The popularity of Riding a Bike.doc

Score: 86The popularity of Riding a BikeBicycle plays an increasing important role in several aspects of our lives. Up till now, many people in some big cities still love bicycles and make fully use of bicycles.They take cycle as a means of transportation, sports equipment and even enterainment页: 1拼写错误，请确认是entertainment还是entrainment。 device.Why are bicycles so popular in some big cities? Firstly, as a means of transportation, riding bike around is envirionment-friendly. There is no greenhouse gas emission at all. It is a convenient and door-to-door way of transportation. You canride页: 1句首第一个字母，要大写，可改为Ride。 it through a narrow alley, on a bumpy country road or even a mountain path. Secondly, riding bike on regular basis does good to your health. Cycling is a sport , so riding bike frequently can keep us in shape. If you choose to ride bike instead of car or public transportation to go to work , this habbit页: 1拼写错误，请确认是habit还是hobbit。 will do you great good in the long run. In addition,in some cases bikes are more prone to be stolen.Anyway,I agree that riding a bike can help us protect our environment and save the natural resource,but also make us stronger.Professors comments and suggestions:1. Fair effort（努力）.2. Your paper could have been more focused for this assignment.3. An evaluation（核计）of the total words in the manuscript（原稿）I received from you verifies（证明）that the length is first-class. This discussion displays an authoritative view on this theme（主题）.4. You present shortcomings（错误）in spelling. Next time look for a pattern（模式）in your spelling mistakes.5. You have included a few grammatical defects. Next time go back over your work and correct your mistakes.6. I just perceived some spelling and grammatical errors in your writing. Please review and try to do better next time.7. You were way out in front by handing this in before the rest of the class.Usage:l assignment：作业。英语里，assignment、composition、creation、manuscript、submission都可表示“作文；作业”的意思。l authoritative：可信的。authoritative还可表示“权威的”意思。l display：显示。display还可表示“展示；夸耀”的意思。l go back over：仔细查对。l look for：寻找；期待。l manuscript：作业；手稿；原稿。英语里，manuscript、assignment、composition、creation、submission都可表示“作文；作业”的意思。l perceive：意识到；觉察到。l present：显示。present还可表示“赠送；提出”的意思。l be way out in front：遥遥领先。way做副词，相当于very，表示“非常”之意。文章体检报告 -士基本信息所得分数86.39关键词数2关键词排名等级C文章长度194长度排名等级B拼写错误3语法评价B作业提交时