第九节图画类写作突破.doc

武进区横山桥高级中学校本课程高三年级英语常用文写作技巧第九节图画类写作突破看图作文就是根据图画的内容和命题的要求写成一篇作文。从形式上讲，有单图作文和多图作文两种。写看图作文要注意以下三个方面的问题：首先，要仔细观察图画，弄清画面含义，抓住画面的问题。看图作文中，画面的主体如果是人物，要从画面中人物的形体、相貌、服饰等，弄清人物的性别、年龄、身份；从人物的表情、动作，推测人物的思想面貌，以及他在干什么；还要观察周围环境，弄清事件的时间、地点以及和事件有关的物品。如果画面的主体是物，要特别注意是什么东西，它的作用和功能是什么，它代表了什么，反映了什么问题和变化等等。其次，要根据画面的内容，进行合理想象，使画面“动”起来，从而形成一个完整的小故事。 看图作文，则要求借助于图画提供的形象，联系自己的生活经验进行合理想象，把图上的人物写活，把事情的来龙去脉交待清楚。即把静止的画面“活动化”，要把平面的事物“立体化”。但想象不是盲目的，要有目的，绝不能脱离画面，任意发挥。最后，要认真安排内容，布局谋篇。在写作时，要按照从整体到部分，由远到近等顺序，做到言之有序；要抓住重点，突出中心；在语言表达上，既要有连贯的叙述，又要有形象的描写，达到生动、形象的表达画面的内容。如果是多幅图，要注意图与图之间的联系。突出重点，注意详略，不要每幅图都平均使用力气。每幅图的叙述描写要注意连贯，互相衔接，不要变成图片的说明。例如：下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。注意：1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整；2. 叙述必须用第一人称；3. 词数100左右。 生词：违章者offender n. 十字路口crossroads n.分析：首先，把六幅图连起来看，我们可以大致明白它的意思：文章的人称是第一人称，时态应该为一般过去时。从第一幅图可以看出：“我”是坐在自行车上的人。骑车的人头发很短、体形较“我”要大一些，可以理解为“我”的哥哥或者朋友,两人一起去电影院；从第二幅图可以看出：“我”和哥哥在拐弯处被一男一女拦住，感到非常惊讶；从第三、四、五幅图可以看出：那对男女在讲述他们半个小时前发生的事情；从第六幅图可以看出：“我”和哥哥要抓别的违章者了。其次，要把对图片的理解分解成一个一个完整的句子，生成要点：1.My brother/friend and I went to cinema the other day by bike. 2. At a crossroads, a young man and a girl stopped us, which surprised us a lot, because we didnt know them. 3. They broke the traffic rules and the policeman made them stand there waiting for another offender. 4. They said it was our turn to stand there and wait for some other offenders.最后，用连词把各要点连贯起来，就可以形成一篇很好的文章了。One possible version:The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “Weve found you at long last,” theysaid. But we didnt know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you dont have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.”练习1：2006广东卷根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：1词数：150左右2生词：通讯：communicate(with sb.) vi. communication n. 互联网：the Internet n._参考译文： Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life in recent years. In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.练习2：2006辽宁卷下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。注意：短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。One possible VersionOne Saturday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water, Li Ming did not know why.The next morning on his way to school, Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky. Then be thought of the lonely bird in the cage, He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free. When he got home, he said to hi