高考英语一轮总复习 阅读与写作 旅游景点介绍课件 外研版.ppt

阅读与写作 11 写作中常见的句法错误旅游景点介绍随着社会的发展 旅游越来越走进人们的生活 因此 人们也越来越关注各个旅游景点的情况 旅游景点介绍类的文章在高考中也越来越多 美文赏析capetownonthesoutherntipofafricaisafamousmeltingpotofculturesandaworld classtouristdestination thevarietyofattractionsrangefromthehistoricalandarchitecturaltothoseoriented towardstheoutdoorsandadventure tablemountain undeniablythecity smostbreathtaking sight tablemountainrecentlymadeitintothefinalroundofthenew7wondersofnaturecontest youcanchoosetoeithertakeacablecaruptothetoporcanenjoyachallengingwalkthroughtheskeletongorgetrail onceyouhavecompletedtheclimb theunbeatable viewsofthecitywillmaketheexperienceworthwhile robbenisland locatingintablebayjustbelowtablemountain robbenislandisamajorsymbolofsouthafrica ssegregated 被隔离的 past itisfamouslyknownfortheisolated prisonithostedduringtheapartheidyearswhenpoliticalfiguressuchasnobelwinnernelsonmandelawereforcedtostaythereformanyyears kirstenboschbotanicalgardens situatedatthefootoftablemountain themagnificent 壮观的 kirstenboschbotanicalgardensholdmorethan20 000nativeplantspeciesthatcanbeobservedatyourownleisure youwillneedatleastanhourtostroll aroundthelowerpartofthegardens oryoucanenjoyashorterwalkalongthepathwaysoftheslopes must seeattractionsincludethepleasantgrassandrockgardens don t forget stopping off at the bird bath a pool that occupies the center of a shady area inhabited by 70 year old yellowwood trees victoriaandalbertwaterfrontbuiltin1860 thev awaterfrontisfirstandforemostanentertainmentquarterthatattractsover13millionvisitorsannually itseclectic 兼收并蓄的 arrayofshops restaurants hotelsandtheatersattractcrowdsallyearround especiallyinthecoldwintermonths namedafterqueenvictoriaandhersecondsonalfred thiscontinuestobeoneoftheliveliestlocationsincapetown 解题导语 本文主要介绍了南非开普敦的主要旅游景点 它们各有其特色 值得一游 一 阅读与积累1 攻克疑难词汇 destinationn 目的地 orientv 朝向 面对 breathtakingadj 激动人心的 惊人的thescenewasoneofbreathtakingbeauty 美妙的景色令人叹为观止 unbeatableadj 难以击败的 isolatedadj 孤立的 孤零零的 strollv 遛达 散步k 2 攻克疑难句itisfamouslyknownfortheisolatedprisonithostedduringtheapartheiryearswhenpoliticalfiguressuchasnobelwinnernelsonmandelawereforcedtostaythereformanyyears 结构分析本句是主从复合句 句中ithosted 为省略了引导词的定语从句 修饰先行词prison when引导定语从句 修饰先行词apartheidyears 尝试翻译它因在种族隔离制度盛行时期岛上建立的与世隔绝的监狱而闻名 在那段时期里 一些政治人物 如诺贝尔奖获得者nelsonmandela被迫在那里待了很多年 二 理解与书面表达1 理解文章主旨thepassagemainlytellsussome attractions and their characteristics 2 理解与书面表达文中画线的句子是书面表达中易犯的错误之一 请同学们改正 答案locating located stopping tostop 3 写作中常见的句法错误 考试大纲 对书面表达中应用词汇和语法结构的准确性提出了较高的要求 准确性就是要求考生写出语法正确的句子 包括时态 语态 用词和句法等 但是不少考生由于英语基础差和受到汉语思维习惯等的影响 在写作时经常不自觉地采用一些不规范的表达 就句法而言 书面表达常见的错误包括 1 主谓不一致例 tenyearsareashorttimeinaperson slife 改正 tenyearsisashorttimeinaperson slife 应用 everyboyandeverygirlinourcountryreceivefreeeducation 改正 every boy and every girl in our country receives free education manyastudenthavechattedonline 改正 many a student has chatted online 2 时态不一致例 theywalkedandwalkedandsoontheycometoasmallriver 改正 theywalkedandwalkedandsoontheycametoasmallriver 应用 then iputmybookundermydesk openingitandstartedlookingforanswers 改正 then i put my book under my desk opened it and started looking for answers afterthat wewentboatingonalakeandhavingagoodtime 改正 after that we went boating on a lake and had a good time 3 词类不一致 例 theirmotherishonestlyandfriendly 改正 theirmotherishonestandfriendly 应用 thehost skindnessandgenerousmadeusfeelathome 改正 the host s kindness and generosity made us feel at home themaninthearmchairhasfallensleep 改正 the man in the armchair has fallen asleep 4 逻辑不一致例 theteacherwasn tlookingatme buticopiedsomething 改正 theteacherwasn tlookingatme soicopiedsomething 应用 hewenttothesoldier takingoutashillingandgaveittohim andthesoldierrefusedtotakeitandwentfaraway 改正 he went to the soldier took out a shilling and gave it to him but the soldier refused to take it and went far away nexttimeyoulookataperson seeifhisorherearsareredandpale 改正 next time you look at a person see if his or her ears are red or pale 5 代词替代不一致例 therearesomanybooksinthefairthatidon tknowwhattobuy 改正 therearesomanybooksinthefairthatidon tknowwhichtobuy 应用 itisuswhoaretoblameforthepovertybecauseweusedto produce childrenwithoutlimit 改正 it is we who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce children without limit hehadmanyphotostakenduringtheholidaysandshowedittome 改正 he had many photos taken during the holidays andshowed them to me 6 介词多余例 workhard andyouwillsucceedatsometime 改正 workhard andyouwillsucceedsometime 应用 atthefirsttimeisawhim hewasplayingfootballwithhisfriendsontheplayground 改正 the first time i saw him he was playing football with his friends on the playground theirchildrencannotgotoschoolbecausetheydon thaveenoughmoneytosendtheirchildrentothere 改正 their children cannot go to school because they don t have enough money to send their children there 7 连词多余例 myfriendsentmeanemailtoaskwhetherhowiwasgettingalongwithmystudies 改正 myfriendsentmeanemailtoaskhowiwasgettingalongwithmystudies 应用 assoonastheweatherturnsfavorable andweshallannounceflights 改正 as soon as the weather turns favorable we shall announce flights becausehewasverycareless sohemademanymistakesintheexam 改正 because he was very careless he made many mistakes in the exam 改正 he was very careless so he made many mistakes in the exam 8 冠词多余例 whenyoureadelectroniccards youcangetnotonlypicturesbutalsothebackgroundmusicandevenanimatedcartoons 改正 whenyoureadelectroniccards youcangetnotonlypicturesbutalsobackgroundmusicandevenanimatedcartoons 应用 nowthemanagerinthechargeofthecompanymakesitclearthatpartofthemoneyspentonadvertisingiswasted 改正 now the manager in charge of the company makes it clear that part of the money spent on advertising is wasted theteachertoldhisstudentsnottowritesillythingsinthepublicplaces 改正 the teacher told his students not to write silly things in public places 9 句子成分残缺例1 somepeopleagainstthesuggestion 改正 somepeopleareagainstthesuggestion 应用 ourschoolisafamousschoolwithlonghistory 改正 our school is a famous school with a long history therebeingmanysubjects thestudentscanchoosewhichevertheywouldlikeattend 改正 there being many subjects the students can choose whichever they would like to attend allflightsthismorninghaveputoffbecauseofthickfog 改正 all flights this morning have been put off because of thick fog themanwasagoodswimmerandsoonpulledthedrowninggirlbacktheshore 改正 the man was a good swimmer and soon pulled the drowning girl back to the shore inpast theoldmanlivedinthecountryside 改正 in the past the old man lived in the countryside 10 及物动词与不及物动词误用例 mandependswaterformanyyears 改正 mandependsonwaterformanyyears 应用 theteachercaughtmecheatingintheexam butluckilyhedidn tpunishforcheating 改正 the teacher caught me cheating in the exam but luckily he didn t punish me for cheating onedaysomepeopleontheshorelistenedshoutsforhelp 改正 one day some people on the shore heard shouts for help 11 非谓语动词误用例 themanadmittedtobreaktheglass 改正 themanadmittedbreakingtheglass 应用 hisfriendsobjectedtohisgiveuphisjob 改正 his friends objected to his giving up his job thegirlregrettedtohurtherbestfriend 改正 the girl regretted hurting her best friend theflowersneedbewatered 改正 the flowers need watering myfamilyexpectedmegoingtocollege 改正 my family expected me to go to college theboywasmadewashthecarasapunishment 改正 the boy was made to wash the car as a punishment thetopstudentiswellpreparedfortheexamandhasnothingtoworry 改正 the top student is well prepared for the exam andhas nothing to worry about ifindthetexteasytobeunderstood 改正 i find the text easy to understand comparingwiththetraditionalcards electroniccardsaremoreinterestingandlively 改正 compared with the traditional cards electronic cards are more interesting and lively 12 词语搭配错误例 whichcanbeseenfromhiseyes heisangry 改正 ascanbeseenfromhiseyes heisangry 应用 asthedaysgoingon hewasbeginningtorealizehismistake 改正 with the days going on he was beginning to realize his mistake 改正 as the days went on he was beginning to realize his mistake howfineweatherwe rehaving 改正 what fine weather we re having inthedarkstreet therewasn