书面表达(开放式作文)_课件.ppt22

2013届高考英语书面表达之 半 开放性作文 漫画式 半 开放作文的写作第一步 描述漫画内容描述漫画内容的基本条件是看懂漫画 要求是 审图要准 定位要清 描述时言简意赅 不可越位 要注意 不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意 常用句式 Inthepicture thereis Asisvividlyportrayed 被生动的描绘 inthepicture Fromthepicturewecanseethat Ascanbeseenfromthepicture Thepicturedescribesaninteresting acommonphenomenon Thepicturetriestotellusthat 第二步 阐述对漫画的理解所谓对漫画的理解 是指围绕漫画反映的基本事实进行较为细致的解释和自己的看法 感想或人生感悟等 要求是 逻辑清晰 合情合理 挖掘漫画所反映出的社会现象和蕴含的哲理常用句式 Itseemsveryridiculousthat However thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere Whatthepictureshowsistheexactreflectionof Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously Andthesocialproblemhasarousedgreatconcernamong Theremay mightbethreefactorswhichcontributeto accountfor areresponsibleforthisphenomenon Firstofall Andthenthesecondreasonisthat Thelastreason Ithink is 对漫画中反映的问题作出评价或建议常用句式 AsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview Onmypart 就我来说 Somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentodealwith Onlyintheseways canwesolvetheproblemof Itisbetter advisableto Iconsideritnecessaryto that 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛 请按如下要求完成一篇短文 1 简要描述下图的内容 并点明主题 2 联系实际 谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法 注意 1 词数不少于80个 提示词 蜗牛snail 从漫画中两只蜗牛中一只所说的话 Look Theyaremovingmoreslowlythanus 可以看出两只蜗牛在开玩笑来取笑路上拥挤的汽车比它们还要跑得慢 由此我们可以推断 交通拥挤问题的严重性 一 简述漫画内容点明主题 Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseus Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems Asweallknow theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem Inthepicture therearetwosnailsplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Howslowlytheyaremoving Thepictureconveysusthemessagethatheavytrafficisaseriousproblem Inthepicture twosnailsareplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Theyaremovingsoslowlythatwecan thelpthinkingoftheseriousnessofheavytraffic Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarswhicharemovingveryslowlyonthecrowdedroads Thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseusbutactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems Thatis heavytrafficisaseriousproblem 分析现象产生的原因可以从下列考生比较熟悉的几个方面来考虑 随着经济的发展 私家车的增加 随着汽车的增加和城市人口的增加 一些道路等交通设施仍然没有得到改善 行人交通意识的淡薄等等 二 分析现象产生的原因 Firstly thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday Secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved Thirdly somepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam 紧紧围绕所分析的原因 不要面面俱到 可以选取其中一两个原因 提出解决问题的看法 Personally Ithinkthatratherthanpromoteprivatecars it sbettertoimprovethepublictransportationsystemwithscientificroaddesignandpropermanagement Moreimportantly nevercantrafficjamsbeeasedwithoutself disciplinedcitizens 三 谈谈解决问题的看法 Inmyopinion thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol Andatthesametime busesshouldhavetheirownspecialrouteswhichcannotbeusedbyothervehicles Besides undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedevelopedquickly Tosolvetheproblem somepiecesofadviceareputforward Isuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsshouldbebuilt Besides weshouldtakesomemeasurestolimitthenumberofcars Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow Inmyopinion thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol Meanwhile thegovernmentshouldtakesomemeasurestoimprovesomepublictransportation What smore peoplemustobeytrafficregulationsstrictly Forexample pedestriansdon tcrossthestreetsuntilthetrafficlightsareforthem 参考作文 Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseus Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems Asweallknow theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem Butwhydoesthishappen Ithinkseveralfactorscontributetothisphenomenon Firstly thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday Secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved Thirdly somepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam forexample manypedestrians 行人 crossthestreetwithoutwatchingtheWalklights Onlywhenourwholesocietyworktogethertosolveallthesesproblemscanwespeeduptheflowoftrafficinthecities InyourspokenEnglishclass yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstand 参考作文 Inthepicturewecanseeaboyclimbingaplatform Heistakinggreattroubletoreach dietopofthestairs ignoringthecomparativelylowerstairsbesidehim Thepictureremindsmeofthosewhodreamofachievinggreatsuccesseveryday Theyaresoeagertosucceedthattheyhopetogettotheirdestinationsasquicklyaspossible Theydon trealizethereare