初中英语写作技巧

初中英语写作技巧清华大学英语系测试：为中学英语量身定做.官方网站：/ 清华大学英语教授50年研究成果初中英语写作技巧潘志宇编集书面表达，首先要抓住所给的提示，然后运用所学词汇、语法及句型，避繁就简，简明表达要讲的内容。 那么，如何才能做好英语写作题呢？这里介绍五个要诀供你应考时参考。 一. 紧扣中心； 二. 意思连贯； 三. 富于变化； 四. 注意时态； 五. 不“生造”句子。 书面表达是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型，一般来说，书面表达采取情景作文和控制作文两种形式。情景作文多为看图填词、看图写话、看图作文等形式，后者指根据所给条件进行写作的形式。 以上两种书面表达形式，都不同于自由写作，都不允许同学们随意发挥，更不许逐词逐句地翻译提示，而是要求考生抓住信息大意，用自己所学的、熟悉的语言进行表达。所以，无论哪一种书面表达形式，都要求做到以下几点： （1）紧扣题目，准确、全面地表达出要点中规定的全部信息和内容，不得遗漏； （2）表达正确，意思连贯，过渡自然； （3）格式正确，书写规范，标点正确，字数符合要求。 做好“书面表达”这道题，应该从以下几方面入手： 一充分准备，打好基础。 为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法。其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法。 二仔细审题，明确要求。 对题目所提供的信息要认真分析，明确要求，做到心中有数。要对所提供的信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具体化、条理化，为开始动笔做好准备工作，还要搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。 三抓住重点，寻求思路。 根据题目所提供的信息，草拟提纲，寻求逻辑次序，确定如何下手，否则，语无伦次的文章将不会被人接受，也不可能得到高分。 四遣词造句，表达规范。 用词要适当，不可逐句把提示汉译英，亦不可生拼硬凑，不要硬拿英语单词到中文句子里去对号，否则写出中文式英语，闹出笑话。一般来讲，写作时，应尽量选出你有把握的词，尽量使用短句（简单句）。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。要正确使用关联词，如 and，or，but，so，because，since 等，以便行文自然流畅。除此之外，写作时还要注意时态、语态的各种句式的交替作用，使文章显得得体，表达流畅。 五修改润色，锦上添花。 作文写完之后，应注意检查修改，修改时先从全局修改。首先要检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是否交待了，最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求，最后是否一致。 局部修改，也就是段落、句子水平上的修改。作局部修改时，要检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。 另外，值得一提的是，考生修改时，一定要注意文章长短（词数）是否达到了要求。为了便于辨认，修改好后，还要认真誊写一遍，英语誊写的基本要点如下: 1四周应留空。 2标题应写在第一行的中央。文章与标题间空 23 行，除介词、连词、冠词外，标题中每一个实词的第一个字母均应大写，但如果第一个单词是介词，连词等，这个词的第一个字母仍应大写。 3段与段之间一般不空行，但每段第一行应缩进 45 个字母所占的位置。 4书写工整、规范，卷面整洁，词间距要一致，尽量避免移行。 5要删掉一个词时，用一条粗横线划掉，不要用括号括起来。 誊写完后，还应仔细校阅 12 遍。校阅要逐词逐句进行，注意检查语法、拼写、标点、大小写等方面的错误。校阅是自检的最后一关，应严肃认真的进行，尽可能地消灭一切差错，增强文章的效果。 经过以上工作，最后呈现在评卷老师面前的应该是一份干干净净、整整齐齐、主题突出、语言流畅、用词恰当的作文。清华大学英语系测试：为中小学生英语量身定做.官方网站：/ 清华大学英语教授50年研究成果八年级英语期中测试卷二单项选择（共15小题；每小题1分，计15分）25He is so _that we all believe what he said.A. helpful B. generous C. smart D. honest26. -_ is your school? -Only ten minutes walk.A. How long B. How soon C. How often D. How far27.Could you say _about it, please? Id like to know_.A. nothing else; more B. anything else; mostC. anything other; most D. something else; more28.Max was very careless. He _over the plates when he walked past the table.A. passed B. moved C. knocked D. went29.The waiter was friendly and welcomed me _ a smile _his face.A. to wear; on B. with; in C. to wear; in D. with; on30 I hope you can give me _.A. some advices B. some advice C. some advise D. some advises31. -Did you enjoy _at the party, Jimmy? -Yes, Mum I enjoyed _very much.A. yourself; ourselves B. yourselves, myselfC. yourself; myself D. yourselves, ourselves32 September25th was one of _days in 2008 because Shenzhou VII was sent up successfully on that day.A. exciting B. more exciting C. the most exciting D. much exciting33. There may be _people in the park today than yesterday because it is raining heavily.A. more B. less C. many D. fewer34. In American English, football is called _.A. soccer B. football C. American football D. British football35. -Is this schoolbag yours? -No. Mine is _this one.A. as small as B. as big as C. the same size as D. not the same size as36. In Home Economic classes, the students learn how to _.A. cook and sew B. read and write C. sing and dance D. drive and swim37. You wont become a good artist if you dont practice _.A. to speak English B. speaking English C. to draw D. drawing38. Dont smoke or drink _. You should keep healthyA. too much B. much too C. too many D. many too39. I bought a new pen last Saturday, _I cant find it now.A. or B. for C. but D. and 三完形填空（共10小题；每小题1分，计10分）There are four seasons in most of the countries. But the weather is not always the same. In England, winter is not very cold and summer is not very hot. There is not a great _40_between summer and winter. Do you know why? England has a warm winter and a cool summer because it is an _41_country.In winter the sea is warmer than the land. The winds _42_the sea bring _43_air to England. In summer the sea is cooler than the land. The winds from the sea bring cool air to England. The west winds blow over England all the year around. They blow from the southwest. They are wet winds. They also bring _44_to England. So England has _45_rain all the year .Sometimes it rains heavily. The west of England is wetter than the east. In Canada they have four seasons, too. But the average( 平均 )temperature is very low. Spring is usually very _46_in most part of the country. It comes in February. People can still go skating in some places. Summer is usually very cool. Early in the morning the weather is so cold that people usually wear sweaters. Autumn comes _47_summer. Canadians like to watch maples(枫叶) in the park or on the hills. They are really beautiful. Winter is the_48_ season of the year. Its often freezing cold. There is thick ice on the river or lake. Children like to go skating there. Of course, they should wear warm, thick coats, _49_they will catch a cold.40A. different B. difference C. same D. unlike41. A. land B. island C. big D. small42. A. from B. to C. come D. go43. A. hot B. cold C. warm D. cool44. A. wind B. snow C. rain D. wet 45. A. a little B. a few C. a bit of D. a lot of46. A. warm B. hot C. cool D. cold47. A. after B. before C. with D. in48. A. cold B. colder C. coldest D. warmest 49. A. and B. or C. but D. so 四阅读理解（共12小题；每小题2分，计24分）阅读下面短文，从每小题所给A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。(A)THE SCHOOL NEWS June 8th, 2008School TripStudents in Junior Two had a great time on the school trip on Childrens Day. They went to Blue Water Aquarium by bus. The teachers were very happy because the students cleaned the buses after the trip. American VisitorsSixteen visitors from America arrived at our school on June 3rd, Saturday, And they have visited a few places of interest in Beijing.Football WorldHeres a good news for football fans! Our school football team goes to the final .The final will be held in South Hill School in Moonlight Town on Sunday, June 18th.We need your support!School ConcertTherell be a concert in our school on June 30th. Some students will show their talents (才能)by singing, dancing and playing the piano at the music ball.50Junior Two students _ on Childrens Day.Avisited Beijing Bwatched a matchCtook a trip Dgave a talent show51On June _, therell be a concert in our school.A1stB3rdC9thD30th52We can infer(推断 )that the football fans in our school will go to the _to cheer for our team.A. Our school B. Blue Water Aquarium C. America D. Moonlight town （B） This weekend Bob and his friends went to a mountain. When they got there, they put up their tents(帐篷) and then rode their horses to the forest to see how the trees were growing. In the afternoon, when they were going back, it started to snow. Then minutes later, they couldnt find the road. Bob knew there were two roads. One road went to the camp(营地), and the other went to his house. But all was white now. Everything was the same. How could he and his friends go back to the camp? Soon Bob had an idea. Maybe the horses could help them. They can let the horses take them back! But what would happen if the horses took the road to his house? That was going to be a long trip. It was getting late. They rode on and on. At last the horses stopped. Where were they? No one could tell. Bob looked around. What was that under the tree? It was one of their tents!53. Bob and his friends went to the forest to _.A. put up their camp B. find their way homeC. look at the mountain in the snow D. see the trees54. Bob and his friends couldnt find their way back because _.A. there was only one road to the camp B. they didnt know where they wereC. there were no roads in the mountain at all D. the white snow covered(覆盖) everything55. The horses stopped because _.A. it was getting late B. they were tired after running for a long wayC. they knew that they got to the camp D. they saw Bobs house56. The story happened _.A. on a cold winter day B. on a dark rainy eveningC. at their school D. in summer (C)Will it matter if you dont take your breakfast? A short time ago, a test was given in the US. People of different ages, from 12 to 83,were asked to have a test. During the test, these people were given all kinds of breakfast, and sometimes they got no breakfast at all. Scientists wanted to see how well their bodies worked when they had eaten different kinds of breakfasts.The results show that if a person eats a right breakfast, he or she will work better than if he or she has no breakfast. If a student has fruit, egg, bread and milk before going to school, he will learn more quickly and listen more carefully in class.The result is opposite to what some people think. Having no breakfast will not help you lose weight(减轻体重).This is because people become so hungry at noon that they eat too much for lunch. They will gain weight (增加体重 )instead of losing it. You will lose more weight if you reduce your other meals.57. During the test, the people were given _.A. no breakfast at all B. different foods or sometimes noneC. very rich breakfast D. little food for breakfast58. The results show that _.A. breakfast has great effect (影响)on work and studies.B. breakfast has little to do with a persons workC. a person will work better if he only has fruit and milk.D. girl students should have little for breakfast.59. According to the passage, some people think that if you dont have breakfast you will _.A. be healthier B. work better C. lose weight D. lose your way60. The word “reduce” in the last sentence means_A. 增加 B. 减少 C. 放弃 D. 享用61Which of the following is not right?A. Its bad for your health to have no breakfastB. Too little for breakfast and too much for lunch may make you fatter.C. If you dont eat much for lunch and supper, you may lose weight.D. The more breakfast you have, the more quickly you will learn in class.II.非选择题部分（67分）五词汇运用（计12分）根据句子的意思，用括号中所给汉语提示或英语单词的适当形式填空。（共12小题；每小题1分，计12分）62.Its _(不流行)to wear such a hat.63.Do you like reading _(杂志)about geography?64.I am sorry to say that he has the _（最少的）money of the three.65.He is smart and he can always answer the questions _(正确地)66. Mr Zhou often helps people _ problems.(解决)67. What about _(邀请) the old friends to our birthday party?68. In autumn,_(leaf)turn yellow and fall off trees.69. Hi, children, look after _(you)while climbing hills. 70. Old Brown likes to sit by the river and enjoy the _(beautiful)of the sunset.71. He told us not only the _ names but also their stories. (hero) 72. -How often do you go to the piano lessons? -_(two)a week.73. Thank you for _ to let me go there. (agree)六任务型阅读 （共10空, 每空1分，满分10分）(每空1词)Today we have many ways to learn and enjoy ourselves. But why do many people still do some reading every day?First, reading books is fun. You can always keep yourself happy if you like reading. This is especially useful when the weather is bad. It is a relaxing hobby too. You can really become lost in a book.Next, you can read a book almost anywhere: in a car, in a waiting room, on a plane, in bed-even in the bath. All you need is a book! Reading is a convenient( 方便的 )hobby as it is easy to stop and then start again.Another good reason for reading books is that it is useful. if you read as a hobby you will get better and better at it. This means that you will read faster and will become better at understanding what you read. As your reading improves, you will find your school work becomes much easier. Many school subjects depend on good reading and as you read, you learn more and more.Some people say that reading is out of date. That is not true. You have to be able to read to use a computer and ,the better you read, the better your computer skills will be. Reading is hardly out of date. What other hobby could be more useful or more enjoyable!_74_ is a good hobbyReason 1Reason2Reason3Conclusion（结论)Its fun because it can help people stay_75_and help them spend their_76_quicky.Its convenient because it can go on _77_and it may start or _78_easily at any time.Its useful because it can make peoples understanding _79_and help people learn _80_and faster.Its the most useful and enjoyable _81_.Many people lose _82_in books, so it is _83_out of date.七. 缺词填空（共10空；每空1分，计10分）根据短文内容和首字母提示，在下文空格处填入适当的词使短文完整。（每空一词）An American housewife k_84_ a monkey as a pet. She has had the m 85 for many years. The most i 86 thing about this monkey is that it can w 87 dishes. It washes the dishes for the woman every day. It likes to wash dishes. It will s 88 hour after hour washing dishes. It n 89_ breaks a dish. But sometimes it washes the same dishes o 90 and over again. If the woman tries to stop it, it then g 91 angry. It begins to throw the dishes e 92 . But this does n_93_happen very often.八书面表达（计35分）B.作文。(20分)某英语刊物正在进行“我的母亲”的征文活动。请帮助Lili根据下面的材料以“我的母亲”写一篇短文 。写作要求：1根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。2可以适当增加一些内容。中文提示内容不必逐句翻译。3注意书写工整，卷面整洁。4字数80-100字左右。写作材料：1. 她高个子，身材苗条，带一副眼镜。2. 她勤劳，善良，性格幽默。当我有忧愁的时候，总向她求助。3. 她关心我的学习情况，为了让我有更多的时间学习，她总是尽她最大的努力。4. 一次，母亲生病还为我做饭、洗衣服，我激动得热泪盈眶。她永远值得我尊敬和爱戴参考词汇：1勤劳 hard-working 2.眼泪tear 3.激动excited 4.尊敬respectMy mother_答案单选25-29 DDDCD 30-34 BCCDA 35-39 DADAC完型40-49 BBACC DDACB阅读50-52 CDD 53-56 DDCA 57-61BACBD词汇62. unpopular 63.magazines 64.least 65correctly 66.solve/to solve 67.inviting 68. leaves 69.yourselves 70.beauty 71.heroes 72.twice 73. agreeing 任务型阅读：74Reading 75.happy 76.time 77.anywhere 78.stop79. better 80.more 81.hobby 82.themselves 83.hardly缺词填空84.keeps 85.monkey 86.interesting 87.wash 88.spend89.never 90.over 91.gets 92.everythere 93.not书面表达A:94.is very generous, willing to share blems with my new school, feel very bored96.the best boys, says a bad word97.is getting warmer and warmer98.himself how to make a home page99.is your ideal school life likeB: My mum is tall and slim. She wears a pair of glasses. she has a good sense of humor. When something worries me, I go to her. She knows the importance of the knowledge so she takes care of my study and often tells me to study hard. She tries her best to do everything so that I can spend more time on my study.Once she was ill. But when I got home at night, I found she was still making supper, washing clothes for me. I was so excited that tears came to my eyes.Such is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman. I will respect and love her forever.清华大学英语系测试：为中小学生英语量身定做.官方网站：/ 清华大学英语教授50年研究成果八年级英语上册课文句型填空Unit 11 你通常在周末做什么？_ _ you usually _ _ weekends?2 我经常看电影。I _ _ _ _ _.3 他总是玩滑板。He _ _ _.4 她有时购物。She _ _.She _ _ _.5 他们很少锻炼。They _ _ _.6 我们从来不看报。We _ _ _.7 他多久上网一次？_ _ _ he _ the _ ?8 一周一次或两次。_ or _ a week9 一个月三次。_ _ a month10 一年三或四次。_ or _ _ a _11 一周两或三次。_ or _ _ a week12 所有学生_ _13 没有学生_ _14 学生活动的调查结果the _ _ the student _ _15 关于看电视的调查结果挺有趣。The _ _ “watch TV” are _.16 一些学生很活跃。Some stud