书面表达训练导学案2.doc

2014写作训练 导学案 姓名：教学目标：1.掌握简单的英语句子结构， 并能写出正确句子。2. 掌握写作的基本模式和步骤。3.培养学生自主学习和小组合作学习。要求：先自主完成再与同桌或小组交流自主学习一、根据所给的句子结构和例子。仿写。n 结构1：主语+be+名词/形容词例如: He is a doctor.（他是一位医生）The book was on the table .（书放在桌子上）仿写：他们是好学生。_我父母在上海_例如：He is very angry.（他很生气）The flowers are beautiful. （花儿很美）仿写：我们很累，但过得很开心。_这个故事很有趣. _n 结构2：主语+动词（动宾短语）例如：I work every day.（我每天工作）I worked yesterday.（我昨天工作）I am going to work tomorrow.（我打算明天工作）I am working now（我正在工作）仿写：每天我都踢球。_昨天我踢球_他正在公园里踢球_明天我们打算去公园踢球。_n 结构3：There be+主语+地点+时间列如：There are 150 teachers in our school.(我们学校有150位老师)仿句：公园里有很多漂亮的花和树。_今天下午有一场篮球比赛。_自主学习二、写出并牢记 “固定搭配”的词组1、生某人的气_2、擅长某事_3、想做某事_4、喜欢做某事_5、去购物_6、对某人友好_判断正误，有错就改1.He is friendly with us. ( ) 2. We enjoy living here. ( )3. Mr Wang told me went home.( ) 4. I want to see you again. ( )5. My father was angry to me. ( )自主学习三、避免中国式英语1. I very like music. (我非常喜欢音乐)2. she by bike went to school.（她骑自行车去学校）3. They in the park played badminton.（他们在公园里打羽毛球）4. On the desk have a book.（在地上有一本书）牢记地道的英语表达结构：1、主语+动宾词组+地点+(时间)2、主语+动宾词组+方式（和某人）用正确地道的英文改正以上四个句子：1. _2. _3. _4. _自主学习四、 明确写作的步骤：审-列-加-连-美-查1、审：仔细审题，确定用何种人称、时态及语态。（定时态，选人称。）2、列：明确中心，按照要求及提示，列要点.。（明中心，列要点。）3、加：围绕中心，适当发挥，多用形容词或副词来进行生动描述。（拓展句，细描述。）4、连：选定关联词，连词成句。（连句子，句成篇）。5、美：开门见山，点明主题，结尾要说出感受、做出评价或提出希望，做到首尾呼应。（有头尾，提感受。） 6、查：要点全，单词准，选词当，时态对，主谓一，词数足，名词单复数正确，书写美（多修改，重检查）。中考写作 练一练：根据汉语提示，以“A trip to the zoo”为题，写一篇短文。可以适当发挥. 字数60-80.提示：1、上周日，我和朋友们去动物园。2、我们看到很多动物。3、拍了很多照片。4、我们玩得很开心。请按照以下步骤学习写作：第一步：定时态，选人称 _ 时态， 选用第_ 人称 第二步：明中心，列要点 （构思发挥： 谁？在哪里？做了哪几件事？ 感觉怎么样？）时间：上周日 last Sunday地点：动物园 go to the zoo with my friends人物：我和朋友 交通工具：汽车 go there by bus 活动：1、看动物 look at the pandas (熊猫.猴子) look at the monkeys 2、拍照 take many photos 3、吃午饭 have lunch in the zoo 4、下午4点回家 go home at 4 pm感受： 玩得开心 have a good time 第三步：拓展句，细描述Last Sunday, the weather was sunny.I went to the zoo with my friends. We went there by bus. There were many people in the zoo.We looked at the pandasThey were very cuteWe looked at the monkeys. They were very funny. We took many photos. We were all hungryWe had lunch in the zooWe went back home at 4:00 p.m.I had a good time第四步：连句子，句成篇 第五步：有头尾，提感受Last Sunday, the weather was sunny. I went to the zoo with my friends. We wentthere by bus.There were many people in the zoo. _,We looked at the pandas. They were very cute. _,We looked at the monkeys. They were very funny. We took many photos. _,We were all hungry. _We had lunch in the zooWe went back home at 4:00 p.m. I was tired that day but I had a good time.I want to go to the zoo again.（1）你叫李梅，根据个人信息，写一篇个人简历，介绍自己的基本情况。字数60-80词。中文名李梅英文名Betty性别女国籍中国年龄15学校第二中学班级三（2）特长英语数学爱好唱歌打篮球优点友好、善良_（2）去年暑假你参加了一次夏令营（summer camp），请根据下面表