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新材料作文 概括指导 howtowriteasummaryofnarration learningaim tofurthermasterthemethodsandskillsofwritingsummariesofnarrativepassagesdifficultpoint howtowriteanexactsummarywithoutleavingoutkeypoints 学生习作常见错误 概括内容要点不完整使用太多细节内容而不是用概括的语言过多引用原文词句词数过多用第一人称而不是第三人称转述时态错误 lastsundayiwentfishing aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait isatdownonthebankofthelake buttwohourslater ididn tcatchanyfish igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff preparingtogobackhome justthen isawanoldmansittingnearme tomysurprise hisbasketwasfulloffish soiwentovertohim wantingtoknowwhy excuseme buthowlonghaveyousathere iasked aboutfourhours heanswered fourhours icouldn tbelievemyears yes it sveryimportanttobepatient theoldmansaid don tconsiderfishingatiringsport justenjoyit suddenly iunderstoodwhathesaid imustlearntobepatient thenisatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently ifeltafishtouchthebait butididn tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin atlast icaughtit thismademeveryhappy inthefollowingsixhours icaughtover10fish onmywayhome ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience 学生习作常见错误1 thepassagetellsusthatlastsundayamanwentfishingbuthedidn tcatchanyfishintwohours atthistimehesawanoldmansittingnearhim themanaskedthemanhowtocatchfishes theoldmansaidthatyoushouldbepatient 使用太多细节 语言不够概括 概括内容要 精 准 全 学生习作常见错误2 thestorymainlytellsusthatthewriterwasfishinganddidn tcatchanyfish whenhepreparedtogobackhome hefoundanoldmansittingthereandhisbasketwasfulloffish intheend hecaughtmanyfish 引用原文词句 不得直接引用原文的句子 学生习作常见错误3 thestorymainlytellsusthatthewriterwasfishingbutmadenoachievementsandpreparedtogobackhome whileanoldmanwhosebasketwasfulloffishtoldhimthatfishisveryimportanttobepatient theauthorlearnedtobepatient atlast theauthorcaughtfishandrealizedthesecretofsuccesswaspatience 共60词 词数过多 词数 约30词 小于20词或大于40词 扣2分 学生习作常见错误4 thewritertellsusthathewentfishingbutdidn tcatchanyfishafterwaiting2hours thenanoldmansittingnearmetoldmehissecretoffishingwaspatience finallythewritersucceeded 人称用错 应该用第三人称 一般以第三人称来表述 学生习作常见错误5 thepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriterdidn tcatchanyfishbecauseofhisimpatience hebecomehappywhenheunderstandthepatienceisthekeytosuccess 时态错误 与原文时态一致 1 概括内容要点要 精 准 全 写概括时应满足的5个条件 4 一般以第三人称来表述 2 不得直接引用原文的句子 同义词组替换法 正话反说法 语态变换 简单句变复合句 3 词数 约30词 小于20词或大于40词 扣2分 5 与原文时态一致 正文和结尾除外 记叙文概括的方法 串联要素法 第一步 先通读全文 找出几个要素who 谁what 何事when 何时where 何地why 原因asaresult consequence finally 结果 whichledto 第二步 用自己的话串联起来万能公式 thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually 开头套用句式 thestory passageisabout thewriter authortellsusabout thestory passagemainlytellsusthat thepassagedescribes lastsundayiwentfishing aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait isatdownonthebankofthelake buttwohourslater ididn tcatchanyfish igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff preparingtogobackhome justthen isawanoldmansittingnearme tomysurprise hisbasketwasfulloffish soiwentovertohim wantingtoknowwhy excuseme buthowlonghaveyousathere iasked aboutfourhours heanswered fourhours icouldn tbelievemyears yes it sveryimportanttobepatient theoldmansaid don tconsiderfishingatiringsport justenjoyit suddenly iunderstoodwhathesaid imustlearntobepatient thenisatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently ifeltafishtouchthebait butididn tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin atlast icaughtit thismademeveryhappy inthefollowingsixhours icaughtover10fish onmywayhome ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience hadnopatience 第一步 请找出这篇短文的几个要素 who 谁 what 何事 when 何时where 何地why 原因 asaresult 结果 i thewriter didn tcatchanyfish anoldman hisbasketwasfulloffish gotveryangry it sveryimportanttobepatient learntobepatient caughtit 第二步 用自己的话串联起来 万能公式 sb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually thewriter caughtalotoffish afterbecomingpatient whohadnopatienceatfirst becauseofbeinginfluencedbyanoldman himrealizingpatienceisthekeytosuccess onepossibleversion thepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriterwhohadnopatienceatfirstcaughtalotoffishafterbecomingpatientbecauseofbeinginfluencedbyanoldman finally herealizedpatienceisthekeytosuccess hadintendedtogiveupintendedtohavegivenup groupwork 阅读下面的短文 然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容 hi iammike ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme butatthecollegeineedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatineverthoughtofinthehighschool itwasreallytoughformeatfirstandigotbadlyhomesick oncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandigotusedtothecollegelife iloveit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary thestudent sunionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendsaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs onethingithinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground 第一步 请找出这篇短文的几个要素 who 谁 when 何时 what where 何地why 原因 asaresult 结果 第二步 用自己的话串联起来 根据万能公式 万能公式 thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually presentation evaluation groupwork 阅读下面的短文 然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容 hi iammike ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme butatthecollegeineedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatineverthoughtofinthehighschool itwasreallytoughformeatfirstandigotbadlyhomesick oncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandigotusedtothecollegelife iloveit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary thestudent sunionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendsaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs onethingithinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground onepossibleversion groupwork1范文 thepassagemainlytellsusthatmike whohaddifficultyinadjustingtothefirst yearcollegelife gotaccustomedtoitonesemesterlaterbecauseofthecolurfulactivitiesandenjoyedhimself sb didsth when becauseof individualwork goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen thisislihuafromseniorthree i mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseaschinesestudentlivingingermany itisatruestory afteryearsofhardwork thischinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture buttohisdisappointment hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview thethirdtimehewasturneddown hecouldn thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn twanthim theanswerwassimple wedon thiredishonestpeopleingermany whatwaswrongyoumightwonder thetruthis shortlyafterhearrivedingermany thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets so tosavemoney heoftenwentwithoutaticket asaresult hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes fromthisstory welearnthatwemaygetshort termbenefitsbydishonestmeans butthetruthwillcomeoutsoonerorlaterandthecostishigh soremember honestyisthebestpolicy that sallformyspeech thankyou presentation evaluation individualwork goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen thisislihuafromseniorthree i mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseaschinesestudentlivingingermany itisatruestory afteryearsofhardwork thischinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture buttohisdisappointment hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview thethirdtimehewasturneddown hecouldn thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn twanthim theanswerwassimple wedon thiredishonestpeopleingermany whatwaswrongyoumightwonder thetruthis shortlyafterhearrivedingermany thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets so tosavemoney heoftenwentwithoutaticket asaresult hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes fromthisstory welearnthatwemaygetshort termbenefitsbydishonestmeans butthetruthwillcomeoutsoonerorlaterandthecostishigh soremember honestyisthebestpolicy that sallformyspeech thankyou 用自己的话串联起来 根据万能公式 onepossibleversion tellsusthat didn t onpurposewhen whichledto dueto thepassagemainly anexcellentchinesestudent buythesubwaytickets studyingingermany himnotbeingabletofindajob hisdishonesty reviewthestepsofwritingasummary 第一步 先通读全文 找出几个要素who 谁what 什么when 何时where 何地why 原因asaresult consequence finally 结果 whichleadsto 第二步 用自己的话串联起来万能公式 thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually homework 阅读下面的短文 然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容 onceuponatimesometiny