怎样提高高考英语写作档次

Goodafternoon everyone OnthemorningofApril29 2007 from10 00to11 00 hundredsofmillionsofstudentsfromprimary middleschoolsanduniversitiesalloverChinajoinedinanationalstudentsportsprogram ElevenmillionstudentsinJiangsutookanactivepartinthisprogram TheMinistryofEducationcallsonstudentstoexerciseforanhoureveryday inthehopethattheywillhavegoodhealthtoworkfiftyyearsandenjoytheirwholelife Personally Ithinkit sagoodideaforussenior3studentstohavedailyexercise Althoughwetakeanhouradayforecercise itiswellworthit Takingexercisehelpsbuildupourbodyandkeepaclearmind Therefore wecanworkmoreefficiently Thankyou joinedin tookanactivepartin inthehopethat Personally Although Therefore 0 年江苏卷书面表达范文 callson iswellworth buildup Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect promoteunderstanding andimproveinterpersonalrelationship Manypeoplesuggestthatparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchildren sotheywillunderstandthembetter andfinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgap teachersshouldlistenmoretotheirstudents thentheycanmeettheirneedsbetter andplacethemselvesinagoodrelationshipwiththeirstudents studentsshouldlistenmoretotheirclassmates thustheywillhelpandlearnfromeachother andafriendshipislikelytobeformed WhatIwanttostressisthateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers Showyourrespectandneverstopotherstilltheyfinishtheirtalk showyouareinterestedbyasupportivesilenceoraknowingsmile beopen mindedtodifferentopinionseventhoughyoudon tlikethem Inaword goodlisteningcanreallyenableustogetclosertoeachother promote improve finditeasy tonarrowthegenerationgap thus WhatIwanttostressisthat Inaword 0 年江苏卷书面表达范文 Howtopolishup yourwriting 书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档 21 25分 完全完成了试题规定的任务 准确 清楚地表达了短文的内容 要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误 但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致 具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的 第四档 16 20分 完成了试题规定的任务 比较准确 清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确 少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的 第三档 11 15分 基本完成了试题规定的任务 能说出短文的基本内容 但逻辑关系较混乱 要点有遗漏 没有写自己的认识应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结构和词汇的错误 但不影响理解应用简单的语句间连接成分 使全文内容连贯整体而言 基本达到了预期的写作目的 Thepolishedpoints 1 Iusedtolikereadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool 2 SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea 3 Youcanfindmyhouseeasily Iusedtotakedelightin befondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool Allofasudden agoodideaoccurredtome Agoodideasuddenlystruckme Youhavenotrouble difficultyinfindingmyhouse Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty 较高级的词汇 短语 4 Becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable 5 Inourschool therearetwenty sixclassrooms 6 Theoldphotomademethinkofmyhappychildhood Thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywascomfortable Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty sixclassrooms Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty sixclassrooms Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood 较高级的词汇 短语 1 Iusedtotakedelightin befondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool 2 Allofasudden agoodideaoccurredtome Agoodideasuddenlystruckme 3 Youhavenotrouble difficultyinfindingmyhouse Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty 4 Thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywascomfortable 5 Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty sixclassrooms Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty sixclassrooms 6 Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood 较高级的词汇 短语 1 Whensheheardhehaddied shewentpalewithsorrow 2 IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeast Atthattime anelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet 丰富的语法结构 Onhearingthebadnewsofhisdeath shewentpalewithsorrow IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet 丰富的语法结构 3 TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool 4 Heissurprisedthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings 丰富的语法结构 5 Wecanachieveourgoalonlyinthisway 6 Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened 较高级的语法结构 1 Onhearingthebadnewsofhisdeath shewentpalewithsorrow 2 IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet 3 TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool 4 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings 5 Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal 6 Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened 使用恰当的连接词 first firstly second secondly lastbutnotleast and too aswellas alongwith togetherwith forexample forinstance like suchas asto but however while though onthecontrary because since thanksto asaresult consequence of thus therefore inaword inshort tosumup inconclusion what smore besides tomakemattersworse what sworse worsestill furthermore 段落优化1 Thisvillageisverysmall whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people Itusedtobeverypoor However ithaschangedalotsince1978 Peoplehereareleadingaricherandhappierlifethanbefore Nowitistakingonanewlook AsfarasIamconcerned foruschildren weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare What smore oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussociety 段落优化2 Ithink foruschildren weshouldoften