2014届高三英语一轮复习基础写作和读写任务训练（1）

2014届高三英语一轮复习 基础写作和读写任务训练（1）（广东版）III 写作 （共两节）第一节 基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）H7N9禽流感是一种极其危险的病毒，正在国内流行，请用英语写一篇短文介绍“如何预防禽流感”。写作内容1. 现状：截至2013年5月3日，全国128人感染H7N9病毒，27人死亡。2. 目的：预防禽流感3. 措施：1. 保持良好的个人卫生习惯，如勤洗手、保持室内通风。2. 多进行体育锻炼，加强营养，增强个人体质，提高抵抗力。3. 避免接触和食用病死禽、畜。4. 注意：一旦出现发热，尤其是高热，要及时就医。参考词汇禽流感：bird flu营养：nutrition抵抗力：resistance写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面的新闻，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。From security guard to top college studentIn Shandong Normal University, one student in particular has drawn much attention as he used to be a security guard at Qinghua University. During his spare time, he went to different classes at the top university as his goal was to get into college one day. Jia is from a poor rural family in Shandong province. Although he never finished high school, his college ambitions never stopped. He became a security guard at Qinghua University.Guarding the school and taking free classes at Qinghua during his spare time, self-taught Jia took the college entrance exam in June last year and he made the grade. His family is very proud of his achievement. They didnt know about his college dream. All they wanted from him was a decent marriage and grandchildren. Jia says he has made plans for his new college life and up to now everything has been fine. He wants to finish his degree in three years and then go to an even better graduate school. He says everyone should strive to improve their life and is confident about his future.写作内容假设你看完上面这则新闻故事后深有感触，决定在班上英语课前活动中做一个英语演讲。演讲的开头和结尾已为你写好，内容包括以下几点。1以约30词概括上面新闻故事的主要内容。2以约120词发表你的看法，内容包括：(1) 这则新闻故事带给你的感受。(2) 你认为主人公的成功最重要的原因是什么？为什么？(3) 受到的启发并进行呼吁。写作要求1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 写作中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。III 写作 （共两节，满分40分）第二节 基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）A possible version:By May 3, 2013, 128 people in our country had been affected with the virus H7N9 and 27 had died from it. In order to keep away from the dangerous bird flu, you should keep a healthy habit, like frequently washing your hands and keeping your rooms open to the wind. You should also take more exercise and increase your nutrition to build up your body and strengthen your resistance. Moreover, dont touch or eat birds or animals that have died of disease.Once you have a fever especially a high fever, go to see the doctor right away.基础写作评分标准评分说明 基础写作的评分建议采用分析法，即按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该题的总得分。项目赋分评分标准语 言7-8具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。备注每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。内 容5包括了所有信息内容。4包括了大部分信息内容。3包括了基本信息内容。2包括了小部分信息内容。1包括了少许信息内容。0没有包括所提供的信息内容。连 贯2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给0分。第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）A possible version:Fly Your DreamLadies and gentlemen,Today I would like to begin my speech with Jias story.Born poor and previously a safety guard at Qinghua University, Jia never gave up on his college dream. By taking advantage of the academic resources at Qinghua, he finally made his way to college last year.Reading this piece of news, I am both shocked and moved. Jia pursued his dream and made achievements despite his disadvantaged financial and occupational background. Among the many reasons why he succeeded, I would point out the role of having a dream as the most critical one. As we can see around us, many would have dropped their dream and thought of themselves as doomed to be underprivileged the whole life, should they be in Jias shoes. Yet thats far from the worst case. Take a look around us, and it is not unusual to find students with better family background than Jia but without a dream, spending their youth playing games and surfing the net. In my opinion, they are simply not making their life as worthwhile as a security guard did.Therefore, I would appeal that we all follow the example of Jia, find a dream and fight for it. After all, only if we do have a dream can we fly it and finally realize it!Thats the end of my speech. Thank you.Keys words and sentences in the summary:1. Jia; 2. poor rural family; 3. his college ambitions never stopped;4. Guarding the school and taking free classes at Qinghua University during his spare time, self-taught Jia took the college entrance exam last year and he made it.读写任务评分标准 评分说明 读写任务的评分建议采用综合法，即：根据总体印象给分。概要和文章的分值分别为5分和20分。读写任务的评分标准项目赋分评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有一定的用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，