高考英语写作强化课件

OPEN ENDINGCOMPOSITION 开放性写作出题方式 1根据结果 解释原因Whathappened 2根据事件 接续故事Whathappenednext Whatdidyoudowith Whatshouldyoudo Howwillyouintroduceyourschooltothem 3提出问题 给出建议 写作注意原则 1 认真审题 即 审语境 审人称 审时态2 要紧扣主题 符合要求 首尾呼应3 注意写作对象和语言风格 要有读者的意识4 要进行细致描写 有细节的支撑5 要有主次之分 详略得当6 要力求内容新颖 必须符合逻辑7 要做到思想健康 积极向上 海淀二模 Whenyourmothercomeshomefromwork shefindsthelivingroominaterriblemess Sheasksyouthereasons Youtellherwhathappened 审题 人称 I 时态 过去时叙事 根据结果 解释原因 切记 1审题要准 定位要清 2紧扣主题 首位呼应 3内容充实 详略得当 4合情合理 逻辑清晰 5语言简洁 交际得体 说明文 说明文出题形式 1 文字 表格2 图表3 图画 说明文的篇章结构主题句 引出全文的话题支持句 围绕话题展开讨论 用事实 理由 观点等来进行解释 说明或论证 结束句 对话题进行概括 总结归纳 说明文的写作方法 列举法 用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例 如 first second third first secondly finally thefirstthing point is thesecondthing point is thethirdthing point is firstofall also finally one another thelast 以事物的重要性来排列顺序 可使文章层次清楚 重点突出 如 foronething also theworstthingis firstofall apartfromthat themostimportantis foronething whatismore themost oneimportant moreimportantly themostimportant oneproblem anotherproblem themostseriousproblem 比较对比法 比较通常是指对人或事物之间的相同点进行分析 对比通常是侧重分析两者之间的不同点 利与弊 写作方法通常有 1 相同点 不同点分析A A A B B B 结构2 A B A B A B 结构 如内容较多 可逐点分析 TopicsentencewhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparksSupportingsentence160 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaoftheentrancefees A tohavearestandenjoythemselvesinthepark A tobecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls A todoharmtotheappearanceofthecity Supportingsentence240 thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged B needmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers B tobuyplantsandyoungtrees B feesshouldbechargedlow 请根据以下图表和提示写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报导 并阐述手机给人们生活所带来的利与弊 1 方便2 随时 随地联系3 许多设置满足不同要求4 发短信 电话记录5 接到打错的电话为之付费6 电磁污染 宣武一模 请你根据下面图表用英语写一篇短文 内容要包括以下两方面 1 概括说明中美大学生的主要收入来源 2 分析产生这种不同现象的可能原因 Income American Chinesesources students students Parents 50 90 Part timejobs 35 5 scholarships 15 5 TheincomeoftheAmericanandtheChinesestudentscomesthroughalmostthesamechannels parents part timejobsandscholarships butthepercentageofeachisquitedifferent HalftheAmericanstudents incomeisfromtheirparents thirty fivepercentfromfrompart timejobs andfifteenfromscholarships Chinesestudents ontheotherhand getninetypercentoftheirincomefromtheirparents Inmyopinion therearetwomainreasonsforthis OneisthatChineseparentscaresomuchfortheirchildrenthatitisalmostunthinkableforstudentstoliveontheirown TheotheristhatChinesestudentshavefewerchancestofindpart timejobs 小结 1 确定主题 理清结构 2 信息归类 支撑论点 相同 不同 3 上下连贯 逻辑清晰 正确使用连接词 4 首位呼应 紧扣扣题 Wishyousuccess 写作常见错误 1动词与主语关系不清误 IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad 正 IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad 误 Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman 正 Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman 误 Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee 正 Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks 正 Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks 2句子之间的逻辑关系不清误 Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver awoman didn tstophercar Findingshehadcausedanaccident thewomanspedhercartofleeaway TheoldmanandIsawthecar snumber It sAC864 Theoldmancouldn tmove Idecidedtohelphim 正 Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver whowasawoman didn tstophercar Findingshehadcausedanaccident thewomanspedhercartofleeaway Fortunately Isawthecar snumber It sAC864 Noticingtheoldmancouldn tmove Idecidedtohelphim 3画蛇添足 过多的长句使句子复杂化 语言不简洁 修改前 Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasratherinteresting 修改后 Afamoussportsmanwasgivinganinterestingspeech 修改前Nowadays somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission Theairpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriouswhichiscausedbybusesandcars What smore somanyriversarepollutedbydirtywaterwhichisfromfactory Inaddition sandstormstruckusnowandthen fromwhichwesufferedalot 修改后Nowadays somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission Asaresult peoplehavetosuffersandstormsnowandthen What smore asbusesandcarsgiveoffalotofpoisonousgases theairisgettingdirtieranddirtier Moreover therearemanyriverspollutedbydirtywaterfromfactories Thesituationisbecomingmoreandmoreserious 修改前 Assoonascamein weheardsomevoicemadebyinstruments Thereweresomestudentsplayingpianoviolinandsoon 修改后 Assoonaswecamein weheardapieceofbeautifulmusicplayedbythestudentsbydifferentinstruments suchas piano violinandsoon 4过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性 可读性 修改前Yesterday therewasapolicemaninthestreet Hestoppedacar Thecarwasatthecorner ItlookedlikeaHonda Therewasaboyonthesidewalk Hewasridinghisbicycle Thebicyclewasatwo wheeler Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy 修改后Yesterday apolicemanstoppedacar Hondaatthecornerofthestreet becauseitnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo wheelbicycleonthesidewalk 修改前Suddenly acarrunquicklyfromthethirdstreetandturnedtothewest Thecardidn tstopandhittheold