2019高考英语3-2-1精品系列专项24新题型——短文改错(教师版).doc

20192019 高考英语高考英语 3 2 13 2 1 精品系列专项精品系列专项 2424 新题型新题型 短文改错短文改错 教师版 教师版 考点定位考点定位 2018 考纲解读和近几年考点分布考纲解读和近几年考点分布 短文改错高考英语试题中 短文改错题是众多考生得分较低的一项 短文改错不仅要 求学生要有较高的阅读理解能力 还要求学生有深厚的语法知识 善于分析英语基本句型 和句子结构 它主要是考查学生辨析并改正语言知识在运用时常出现的各种错误的能力 法知识识别短文中不合乎内容逻辑的错误和语法结构上的各种错误 综合使用英语 各项基础知识进行快速阅读理解 掌握短文的内容和内容上的前后逻辑关系 进行相应的 纠错 因此短文改错与完形填空 阅读理解一样注重强调整体理解 从宏观上把握 考点考点 pk 名师考点透析名师考点透析 高考短文改错的错误类型概括起来主要是语法错误 逻辑错误和搭配等方面的错误 语法错误语法错误 包括动词 名词 代词 主谓一致 非谓语动词及情态动词等方面的错误 1 名词 名词错误主要考查名词单复数错误 可数与不可数名词的混用 确定名词 单复数有以下几种方法 看修饰语 看主谓语的一致性 可数名词前无单数修饰语一定 要用复数 看其他限制 2 动词 时态和语态 常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时 中间杂有不适的另一时 态的现象 或是及物动词后无宾语 或是不及物动词后加了宾语 需要接 ing 形式的 接了 to 或相反等 对于这一类错误可根据上下文语境或者句子的平行结构确定动词 时态 3 形容词 副词 常在需要形容词的地方用了副词或相反 关系副词 where when why 等的缺失或错用 根据形容词 副词的基本用法或句意确定错误 4 介词 主要是介词的多余或缺失 错用 5 主谓一致 主语为单数 动词用了复数 而主语为复数 动词却用了单数形式 再就是就近原则对主语的影响 6 冠词 主要考查表示特指和泛指时冠词的使用情况 定冠词 the 的多余或缺失 如 季节 月份 星期 球类及三餐活动 称呼头衔前等不能加 the 的地方加了 the 或是 same 等常和 the 一起使用的词却漏掉了 the a an 的混用等 7 数词 主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用 如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用 复数等 基数词的复数形式如几百 hundreds of 几千 thousands of 漏掉了 s 或是当其 前有具体数字或 several 时加了复数 如 seven hundred 写作 seven hundreds 8 连词 不符合句中的逻辑关系 如需转折连词 如 but 的时候用了承接连词 so 或 相反等等 三 短文改错的应试要点三 短文改错的应试要点 1 粗看全文 不要一上来就改动 2 一行看三行 就某一行做判断时 要顾及上下两行或整句 3 一行想全文 单句中合理还不够 要全文合理 4 一行只能动一个词 5 别忘了在错词下画线 6 多词处要在原文中划掉此词 在抄完此词后也用斜线划掉 7 弄清句子结构有利于判断 8 如感觉一行有两处错 应将最有把握处改正 9 复核 做完题重看全文 三年高考三年高考 10 11 12 高考试题及其解析高考试题及其解析 2018 高考英语试题高考英语试题 2018 四川卷 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在 该行右边横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按以下情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用 斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Dear Mom Mother s Day is coming I m sorry that I am abroad 66 and can t send your flowers so I m writing to you 67 Mom I know I have never expressed my thank to you 68 before But on today at this special time I just want to tell 69 you loudly I love you Mom Thank you so much by not 70 only giving me life but also teach me how to be a good 71 person Thank you for all you had done for me Mom though 72 I may often say it I do love you Nobody can take your 73 part in my heart Whenever I am I will always love you 74 Hope you good health and much happiness every day 75 Your little girl Jennifer 解析 2018 全国卷 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在 该行右边横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按以下情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用 斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Dear Editor I m writing to tell you opinion about water saving 76 Water is important We as well as animal cannot live77 without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78 without it Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less 79 Many countries in the world find we don t have enough water 80 To deal with a problem I think we should first go all81 out to plant trees though trees will help save water Next no82 drinking water should be left running Third we should find83 ways to reuse the water using in washing especially bath 84 water for which is quite a lot and that will save much water 85 Sincerely Li Hua 77 animal animals animal 是一个单数可数名词不能单独使用 这里表示类别 用复 数 78 or nor 与前面的 neither 呼应 构成固定搭配 neither nor 既不 也 不 79 seemed seems 全篇文章都是以一般现在时为主 再根据后面的 is 可知用 现在时 2018 课标全国卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除 或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive From the time I was about four until I was about six I destroyed each of my toy I was happy when the toys worked but when things did wrong I got angry and broke it For a while parents bought me new toys But before long they began to see which was happening When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train my father said That s it No more toys to you My punishment lasted a year Meanwhile I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on 解析 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littl aggressive From the time e less I was about four until I was about six I destroyed each of my to I was happy when the y toys toys worked but when things di wrong I got angry and broke i For a d went go t them while parents bought me new toys But before long they began to see whic was my h what happening When I tea apart my fifth birthday toy train my father said That s it No r tore more toys t you My punishment lasted a year Meanwhile I found out that with more o for patience I mus make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on t could might 1 little less 考查副词的用法 根据句意 我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性 此处 less 修饰形容词 2 toy toys 考查名词的单复数形式 根据 each of 可知 应该是 我 的玩具中的 每一个 故用复数形式 toys 3 did went 或者 did 后加 go 考查固定短语的表达法 解题关键 掌握短语 go wrong 意为 出错 2018 浙江卷 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Two years before I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car Unfortunate I had an accident and hit another car and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week I called my parents so I did not tell them what had happened I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away and that my mother would not sleep if she knew Therefore I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result nobody knew truth I still think that it was the right thing to do 答案 Two years befor I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car Unfortunat e ago I had an accident and hit another car and I needed to stay in a hospital for at e Unfortunately least two wee I called my parents s I did not tell them what had happened I knew k weeks o but that they wil be worried about mysel because I was so farthe away and that my l would f me r far mother would not sleep if she knew Therefore I told them intereste stories and d interesting how I was enjoying Brazil As a result nobody knew truth I still think that it was the the right thing to do 2017 陕西卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌 写的以下作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增 加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month It is in the downtown area but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room I checked my email messages every day I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing The food was wonderful with reasonable prices and we enjoyed several local dish It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m who is going to a e mine Beijing 1 visit visited 根据时间状语 last month 可知本句时态是一般过去时 故动词用 过去式 2 but and so 前后文是承接或因果关系 故连词用 and 或 so 3 to 去掉 anywhere 是指地点的副词 其前不用介词 4 comfortably comfortable 修饰名词 doubleroom 应用形容词 2018 辽宁卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写 的以下作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Dear Diana Thank you for the lovely day we have with you It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne s friend Gina Unfortunate the only problem was the journey home There had been a terrible accident on the highway and for a result there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile In the end we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home 解析 Dear Diana Thank you for the lovely day we hav with you It was so kind fo you to let us bring e had r of Anne s friend Gina Unfortunat the only problem was the journey home e Unfortunately There had been a terrible accident on the highway and fo a result there was a long line of r as traffic for at least six mil In the end we drove to a service station and waited there unles e miles the road was clear In the car park her Gina nearly got knocked over as car s until till e there a drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry The finally dropped Gina off at her parents y We and made our own way to home 2018 重庆卷 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误 请找出 并按以下情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜 线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的 词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 Dear Grandpa How are you those days I have been missing you very 76 much after I went to college a year ago Whenever I think of 77 the old days I feel very happily I still remember when I 78 was child you always held me in your arms and told me stories 79 till I fall asleep We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant 80 view there You told me the name of different plants and their 81 characteristics Gradually I became interesting in biology 82 and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college Now 83 my friend Ann together with me are going to do field study 84 and the findings will be use as materials for our research Since 85 we ll do the study in our hometown I hope to see you by then Yours Daisy 答案 Dear Grandpa How are you those days I have been missing you very 76 these much after I went to college a year ago Whenever I think of 要点综述 该段材料表达 我 小时候在爷爷家的幸福生活和近期回老家的安排 写作内容和水平符合高中生写作的特点 所设计的改错试题涵盖了重庆历年来常见的 题型 且错误是学生在日常写作中常犯的典型错误 76 改 those 为 these 写信问及最近的情况 用 these 或 this 用 those 或 that 询问 较远时段的情况 77 after 改为 since 该句主句用现在完成时 状语从句连词需用 since 78 happily 改为 happy feel 在此是系动词 后接形容词作表语 79 在 child 前加 a child 为可数名词 此处表示自己还是一个小孩的时候 用不 定冠词 80 fall 改为 fell 表达过去的经历用一般过去时 81 name 改为 names 后有 different plants 的修饰 应该是多样植物的名称 82 interesting 改为 interested 表示 对 感兴趣 用 be become interested in 83 去掉 into enter 在此为及物动词 84 改 are 为 is 该句主语为 Ann 所以谓语动词的数与 Ann 保持一致 85 use 改为 used 表被动应该用过去分词 2017 高考英语试题高考英语试题 2017 新课标卷 新课标卷 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修 改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My summer travel started terribly I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it Luckily I had all my money on my pocket but the only clothes I had was those I had on It felt very strange to travel without any luggages When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last 答案 My summer travel started terribly I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou I buying was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday I bought my ticket there a but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it Luckily and I had all my money on my pocket but the only clothes I had was those I had on It felt very strange to in were travel without any luggages When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes I feel very luggage friend s felt 2017 全国 2 卷 Dear George It s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76 back home Thank you very much for showing them around 77 your city and providing us for the wonderful meals After 78 we said goodbye to you we went to Washington D C 79 where we stayed for three days My brother was so much fond 80 of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81 another couple of day However my father had to return to 82 work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon It 83 was really a nice experience If you d like to make trip to 84 our city some day I will be better than happy to be your guide 85 Yours Mike 84 make 后加 a make a trip 表示 旅行 为固定搭配 85 better 改为 more more than 用于修饰形容词时表示 非常 此处表示 我非 常愿意做你的向导 better than 表示 好于 不符合语境 2017 四川卷 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行 右边横线上画一个沟 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按以下情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用 斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66 Morning and was always late with work His boss wanted to 67 fire him if he didn t start coming on time but he went to 68 the doctor for a help The doctor gave him some 69 medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed 70 The man did as told and slept really well wake up before 71 the alarm had even gone off He had time for a properly 72 breakfast and was still the first reach the factory Boss he 73 said that medicine really works I m pleasing to hear 74 it said his boss but where were you yesterday 75 2017 重庆卷 重庆卷 短文改错 共短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题小题 每小题 1 份 满分份 满分 10 分 分 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误 请找出 并按以下情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也 用斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 请在答题卡上作答 Today is Sunday I ve been in Canada for two months This is the first time that I ve been away my family for such a 76 long time With the help of Katia a roommate of me I ve 77 soon got used to live without my parents around Katia like 78 many other Russian girls are nice and lively We became 79 friends shortly after we meet each other Although her English 80 is a little hardly to understand we enjoy chatting and we 81 usually talk a lot about our own family We re both surprised 82 that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different Now 83 we are planning a small party for the next Sunday There Katia 84 will introduce me to some of her friends one of who has been 85 to China several times I just can t wait 2017 高考英语试题高考英语试题 2017 高考英语大纲全国 I 卷 It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76 prize on the Story Writing Show All I had to do 77 was to write a story or present it My teachers 78 have been telling me how great my writing was 79 So if they had said was true I would have a chance 80 of winning the prize What were better I had useful 81 help There was Uncle Chen gentleman living 82 near my house who was a very much famous writer 83 He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84 advices on how to write like a real writer 85 2017 高考英语浙江卷 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 www co 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 例如 It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you Luckily I the was completely free then so I ll to say yes I ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday am on After shopping Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple They are silently and it was clearly that things were not going well As we left Mother stopped on their table Excuse me she said put her arm around the unhappy old woman You remind me so many of my mother May I hug 拥抱 you The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it After we left I said That was very nice of you Mother So I didn t think she looked like Grandma Neither did me said Mother cheerfully 2017 高考英语重庆卷 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 共 10 分 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误 请找出 并按以下情况改正 此行多一词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用 斜线划掉 此行缺一词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一词 在错词的下面划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 请在答题卡上作答 Here is my idea about how a friend is like Firstly 76 a friend is someone you can share your secrets If you 77 tell him a secret never will he talks about it with anybody78 else Besides a friend is always good listener when you79 need one After hear your sad stories he will say some80 words that is nice and warm Still your happiness makes81 him happily too What s more a good friend is willing to82 offer the help to which you need or can at least give you83 some advices In a word friends are those you like and84 trust and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with85 them 解析 2017 高考英语辽宁卷 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满份 10 分 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有 10 初语言错误 每句中最多有两处 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错 误 在该行右边横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按以下情况 改正 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划掉 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符合 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 修改 在错的词下划 横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 至允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 第四部分 第一节 Christine was just a girl in one of my class I never knew much about her except for that she was strange she didn t talk many her hair was black 解析 except that 中不能再用 for much 解析 修饰动词 talk 应该用 much 此处是副词 many 没有此用法 and purple and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater although in the wore 解析 谓语动词用过去式 不能用过去分词 even 解析 although 是连词 不能修饰介词短语 even 可以 summer she was in fact rather attractively and she never seemed care what attractive 解析 做表语 用形容词 to 解析 seem 后用带 to 的不定式 the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate I didn t really classmates 解析 名词需用复数 want to get closest to her it was only when we did their chemistry project close 解析 get 是连系动词 后跟形容词 our 解析 人称和前面一致 together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did begin 解析 时态前后不一致 2017 高考英语试题高考英语试题 2017 全国普通高等学校统一招生考试英语试题 辽宁 卷全国普通高等学校统一招生考试英语试题 辽宁 卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文 中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 花掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 1 处起 不计分 When I was in high school most of my friend had bicycles I hoped I could also have it friends one One day I saw a second hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan I asked my fatherthe which for money But he said he could only give me half of the money He should find the other half I myself So I went to sell newspapers after the school My father was pleased if I showed him drop the the money a month after He gives me the other when fifty You can imagine how much happy later gave drop much I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle 6 删除冠词 the 解析 after school 放学后 固定搭配 不需要定冠词 2017 全国普通高等学