高考英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样课件

高考英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样化 高考作文 1OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandmylittlesisterandArFufollowed Whilemyparentswereworking mysisterwalkedtotheriverandArFufollowedher Shesawabeautifulfloweronthebankoftheriver shewantedtopickit Shefellintotheriver WhenArFusawthat itbarkedandjumpedintotheriverquickly Oneday followedbymylittlesisterandArFu myparentswenttoworkinthefields Whilemyparentswereworking mysister withnothingtodo walkedtotheriversidenearbywithArFu Atthesightofabeautifulflowerontheriverbank shewantedtopickit However shefellintotheriver SeeingthatArFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterassoonaspossible 2 书面表达评分标准 北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准情景作文一 评分原则 本题总分为20分 按5个档次给分 评分时 先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次 然后以该档次的要求来衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 评分时应考虑 内容要点 上下文的连贯 词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性 拼写 标点符号或书写影响内容表达时 应视其影响程度予以考虑 英 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受 词数少于60 从总分中减去1分 词汇和句式的多样性 因为 hishelp Ifinishedtheworkatlast Thanksto Asaresultof Owingto Dueto 因为 Becauseof with for 我花了50块钱买这本字典 Spend on inItcosts takes toPay for Chargesb for Iwascharged 50forthedictionary 我会尽我所能去帮助他 do trymybestdoeverythingIcandoallthatIcandowhat whateverIcan Iwill tohelphim I llhelphimasmuchaspossible 高考经典句型结构 1 It syearssinceIworkedinBeijing 2 Itwon tbelongbeforeyougetwell 3 ItwasnotuntilyoutoldmethatIrealizedmymistake 4 NotuntilyoutoldmedidIrealizemymistake 5 Itissaidthatafirebrokeoutlastnight 6 Therealwaysexistbiggapsbetweendreamsandrealities 7 Shewassoexcitedthatsheburstintotears 8 Workhard andyouaresuretowin Hesatthere 手里拿着书 eyes closed 背着书包 nothing todo Thereisagirl Sheissittingbetweenus 2 Thisisabook Thebookwasboughtyesterday Thereisagirlwhoissittingbetweenus Thisisabookwhichwasboughtyesterday Rewritefollowingsentences 3 走在大街上 他遇见了一个老朋友 Whilehewaswalkinginthestreet hemetanoldfriend 4 thecitylooksbeautiful Walkinginthestreet 从天空中看 Whenitisseenfromthesky thecitylooksbeautiful Seenfromthesky 由于不知道他的电话 他无法与Tom取得联系 Notknowinghistelephonenumber hecan tgetintouchwithTom Rewritethefollowingpassage Theywentforawalkonthestreet Theysawtheoldman Hewasknockeddownbyacar Thecarwaspassingby reading sleeping shoes barking cat dumbfounded adj 目瞪口呆 请你根据以下四幅图 总分20 写一篇100词左右的短文 参考词语 slippers 拖鞋 要点 1老人穿着拖鞋读报 狗在边上睡觉 2老人想出门 叫狗拿鞋 3狗闭着眼睛 一动不动 汪汪直叫 老人很纳闷 4猫嘴里叼着鞋走进来 老人目瞪口呆 Anoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome readinghisnewspaper Besidehimlayadogsleepingsoundly Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile buthecouldn tgooutwithhisslipperson Sohewokeupthedogtogettheshoesforhim Outofhisexpectation thedogjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain Theoldmanwascompletelypuzzled Ashewaswonderingwhatwashappening hesawthecatcomingtowardshimwiththepairofshoesinitsmouth Seeingthis hewastotallydumbfounded Anoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome readinghisnewspaper Besidehimlayadogsleepingsoundly Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile buthecouldn tgooutwithhisslipperson Sohewokeupthedogtogettheshoesforhim Outofhisexpectation thedogjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain Th