基础写作（学生）

1. 广东08高考基础写作范文：句子表达有何亮点？ Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19thcentury. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.2.写作中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句，没有主句The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm. The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子The hall is different from all other buildings, it is made of glass.The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass. The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face.The old man thought of his son, tears coming down from his face.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息 It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing. It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing. We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded. As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus. 3. 请看范例My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种句子：A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy. =When he heard the news, he was happy.B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home. C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to do with me.4. Here are 3 ways to make sentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.2)借助介词短语做定语如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.3)借助介词短语做状语如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：他给我钱，我不要。He gave me a lot money but I refused. 如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：1) 名词性从句如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.2) 定语从句如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources. 3) 状语从句如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.5.练习1.用一句话表达 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect=_2. 不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句=_=_=_第三步：合并句子方法1=_方法2：=_ 情景说明 通知：新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。体检地点：第一人民医院 体检时间：9月9日，星期六 注意：1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往；2、体检前空腹；3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。Notice _ _ _ _. _你来试试现象学生作文中出现很多错别字原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性参考词汇：错别字: wrongly-written characters网络语言：web language第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。_合并句子：_第二句:1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。_合并句子：连接两句话： _ Criteria（标准） Mark Content（内容） （是否用5句话表达了全文要点） 0 5 分 Language（语言） （句子结构及用词是否得当） 0 8 分 Coherence（连贯）（是否用了恰当的词语来衔接句子） 0 2 分实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一