高考英语一轮复习 第三部分 写作提升系列 第一板块 第4节 定语从句的写作课件 北师大版.ppt

第四节定语从句的写作 技法指导 一 写作中常用的几种定语从句1 关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who whom whose that which as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点 尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜 inmyopinion thosewhohavereceivedherdonationwillbeencouragedtostudyevenharderandtrytheirbesttoachievesuccess 2014 广东高考满分作文 butthebestgiftihavereceivedisawatch whichmydadgavemeonmylastbirthday 2014 重庆高考满分作文 但我收到的最好的礼物是一块表 是上次生日我爸爸给我的 2 关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when where why引导的定语从句 thereasonwhypeoplecelebratethefestivalisthattheybelieveitisthetimewhenthemoonisatitsfullestandbrightestinthewholeyear andpeoplewillgathertogethereatingmooncakesandappreciatingthefullmoon 2013 辽宁高考满分作文 人们庆祝这个节日的原因是 他们相信这时候是一年中月亮最满 最亮的时候 人们聚在一起吃月饼 赏满月 3 介词 which whom 引导的定语从句ourclassismadeupof52students allofwhomarefriendlyandhard working 2014 天津高考书面表达 我们班由52个学生组成 所有人都很友好 很勤奋 学以致用 用适当的关系词填空1 thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety 2013 广东高考满分作文 2 everyoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourdiyskills 2014 辽宁高考满分作文 3 myteacheradvisedmetorepeatthematerialsseveraltimesandreadthemaloud whichtheythinkwillhelpimprovemymemory 2013 四川高考书面表达 4 iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweworkedinthesmalltown 5 shewaseducatedatbeijinguniversity afterwhichshewenttohaveheradvancedstudyabroad 二 定语从句的写法定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句 因此在写作时可采用 三步法 第一步 写出两个简单句 第二步 在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇 这个词在两个简单句中都有 第三步 把另一个简单句改成定语从句 要特别注意引导词的选择 示例 第一步 写出两个简单句 theforeignerisfromcanada hevisitedourclassyesterday 第二步 在句 中找出一个要修饰的词汇 theforeigner 第三步 用句 充当定语从句 theforeigner为先行词指人 句 中的代词he指代theforeigner且在句子中作主语 故用who或that作引导词 theforeignerwho thatvisitedourclassyesterdayisfromcanada 学以致用 把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句1 i vealwayslongedforthedays iwillbeabletobeindependentthen i ve always longed for the days when i will be able to be independent 2 ihaveafriend herfatherisanengineer i have a friend whose father is an engineer 3 theyplantedthetrees thetreesdidn tneedmuchwater they planted the trees that which didn t need much water 4 thisisthebestmethod itcanbeusedagainstpollution this is the best method that can be used against pollution 5 theysenttheelderlysomefruits cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem theelderlyalwaysfeellonely they sent some fruits to the elderly who always feel lonely cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them 三 定语从句写作的几点注意事项1 误用关系词误 iliveinbeijing whereisthecapitalofchina 正 iliveinbeijing whichisthecapitalofchina 误 ihaveafriend who snameisliumei 正 ihaveafriend whosenameisliumei 2 句子残缺误 thereweremanystudentstookpartintheenglishcompetition 正 thereweremanystudentswhotookpartintheenglishcompetition 误 thosewhoinfavoroftheproposal pleaseraiseyourhands 正 thosewhoareinfavoroftheproposal pleaseraiseyourhands 3 有多余词误 thefilmisawitlastnightwasreallyverygood 正 thefilmisawlastnightwasreallyverygood 误 lastweek ireturnedtothevillagewhereigrewupthereinmychildhood 正 lastweek ireturnedtothevillagewhereigrewupinmychildhood 4 定语从句与并列句的混淆误 infact smokingisabadhabit itdoesgreatharmtopeople shealth 正 infact smokingisabadhabit which anditdoesgreatharmtopeople shealth 误 hisparentstoldhimmanytimesnottoplaybesidetheriver itdidn thelp 正 hisparentstoldhimmanytimesnottoplaybesidetheriver which butitdidn thelp 学以致用 单句改错1 thosehaveworkexperiencecanfindajobeasily 答案those后加who2 somesongsremindusofthepeoplewhichwelove 答案which who m 3 thisisthefactorywevisiteditlastyear 答案去掉it 4 shehasbeenateacherfor30yearsintheplacewhereusedtobeapoorarea 答案where which that5 asachild jackstudiedinavillageschool itisnamedafterhisgrandfather 答案it which或在it前加and 演练提升 完成句子1 曾经 我在学习英语中 尤其在词汇和语法方面面对着一个难题 依我看 它不可能被克服 once iwasfacedwithgreatdifficultyinlearningenglish especiallyinvocabularyandgrammar which frommypointofview is unlikely to overcome 2014 山东高考满分作文 2 当今 父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情 这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母 nowadaysparentshavedoneeverythingfortheirsinglechildren which makes the children rely on their parentsbadly 2013 福建高考满分作文 3 你知道 中国结非常受中国人的喜欢 as you know chineseknotsareverypopularwithchinesepeople 2013 新课标全国卷 满分作文 4 从短文中 我们会了解到一个善良的洗衣女工 尽管工资低但她决定用节省下的钱捐助一所大学一笔钱 希望可帮助到那些财政有困难的学生 fromthepassage wehavelearnedthatakindlaundrywomanwho got paid lowlydecidedtodonatetoauniversityagreatdealofmoneyshe had savedbylivingasimplelife hopingtohelpthosestudentswithfinancialproblems 2014 广东高考满分作文 5 我经常想起被陌生人的言语伤害和侮辱的时候 甚至有时是来自熟悉的人 ioftenthinkaboutthetimeswhen ihavefelt hurtand insulted by rude remarks from strangersandsometimesevenfromacquaintances 请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学kate的英语短文 尽可能多地使用定语从句 1 我有一个同学叫kate 她的妈妈是我以前的英语老师 2 kate是一个容易相处的人 我们都喜欢她 3 kate在此次口语竞赛中获得第一名 这使得她妈妈很高兴 4 新年就要到了 到时kate会和她妈妈一起去香港 5 众所周知 香港是一个购物天堂 kate打算在那里买她需要的东西 参考范文 i have a classmate called kate whose mother ismy former english teacher kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and we