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四、八级写作阅卷与思考本文由张静SUNNY贡献 ppt文档可能在WAP端浏览体验不佳。建议您优先选择TXT，或下载源文件到本机查看。 英语专业四八级 写作阅卷与思考 华东理工大学 颜静兰 高等学校英语专业英语教学大纲 高等学校英语专业英语教学大纲 培养21 世纪英语专业人才，使英语专业教学 在新台阶上展开，使学生整体素质提高。 ? 大纲在培养目标：“1333” ? 一个基础、三种知识、三种能力、三种素质 高等学校英语专业培养目标 打好基本功 拓宽知识 培养能力 提高素质 语 音 听 力 阅 读 人 文 学 科 技 知 识 专 业 基 础 知 识 获 取 知 识 的 能 力 独 立 思 考 的 能 力 创 新 的 能 力 思 想 道 德 素 质 文 化 素 质 心 理 素 质 语 法 口 语 写 作 科 知 识 词 汇 翻 译 1. 新版英语专业八级考试大纲（2005年起执行） 新版英语专业八级考试大纲（ 年起执行） 年起执行 试卷的题型、题数、计分、比重和时间列表 序号 题号 各部分名称 题型 题数 计分 比重 考试时间 （分钟） I (A1)-(A10) 1-10 听力理解 A 讲座 B 会话 C 新闻 阅读理解 人文知识 改错 主观题 客观题 客观题 客观题 客观题 主观题 10 5 5 20 10 10 10 10 10% 10% 25 II III IV 1130 3140 (B1) (B10) 20 10 10 20% 10% 10% 30 10 15 V 翻译 A汉译英 B英译汉 主观题 主观题 1 1 10 10 10% 10% 60 VI 合计 写作 主观题 1 40+23 20 100 20% 100% 45 185 VI.写作(Part VI: Writing ) VI.写作 写作(Part 1.测试要求: 根据所给的作文题目及要求撰写各类体裁的文章，文章 长度约400个单词；能做到内容充实、语言通顺、用词恰 当、表达得体。 2.测试形式: 本部分分为主观试题,共一个作文题目。考试时间45分钟. 3.测试目的: 按照大纲的要求测试学生的写作能力. 八级考试 年份 2002 2004 2005 2006 2007 2008 2009 考试人数 27819 69407 93350 117098 139663+36501（补考） 176164 （补考） 151776+43785（补考）195561 （补考） 160374+51549（补考）211923 （补考） 通过率% 通过率 59.6 56.74 54.17 49.97 47.30 45.28 47.33 60.50 57.74 55.06 54.56 56.37 56.85 平均分 华理英语系八级考试情况 年份 ? 2003年 ? 2004年 ? 2005年 ? 2006年 ? 2007年 ? 2008年 ? 2009年 通过率 平均分 97.44 67.94 97.22 70.51 97.05 71.18 95.75 66.86 100 71.12 91.38 66.12 94.12 69.28 全国 听力 10 阅读 20 人文 10 GAP 10 改错 10 英译中 10 中译英 10 写作 20 总平 均分 05 06 07 08 09 693 1259 635 509 432 547 538 1161 5774 645 1046 611 608 475 452 528 1101 5506 608 1118 584 563 481 517 531 1025 5456 6. 11 11. 18 5. 90 4. 61 4. 58 6. 11 5. 68 10. 28 6. 93 3. 69 5. 13 6. 61 6. 53 12. 50 8. 26 3. 91 6. 06 7. 88 5. 67 4. 88 7. 41 12. 43 56. 37 13. 70 56. 85 16. 68 69. 28 TEMTEM-8 Composition Marking Scheme 1.effectively address the writing task ? 2.demonstrate a well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main ideas and sufficient supporting details ? 3.no errors of voc, spelling, punctuation, syntax ? 4.use the language with appropriacy. (collocation) ? E.g. learn knowledge, touch society ? 5.No difficulty is experienced by the reader Writing Score 12 1215 ? Key to Success Address the task correctly ? Study the topic carefully 1. Nowadays with the development of economy, the existing cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing. What do you think is one of the major problems that may result from this process of urbanization? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic given below： ? 2. One Major Problem in the Process of Urbanization 3. In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary. 4. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 八级好作文标准: 八级好作文标准: 审题准确 ? Thesis statement Topic sentence Detailed discussion (example, statistics) Conclusion 用词恰当到位, 没有重大语法错误,拼写错误。 TEM-8 ?2000 EDUCATION AS A LIFELONG PROCESS ?2001 THE IMPACT OF THE INTERNET ON ?2002 THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSONAL QUALITY OF A UNIVERSITY STUDENT 2003 Young People in China Are (Not) More Self? centered and Unsympathetic ? 2004 Should University Students Go in for Business? ? 2005 Interview ?2006 Ambition ?2007 Financial disparity affects friendship ?2008 What I have learned from my years at university ?2009 Are dialects just as acceptable in public places (2006)通过率：49.97 平均分：55.06 作文平均分：11.01 通过率： 平均分： 作文平均分： ? Writing Task （45mins）20% ） ? Joseph Epstein, a famous writer, once said, “We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide (so) that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about. Do you agree or disagree with him? Write an essay about 400 words entitled: ? Ambition Nowhere is the word ambition so vividly and accurately defined than in Joseph Epsteins comment that “in the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.” A cosmetic definition as it seems, however, Epsteins words can, on the whole, be interpreted and summarized into one sentence: to be ambitious is to strive for our own personal goals set upon our own values regardless of the possible outcome and controversy. In other words, the two indispensable parts of ambition include: firstly, making your own unique targets; secondly, persisting in achieving these aims without being distracted by others ridicule and scorn. To begin with, visualizing your personal goals instead of drifting among the mass is, undoubtedly, the very prerequisite of the fulfillment of your aims. The reason for this is simple. We ourselves are the best judges of our capabilities and potentials. And the same voice is echoed in that “we decide what is important and what is trivial in life.” Madame Currie could never have achieved so many honors and breakthroughs in science and the discovery of radium if she took the same path as majority of the women in her time. It was her decision to devote her time and energy to science not household chores that made her stand our so prominently. On the other hand, she might have been just as plain and mundane as other women if she did not match herself with her personal aspirations and goals. Therefore, having your own goals is essential to the realization of ambition. Then there is the issue of how one should pursue these goals. Again Epstein gave a perfect explanation that “but no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these decisions and choices are ours to make.” An excellent statement. There are times when we give up our beliefs and aims simply because of a different perspective of someone else and there are definitely days when we feel frustrated and beaten in face of scathing scorn from the world. Yet Epstein shows us a higher path on which we are encouraged to stick to our ways and endure in spite of all possible criticism and indifference. And history has proved so many times that persistence regardless of hardship and ridicule wins us victory. Thus it is safe to say that persistence and a firm belief of self is an integral part of ambition. Of course, Joseph Epsteins quotation is definitely richer in content and intended messages than what I have illustrated and developed above, however, the essence of his saying, that ambition is of our own choosing and that we ought to hold fast to it make its way through close scrutiny and prevail. 四级满分作文 New concepts always penetrate our daily lives without being noticed. When most of us are accustomed to spending the spare time reading, more and more college students begin to take part-time job either inside or outside the campus. It is my constant belief that its pros outweigh its cons; by that I mean, it has far more potential advantages than disadvantages that can be minimized. ? Firstly, a part-time job provide a student with a chance to practice what he has learned from books, especially in the fields such as economics, engineering and teaching. Practice makes perfect. Secondly, it can help the students to be economically independent of their parents, although sometimes just partially. On the one hand, parents may have a lighter burden of the college tuitions and miscellaneous expenses of their sons or daughters than they used to have. On the other hand, we students will realize that money comes not as easily as we think, thus develop good habits of not wasting it. And finally, if we can balance the time spent on both the study and the work, it wont become the cause of failure in academic study. Whats more, a part time job may make our campus life more exciting. ? In view of the proceeding paragraph, I would like to recommend that every student take a part-time job, if possible. Writing Score 12 1215 Argumentative Argumentative ?Expository Expository 1. Descriptive writing 2. Narrative writing 3. Expository writing (The most frequent explains something by writing): providing facts and examples. ? 4. Argumentative writing (The most complex writing): attempts to convince the reader to accept the ideas, to change his/her opinion, to take action Nine Basic patterns of development by exposition ? ? ? ? Facts Classification Cause -effect Illustration Analogy Process Comparison-contrast Analysis Defining Analogy is a method of organizing and developing ideas by comparison. ? In an analogy, a writer explains or clarifies a subject (usually unfamiliar) by likening it to a familiar but strikingly different subject. Writers use analogy to make the new, different, complex, or difficult more understandable for the reader. ? Analogy explains, clarifies, illustrates, and simplifies; it does not prove anything. The analogy will hold that the parallel you are drawing is accurate. ? A computer without screen is like a car without an engine. ? This analogy fails because a floppy disk does not drive the computer. The steps for writing the analogy are identical to those of comparison and contrast. ? Example: The atmosphere of Earth and the window The atmosphere of Earth acts like the window in serving two very important functions. (1) It lets light in and it permits us to look out. (2) It also serves as a shield to keep out dangerous or uncomfortable things. (about the window)A normal glazed window lets us keep our houses warm by keeping out cold air, and it prevents rain, dirt, and unwelcome insects and animals from coming in. (about the atmosphere) As we have already seen, Earths atmospheric window also helps to keep our planet at a comfortable temperature by holding back radiated heat and protecting us from dangerous levels of ultraviolet light. A writer usually announce the analogy and then develop it. ? e.g.When we talk about a students success in university, we may easily associate it with farming, because it follows the same pattern as that of farming, which has the process of sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards. I quite agree with this analogy and my own personal experience as a university student provides a sound verification. A good Introductory Paragraph An Introductory Paragraphs Purpose It introduces the topic of the essay. ? It gives a general background of the topic. ? It indicates the overall “plan” of the essay. ? It should arouse the readers interest in the topic. An introductory paragraph consists of General statement Thesis statement Topic: How to solve traffic problem? General Statement One of the most serious problems that most big cities are confronted with is traffic congestion. This problem is caused by thousands of cars coming into the cities from the suburban areas as well as from different parts of the country for business. This mammoth problem must be resolved before it gets worse It gives a general background of the topic. Thesis Statement The heavy traffic problem can be solved by building rapid transit systems from the suburbs to the cities, by improving pubic transportation systems wit