英语短文改错专项训练.doc

英语短文改错专项训练（一）Recently Ive conducted a survey on if girls should lose weight among my classmate. Most of the students hold the view that girls should lose weight. In their opinion, girls are slim are more beautiful and attractively, and they are more confident in their study and work than those who are fat. Therefore, a few of the students have a different opinion. We think its a waste of time and money. In addition, lose weight may be harmful to their body and mind. After all, anything is more important than the health. If girls take weight-loss pills and then stop doing that some day, they will become fatter. So it is no need for young girls to lose weight as long as they are healthy.（二）Dear editor,Im writing to tell you something about how we students use the Internet. As we all know, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. We often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends. Beside, we listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.However, it has its disadvantages. We waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad effect on our studies. Whats worse, the bad information on the Internet do great harm to them. I hope we can make the use of the Internet proper for our studies.Yours trulyZhang Hua（三）Dear Abby，How are you？Today Ive got a wonderful news to tell youI have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my farther educationOne hundred and twenty students took exams for it，but only a few was chosen and I was one of themHowever，my parents are not happy about itThey are strong against me going thereThey say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonelyThey cant imagine a girl so young live aloneThey advise me studyin the capital insteadThen Ill be able to continue living with themHow can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up？Best wishes,Jane（四）The Mid-autumn Festival, that is one important traditional festival in China, falls in August 15th of the lunar calendar every yearIt is celebrated both in China and many Asian countryPeople believe that a full of moon is the symbol of reunion and good luckThis is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this particularly timeOn that day they usually go back to home to have a family get-together, so they appreciate the beautiful full moon, enjoyed the typical foodthe moon cakeAll Chinese have wonderful time at the festival（五）Should students make friends on line? Some of people say yes. The Internet helps make many friends. Chat on line, students can more free express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign languages studies. Others, therefore, think students should not. They say making friends on line is waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Beside, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion students should place their study, health and safety before other thing. As for friendship, we can readily find them in our classmates and other people around us.（六）My wife and I go to the theatre whenever we have time. But before we buy ticket, we would like to know whether the play is good and bad. When a new play open, we usually read the reviews on our local newspapers to get informations about it. Last week a new comedy opened at the theatre. The newspaper story said it was very amused, so we decided to go on the Saturday night. It took my wife a long time to make her mind what to wear and we left a little later, By the time we got there, the first act already begun. We were sorry we had missed part of the play, because the rest of it was very funny.答案：改错1：76. if-whether 77. classmate-classmates 78. girl后加who或that 79. attractively-attractive. 80. Therefore-However 81. We-They82. lose-losing 83. anything-nothing 84. 去掉health前面的the 85. it-there改错2：a important 改为 an importantlearning 改为 learnsent 改为 sendBeside 改为 Besideslisten 后面加 tothat has 改为 which hasdo 改为 doesthem 改为 usthe use 中 the 去掉proper 改为 properly改错:3：1删去a。news作“消息”讲时是不可数名词，前面不用冠词a。“一条消息”是a piece of news。 2在have后加been。本句的谓语动词要用被动形式。现在完成时的被动形式为“havebeen过去分词”。 3farther 改为 further 4第一个was改为were。这里a few后省略了复数名词students，谓语动词要用复数形式。 5strong改为strongly。strong是形容词，不能修饰动词。这里要用副词strongly修饰句子的谓语are against。 6too改为so。sothat是一个固定句型，意思是“如此以致于”。 7删去of。be afraid of后要接名词或代词，不能接从句。be afraid后接从句。 8live改为living。imagine表示“想像”，“设想”，后面要接动名词作宾语。例如：Can you imagine him cooking the dinner？（你能想像他做饭的情形吗？） 9在me后加 to。10在fact后加that。本句中I have grown up是名词fact的同位语从句，要用that引导， that不能省略。 改错4：（更正：其中62应是把home 前的to去掉。）短文改错5：66. 去掉of 71. waste前加 a 67.ChatChatting 72. BesideBe