2016届高考英语二轮复习 第三部分 写作知识配套作业

1 第三部分第三部分 写作写作 英语知识运用 1 写作训练 1 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 In China people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years But China s human population has been great growing More population means more land is needed for farming It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda s habitat into little islands of forest Today many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest because of they will cross into areas which people live The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies Besides to our relief there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas 试题分析 1 第一句 had have 一个动作表示持续到现在 还会持续下去用现在完成进行时 2 第二句 great greatly 副词修饰动词 3 第四句 mean means 主语是单数 现在时态中谓语动词也用单数 4 第五句 live 前加 to 迫使某人或某物做某事 force somebody 或 something to do 5 第六句 damaged damaging 形容词修饰名词 有害的 是 damaging 6 第七句 panda pandas 很多熊猫 名词用复数形式 7 第七句 把 of 划掉 because 后面加句子 而 because of 后面加名词 8 第七句 which where in which live 后加 in 定语从句中缺少地点状语 which 只能做主语或宾语 或 live 后面加介词用 which 9 第八句 can can t cannot 根据语境 大熊猫不能交配产仔 用否定形式 10 第九句 Besides However 然而 令我们庆幸的是 人们在帮助大熊猫创造保护 区 前后表示转折 二 书面表达 2 请阅读下面图画 按要求用英语写一篇词数为 120 左右的短文 内容要求 1 描述画面 2 概述其含义 3 谈谈个人感想 注意 1 短文开头已给出 不计入总数 2 可适当发挥 使文章内容充实 行文连续 3 文中不能出现考生的具体信息 参考词汇 凿 钻 bore In the picture 参考范文 In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothes sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading This is s well known story from an ancient Chinese idiom The boy being poor couldn t afford even a candle so her bored a hole in the wall to steal light from his neighbor s house to read at night The moral of the story is spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be 3 Of course things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts Hard work pays off We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future 写作训练 2 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Dear mum and dad I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year I have to remind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008 Worrying about the journey I was unsettled for the first a few days As a result I suffer from time lag This is similar with the jet lag you get from flying but it seems that you keep getting flashbacks from your previous time period So I was very nervous and uncertain at first However Wang Ping my friend and guide were very understanding but gave me some green tablet which helped a lot Well known for their expertise his parents company transported me safely into the future in a time capsule Yours Li Qiang 试题分析 1 文中第二句 yourself myself 根据句意 我不得不一直提醒自己我真的在 3008 年 根据句意 我提醒的是自己而非他人 故选用反身代词 myself 2 文中第二句 real really 本句句意见上一题分析 考查副词担当状语 通过对 句子的分析可知 real 在此句中担当状语 应用其副词形式 3 文中第三句 worrying worried 考查形容词用法 现在分词转换的形容词 通 常用来形容事物 而此句句意为 对于这次旅行很担心 我在最开始的几天里很不安 是 对句子主语 I 的情况进行的说明 故用 worried worried 是由过去分词转换的形容词 通 常用来修饰人 或者与人有关的事物 把 Worrying 改成 Worried 注意首字母大写 4 文中第三句 去掉 a 句意见上一题分析 在最初的几天 用短语 for the first few days 不需要再使用冠词 故去掉 a 即可 5 文中第四句 suffer suffered 根据上一句 I was unsettled 可知 这里的时态 应该确定为一般过去时 故把 suffer 改成 suffered 6 文中第五句 with to 考查固定短语 be similar to 意为 和 相似 句 4 意为 这和你坐飞机时的时间差是很相似的 故把 with 改成 to 7 文中第七句 were was 本句考查主谓一致 一定要确定好主语 本句主语是 Wang Ping 其后的 my friend and guide 是同位语 故谓语动词和 Wang Ping 保持一致即 可 所以本句把 were 改成 was 8 文中第七句 but and 考查连词的用法 前一分句意为 我的朋友和向导王平非 常杰出 后一分句意为 给了我一些绿色的药片起了不少作用 两个分句之间并没有转折 关系 而是并列关系 故把原句中的 but 改成 and 9 文中第七句 tablet tablets 考查名词 名词 tablet 是可数名词 当前文有 some 修饰时 需要用其复数形式 故把 tablet 改成 tablets 10 文中最后一句 parents parents 考查所有格 主语 his parents 和 company 之间存在所有关系 故用 his parents 表示他父母的公司 二 书面表达 2015 湖北卷 请根据以下提示 并结合具体事例 用英语写一篇短文 Questioning is a bridge to learning When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer you will learn 注意 1 无须写标题 2 除诗歌外 文体不限 3 内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例 4 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 5 词数不少于 120 如引用提示语则不计入总词数 参考范文 Questioning can lead to searching for an answer If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true we can find the correct answer and learn more Two years ago our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class Although the answer seemed a little strange nobody but I doubted it Thinking that his solution might be wrong I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way Half an hour later I managed to find the correct answer When I showed my answer to him the teacher praised me for my independent thinking From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth 写作训练 3 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 5 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 I am good at all the subjects and always ready help others At school I get along well with my classmates Therefore I have a problem that troubles myself all the time It s the relationship among my desk mate and me He is a hard working student who keeps school rule well But he s a person with few words What s more he got angry easily I don t know what to deal with him Maybe that s why we ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts I value our friendship I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better I do hope we will be close to each other than before 试题分析 1 文中第一句 ready 后加 to 考查固定短语 be ready to do sth 意为 乐于 做某事 本句中缺少 to 故加上 to 句意为 我每门功课都不错 而且乐于助人 2 文中第三句 Therefore However 前一句意为 在学校 我和同学们相处得很好 后一句意为 我有一个一直困扰我的问题 两句话之间存在转折关系 故不可使用 Therefore 意为所以 而应该使用带有否定意义的副词 3 文中第三句 myself me 此句句意为 然而 我有一个一直困扰我的问题 这里 不需要使用反身代词 myself 只需要使用代词的宾格形式作宾语 故把 myself 改成 me 4 文中第四句 among between 此句考查 among 和 between 之间的区别 Among 指 三者及三者以上的之间 而 between 指两者之间 此句指同桌和我之间的关系 故把 among 改成 between 5 文中第五句 rule rules 本句考查名词 rule 的用法 rule 作规章制度讲时是 可数名词 如前面没有 a 等修饰时 常用其复数形式 泛指规章制度 此句句意为 他是 一个刻苦的学生 非常遵守学校的规章制度 故用复数形式 把 rule 改成 rules 6 文中第七句 got get 本句考查时态 通过阅读上下文可知 本篇文章是以一般 现在时为主 陈述目前的情况 而本句突然出现了一般过去时 而且没有讲述过去发生的 事情 所以需要把一般过去时改成一般现在时 主要主语为 he 故用 gets 7 文中第八句 what how 本句考查短语 deal with 的用法 此处 deal with 表示 交往的意思 这个句子的句意为 我不知道该如何与他交往 故使用 how 表如何 而不用 what 8 文中第九句 why because 根据后面的 we ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts 可知 这里说明的是两个人关系有问题的原因 所以不用 why 而用 because 构成句型 that s because 表示那是因为 9 文中倒数第二句 去掉 with about 为介词 其后之间用代词 each other 作宾语 即可 不需要再使用介词 with 故去掉 with 即可 句意为 我希望我们能多了解彼此 多理解彼此 10 文中最后一句 close closer 通过 than before 可知此句话为比较级 故把 close 改成 closer 句意为 我真希望我们能比以前更亲密 二 书面表达 2015 上海卷 6 Guided Writing Directions Write an English composition in 120 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 学校即将举办 读书节 目前正广泛征集 读书节 宣传册图片 假设你是该校学生 潘阳 你已找到以下三幅图片 决定给读书节组委会写一封信 推荐其中一幅 你的信须 包括以下内容 1 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片 2 阐述你用这幅图片宣传 读书节 的理由 参考答案 Dear Sir Madam Since the Reading Festival is around the corner I m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading In the picture three students are sitting at the table discussing heatedly what they have just read It seems that they have had a lot of fun 7 through the discussion Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration As far as I m concerned it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well The moment you mention the book the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book To sum up the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading instead of being dull and isolating can be full of participation and common interest I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I m looking forward to your early reply Yours sincerely Pan Yang 写作训练 4 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 There are lots of experience in our life The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year I m interested in English When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition I devoted me to the preparation I was determined to win the first prize I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down Finally I do a good job When I heard I got the first prize my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down Through this speech competition I understand that it is confident that makes peop le successfully 试题分析 1 experience experiences 名词误用 根据谓语动词 are 可知此处主语应是复数 形式 2 holding held 非谓语误用 competition 和 hold 之间是被动关系 所以应用 过去分词 3 been chosen 语态误用 主语 I 和 chose 之间为被动关系 had been chosen 被 选中 8 4 me myself 代词误用 devote oneself to sth 致力于 5 such so 形容词副词误用 such 后加名词 so 后加形容词或副词 根据 nervous 可知用 so 修饰 6 a 去掉 冠词误用 catch sight of 看见 不用冠词 7 do did 时态误用 本文讲的是去年的事情 所以此处应用一般过去时 8 in with 介词误用 be filled with 冲满 9 confident confidence 形容词误用 根据结构可知 此处强调的是句子的主语 所以应用名词 10 successfully successful succeed 副词误用 Make sb do sth 或 make sb adj 是固定结 二 书面表达 2015 湖南卷 Section C 25 marks Directions Write an English composition according to the instructions given below 请以老师当众表扬你为话题 用下面所给的句子开头 续写一篇英语短文 As a student I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates 注意 1 将所有句子写在答题卡上 2 续写词数不少于 120 个 3 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 参考范文 One possible version As a student I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praise d by my teacher before my classmates Yesterday afternoon Li Ming and I went home together after school Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car The driver ran away in his car Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old lady s head was bleeding She had already lost consciousness Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital The old lady 9 was saved and we also felt very pleased What s more I remembered the number of the car and the traffic police caught the driver later 写作训练 5 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 One cold evening during the holiday season a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes She took the child by the hand and led her into the store There she bought him some new shoes and a complete suit of warm clothing They walked back outside into the street so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday The little boy looked her and asked how she was God She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child 试题分析 1 第一句 去掉 front 前的 the 在商店窗户外面的前方站着 用 in front of 而 in the front of 表示内部的前边 去掉 the 2 第二句 has had 通篇是过去时态 3 第三句 passes passing 现在分词作定语 表示主动关系 4 第四句 her him 文中讲述一个小男孩 代词性别用错 5 第五句 warm warmly 副词修饰动词 而形容词修饰名词 clothing 是名词 6 第六句 so and 前后句是并列关系 7 第六句 come go 回家 go home 8 第七句 looked 后面加 at 看着某人 look at somebody 9 第七句 how if whether 问那个女士是否是上帝 10 第八句 child children one of 复数名词 二 书面表达 2015 浙江卷 在班级活动中 当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时 你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人 还是尊重大多数同学的意见 请你以 When I Have a Different Opinion 为题 用英文 写一篇 100 120 个词短文 要求如下 1 从以上两种做法中选择一种 2 以具体事例阐述你选择的理由 10 注意 短文中 不得以任何形式透露地区 学校 同学姓名等真实信息 否则 按考 试作弊行为认定 When I Have a Different Opinion 参考答案 When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities We may have various ways to deal with such a situation When I have a better idea I would choose to stick to it By doing so I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly Once we were discussing where to go for an outing Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea We did have a good time that day Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all 写作训练 6 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修 改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Good morning ladies and gentlemen May I have your attention please I have something important to tell you Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain Now I will introduce their plan for today We would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning A school has a history of 85 years Then we ll go to an exhibition of some new invention I think it will be interested The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel We ll set out at 8 30 Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions Thank you for listening 试题分析 11 1 文中第二段第二句 has to 后面加 be 考查被动语态的用法 本句句意为 我们 去乡村参观的计划由于下雨不得不推迟到明天 计划和推迟之间存在被动关系 故需要使 用被动语态 不定式的被动语态在其后加上 be 就可以了 故在 to 之后加上 be 2 文中第二段第二句 because 后面加 of 考查 because 和 because of 之间的区别 虽然两者都可以表示 因为 但是用法却不同 because 之后加上表原因的分句而 because of 之后加上表原因的名词或动名词 此句中表原因的是名词 the rain 故需要使 用的是 because of 所以加上 of 3 文中第二段第三句 their our 通过上一句可知 此处讲的是 our plan 故把 their 改成 our 句意为 现在我介绍一下我们今天的计划 4 文中第二段第四句 would will 通过上文 Now I will introduce their plan fo r today 可知介绍的是即将发生的事情 故用现在将来时而不是过去将来时 所以把 would 改成 will 5 文中第二段第四句 去掉 on 本句考查时间状语的用法 句意为 今天早晨我们 将坐公共汽车去参观一所学校 今天早晨作时间状语不需要加介词 故去掉 on 6 文中第二段第五句 school 前的 a 改成 the 此处所指的学校是上文提到的学校 在英语中 表上 文刚刚提到的可数名词单数 需要用定冠词 the 故把 a 改成 the 注意 首字母大写 7 文中第二段第六句 invention inventions 此处考查可数名词的用法 Invention 为可数名词 它的前面有 some 修饰 表一些 所以需要用 invention 的复数形 式 故改成 inventions 8 文中第二段第七句 interested interesting 此处考查 interesting 和 interested 的区别 前者意为有趣的 后者意为感到有意思的 根据句意 我认为那是很 有趣的 故把 interested 改成 interesting 9 文中倒数第三句 Taking Take 本句考查祈使句 祈使句需要用动词原形开始 故把 taking 改成 take 句意为 请随身携带所有的必需品 准时上车 注意首字母大写 10 文中倒数第二句 unless if 本句考查条件句 根据意思是指 如果有问题 欢迎来问我 而不是除非有问题 欢迎来问我 故把 unless 改成 if 表如果 二 书面表达 2014 安徽卷 为了帮助中学生健康成长 某中学英文报开辟了 HEART TO HEART 专栏 假设你 是该栏目的编辑 Jamie 收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信 信中该同学向你诉说了自己 的困扰 近日容易发脾气 使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 请用英文给该同学写一封回 信 内容要点如下 1 表示理解并给予安慰 2 提出建议并说明理由 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息 3 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好 不计入总词数 参考词汇 temper n 脾气 情绪 Hi Worried I m sorry to know that you re having such a bad time at the moment 12 Yours Jamie 参考范文 Hi Worried I m sorry to know that you re having such a bad time at the moment The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong so you don t have to worry so much The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you ll regret Here are three useful tips First talk to someone you trust about how you feel This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself Second go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger And third remain optimistic about your future Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits I hope you ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal Yours Jamie 写作训练 7 一 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Miss Jones was math teacher Her home not far from her school but she always walked there in the morning All the pupils in the school was very young In a cold and windy morning Miss Jones walked to the school and the cold wind goes into her eyes and big tear began to run out She reached school opened the door and going into the classroom It was nice and warm here and Miss Jones was happily but then a small boy looked at her for a few seconds to put his arms around her and said kind Don t cry Miss Jones School isn t very bad 试题分析 1 文中第一句 math 前加 the math teacher 是可数名词 且是第一次出现 故需 要加不定冠词 a 句意为 Miss Jones 是一名数学教师 2 文中第二句 but and 考查连词用法 前一分句意为她的家离学校不远 后一分 句意为她总是在早晨走到学校 两个分句之间没有转折关系 而是并列关系 故把 but 改 成 and 13 3 文中第三句 was were 考查主谓一致 本句主语为 pupils 名词的复数形式 故谓语动词用 were 而不是 was 故把 was 改成 were 4 文中第四句 in on 考查介词用法 在一个风大天冷的早晨 用介词 on 而不是 介词 in 故把原文中的 in 改成 on 注意 由于出现在句首 需要大写首字母 5 文中第四句 goes went 考查时态 根据上下文的时态 可知本文是讲述了一件 曾经发生的事情 故应该使用一般过去时 而不是一般现在时 所以把原文的 goes 改成 went 6 文中第四句 tear tears 句意为 大滴的眼泪滚了出来 tear 作眼泪讲时 常 用复数形式 故把 tear 改成 tears 7 文中第五句 going went 考查并列结构 句意为 她到了学校 打开门 冲入 教室 此时动作 reached opened 以及 go 应该为并列结构 故把原文中的 going 改成 went 和上文保持一致 8 文中第六句 happily happy 考查形容词担当表演 句意为 教室里很温暖 Miss Jones 很开心 担当表语不用副词而用形容词 故把原句中的 happily 改成 happy 9 文中倒数第一句 去掉 put 前的 to 考查并列结构 本句当中的 looked put said 为并列结构 故把原文的不定式 to put 改成