐 据了 解 绝大多数考生都从 应该禁止游客和动物拍照 这一观点入手 2010 年广东高考英 语作文及答案 写作 共两节 满分 40 分 第一节 基础写作 共 1 小题 满分 15 分 以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容 内 容 公共场所禁烟 实施 时间 2011 年 1 月 1 日起 实施范围 全国 目 标 所有室内公共场所无烟 措 施 张贴禁烟标志 相关数据 1 吸烟人数 约 3 5 亿 2 分 布 男性 75 女性 25 3 受二手烟影响人数 约 5 4 亿 4 因二手烟死亡人数 超过 10 万 年 二手 烟 second hand smoke 写作内容 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯 内容包 括 1 禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围 2 目标和措施 3 相关数据 写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连 贯 参考答案 My country begines to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st 2011 The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking There are 350 million people smoking recently in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent Because of these smokers about 540 million non smokers are influenced More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke 第二节 读写任务 共 1 小题 满分 25 分 阅读下面 的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 In junior high school one of my classmates Eithan was addicted to TV This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who s the Boss Then one day Ethan s mother made him an after in order to draw him back to his school subiects She promised that she would give him 200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV None of us thought Ethan could do it but he did quit TV His mom paid him 200 He went out and bought a TV the biggest he could find In recent years hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades All school kids admire this trend But it upsets adults Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will Psychologists warn that money can actually make lies perform worse by making the act of learning cheap The debate has become a typical hattle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should be despite decades of reforms and budget increases 写作内容 1 以约 30 词概括上文的主要内容 2 以约 120 词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论 内容包括 1 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法 2 你的父母 或其他亲人 是如 何鼓励你学习的 3 你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习 写作要求 1 作文中可 以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不得直接引用原文中的句 子 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内 容合适 语篇连贯 参考答案 The passage is mainly about parents give money to their children so that they can show up or get good grades recently by the way of taking the example of Ethan and his mother 2011 年广东高考英语作文及答 案 写作 共两节 满分 40 分 第一节 基础写作 共 1 小题 满分 15 分 以下是一 本图书的基本信息及相关报道 基本信息 1 书名 Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 2 作者 Amy Chuo 美籍华人 耶鲁 大学教授 3 出版时间 2010 年 4 内容 作者用中国传统教育方式教育两个女的故事 5 效应 引发了中美教育方 式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道 1 中文版 2011 年初开始在中国销售 2 意外反应 多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 3 最新消息 17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛 和耶鲁录取 耶鲁 Yale 哈佛 Harvard 写作内容 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍 内容包括 1 图书的基本信息 2 图书的相关报道 写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内 容 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章连贯 写作指导 本题材 料所给的信息较多 要求又比较严格 只要五句话包含所有信息 因此要先注意审题 分 清内容要点 并注意对要点的编排 恰当地使用好主从复合句 独立结构 并列结构等较 复杂的句式 但要注意的是句子结构的完整 切忌使用 半句话 或 言之无物 要 点解析 2011 年广东省高考英语基础写作是一篇说明文 让考生对 虎妈战歌 Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 这本书进行介绍 今年的基础写作题材较新 有些考生可能 不知道虎妈教育孩子的事情 但不影响本文写作 考生只把它当作一本图书介绍即可 试题详细地给出了内容要点 为控制性写作 在文章结构方面 一定要紧扣考题已给出的 写作提示 1 图书的基本信息 2 图书的相关报道 要写好此文 考生需要注意四点 一 要认真审题 确定体裁 人称和时态等 二 要运用适当的句型 合理地组织文字 三 切忌照译 要适当地增加细节 恰当地使用连接过渡词 以使行文连贯 四 在句型方面 为了用五个句子表达全部内容 复合句的使用依然是考查的重点 参考范文 Version 1 A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010 It tells how the author a Chinese American and professor at Yale University educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior the traditional Chinese way or the American way It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011 Unexpectedly the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17 year old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale Version 2 A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010 Its author is Amy Chua a Chinese American and professor at Yale who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way Ever since its publication a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011 but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua s way of parenting A recent report says that Amy s elder daughter 17 has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale 第二节 读写任务 阅读下面短文 然后按要求写 一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents he was very happy He thought he would be able to go home every weekend When he was told he would not he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave He was then taken to the dorm where he saw other children happy He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home He started feeling homesick 想家 and wanted to go homes as soon as possible He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food He could not concentrate in the classroom All he co