大学英语四级写作范文20-40.doc

大学英语四级作文范文100篇之社会热点问题 Topic 21-40 内部资料只作学习交流用途 Edited by Jeffrey大纲要求一、题型概述 写作(Writing)部分测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比例为15%，考试时间为30分钟。 写作选用考生所熟悉的题材。考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。写作要求思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。二、考核技能与要求 写作部分考核学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所考核的技能包括以下四点： （一）思想表达 1.表达中心思想 2表达重要或特定信息 3表达观点、态度等 （二）篇章组织 4围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点 5连贯地组句成段，组段成篇 （三）语言运用 6运用恰当的词汇 7运用正确的语法 8运用合适的句子结构 9使用正确的标点符号 10.运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等） （四）写作格式 11.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式 大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教学要求中的一般要求， 即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等， 能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短 文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。”评分标准 四级作文采用总体评分（Global Scoring）的方法，评分时考虑文章是否切题，是否充分表达思想，语言错误是否造成理解上的障碍，遣词造句是否清楚而确切地表达思想。 作文满分为15分，阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。阅卷者根据阅卷标准，若认为作文与某一分数的标准相似，即定为该分数；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数的标准，可以加1分或减1分。具体评分标准如下： 0分：白卷；作文与题目无关；只有几个孤立的词，无法表达思想。2分：调理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题。有关地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些事严重错误。 11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足扣分标准如下：110-119 扣1分；100-109 扣2分；90-99 扣3分；80-89 扣4分；70-79 扣5分。60-69 扣6分；50-59扣7分；49 扣9分。注意：如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数；规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分；如果扣为0分，要慎重处理。写作标准分换算表如下：扣分得分率标准分1分67分100.5分2分63分94.5分3分60分90分4分57分85.5分5分54分81分6分51分76.5分7分48分72分8分45分67.5分9分42分63分10分39分58.5分11分37分55.5分12分35分52.5分13分33分49.5分14分31分46.5分15分29分43.5分注意：写作标准分=得分率x10x0.15=106.543.5分Topic 20 On Popularity of Weibo 关于微博题目要求 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Popularity of Weibo.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1微博迅速成为流行的网络交流平台 2微博大热的原因包括 3在你看来，大学生应如何对待微博 1 Writing miniblog, adding celebrities as friends and having followers or fans do not just sound tempting. In fact, Weibo, or microblog, has become the most popular social networking tool in China. 2Why does Weibo become such a fashion recently? The major reasons are listed as follows To start with, in the fast-paced modem society, more often than not, people do not have time to write a long and thorough article on their blog. Therefore, Weibo, which allows 140 words at maximum, is readily accepted. Secondly, Weibo is a fast way to know changes in the world. The information on Weibo updates fast, because every user can contribute to it by posting, forwarding and commenting on the latest news. 3lIn my opinion, college students should make good use of Weibo to leam new ideasand communicate with people from all walks of life. However, they should not indulge in it.1以微博的特点篇，引出全文话题。2以一个设问句提出疑问，转入对微博大热的原因分析。分别使用To start with和Secondly.作为连接词，层次分明。3l用In my opinion者的看法：应利用好微博，但不可沉溺于其中。写作思路 这是一篇分析型议论文，要求考生对微博大热的原因及大学生应如何利用微博发表看法。文章内容安排如下： 第一段抓住“流行”，描述现象。 第二段重点阐述两点原因。 第三段提出作者的观点。全文翻译: 写微博、把社会名人加为朋友以及有自己的追随者或粉丝不仅仅听起来诱人。事实上，微博已经成为中国最流行的社交网络工具。 为何微博变得如此流行？主要原因罗列如下。首先，在快节奏的现代社会，人们通常没有时间在博客上写很长很详尽的博文。因此，最多只允许写140字的微博被人们欣然接受。其次，微博是了解世界变化的捷径。每位微博用户都在发表、转发以及评论最新信息，因此微博上的信息更新很快。 在我看来，大学生应该好好利用微博来了解新思想以及与各行各业的人进行交流。但是，他们不应过度沉溺在微博中。亮点词汇 口tempting 以吸引人的 口become a fashion成为时尚 口more often than not通常 口have time for sth.有时间做某事 口be readily accepted被欣然接受了 口comment on sth对某事发表评论 口communicate with sb与某人交流 口get addicted to sth.对某事上瘾口social networking tool社交网络工具 口fast-paced以快节奏的口at maximum最多 口update v.更新 口make good use of充分利用 口all walks of life各行各业 口indulge in sth.沉溺在某事万能句型 1The major reasons are listed as follows.（引出原因的总起句型） 主要原因罗列如下。 2In my opinion，college students should make good use of.（表达作者观点 的句型） 在我看来，大学生应该好好利用Topic 21 On Food Safety 关于食品安全 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Food Safety. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1近年来，人们越来越关注食品安全 2出现这种现象的原因是 3我的看法 lIn the past, people focused more on the quantity of food than the quality or safety of food. However, in recent years, people are paying more and more attention to food safety. 2Why does food safety attract peoples growing attention? There are mainly two reasons for this. First, with the improvement of living standard, people are much more concerned about their health and their demand for quality food increases. Second, there have been a growing number of incidents involving food safety in recent years. Among these incidents, the toxic milk scandal, pesticide contaminated vegetables and illegal cooking oil have shocked or even scared the nation. 3As I see it, food safety is closely related to peoples health, so it is of great significance that the government take effective measures to ensure that food safety is well guaranteed.l首段与过去情况作比较, 反衬出现在人们对食品安全的重视。2第二段分析食品安全日益受关注的原因：一是人们对安全食品的需求提高；二是食品安全事件接连出现。3发表个人看法：政府应采取有效措施确保食品安全。写作思路 本文是一篇议论文，讨论食品安全问题，文章内容安排如下： 第一段引出话题。 第二段分析原因。 第三段发表个人看法。全文翻译 在过去，相比食品的质量和安全，人们更关注食品的分量。然而，最近几年人们越来越重视食品安全。 为什么食品安全越来越受人们关注呢？主要原因有两个。首先，随着生活水平的提高，人们远比以前更关注自身健康，对高质量食品的需求也在上升。其次，近年来，食品安全事故日益增多。其中，毒奶粉、农药蔬菜、地沟油等事件震惊甚至吓坏了国人。 在我看来，食品安全与人们的健康息息相关。因此，政府采取有效措施确保食品安全这一点很重要。亮点词汇口focus on.关注 口food safety食品安全口living standard生活水平 口incident n.事件口scandal n. 丑闻 口be related to sth.与相关联口pay attention to关注 口attract ones attention引起某人注意口be concerned about关心 口toxic ftDksik/口有毒的口contaminate v.污染 口be of great significance很重要的万能句型 1. In the past,However, in recent years, people have been paying more and more attention to.（对比过去，引出现象句型） 在过去，“。然而，最近几年人们越来越重视。 2. Why does. attract peoples growing attention? There are mainly two reasons for thisFirst,Second,（分析原因句型） 为什么，越来越受人们关注呢？主要原因有两个。首先，。其次，。 3. As I see it.is closely related to,so it is of great significance that. （引出解决办法句型） 在我看来，与息息相关。因此，这一点很重要。Topic 22 On Plastic Surgery关于整容手术 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Plastic Surgery. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1整容已慢慢成为一种潮流 2分析此现象背后的原因 3在我看来精品范文与分析 1Nowadays plastic surgery has become a new fashion among young people, although its safety has received much doubt. 2The reasons behind can be listed as bellow. Firstly, todays youngsters consider plastic operations as a form of worshipping their beloved stars. Plastic operations have become no rare phenomenon in entertainment circle. Crazy young fans tend to imitate what their idols do, including having plastic surgeries. Secondly, they receive those operations to increase their competitiveness in job-hunting. As the competition in job market is becoming fiercer and fiercer, everybody tries his/her best to become more competitive. Under such condition, having plastic surgery and becoming prettier is one means. 3As far as I am concerned, youngsters should give it a second thought when making such a big decision as having plastic surgeries. After all, there exist great risks in those operations.1用一句话概述整容受年轻人追捧的社会现象，同时指出其安全性受质疑。2从追星模仿及提升就业竞争力两个方面来剖析整容手术的原因。分别用连接词Firstly和secondly引导，层次比较分明3发表自己的看法：整容有风险，决定需谨慎。写作思路 这是一篇议论文，要求就整容这种社会现象做阐述。文章内容安排如下 第一段指出现象。 第二段分析背后的原因。 第三段发表“我”的看法。全文翻译 如今整容在年轻人中已成为一种新潮流，尽管它的安全性一直受到质疑。 背后的原因可以罗列如下。第一，如今的年轻人把整容视为崇拜自己喜欢的明星的方式。在娱乐圈中，整容并不罕见。年轻的狂热粉丝们经常模仿偶像的所作所为，其中包括整容。第二，这些年轻人接受整容手术的目的是增强自己求职时的竞争力。由于人才市场的竞争越来越激烈，每个人都在尽全力使自己变得更有竞争力。在这种情况下，接受整形手术使自己变漂亮也是一种方式。 在我看来，年轻人在做诸如接受整形手术这样重大的决定时，应再三考虑。毕竟，这些手术有着很大的风险。亮点词汇 口 receive much doubt受到许多质疑 口 youngster n. 年轻人口plastic operations整容手术 口 beloved a. 至爱的口imitate n模仿 口 under such condition在这种情况下口give sth. a second thought再三考虑 口be listed as bellow罗列如下口consider sth. as把某物视为 口worship v. 崇拜口rare phenomenon稀有现象 口after all毕竟万能句型 1. Nowadays. has become a new fashion among young people, although its.has received much doubt.（指出现象句型） 如今在年轻人中已成为一种新潮流，尽管它的一直受到质疑。 2. The reasons behind can be listed as bellow. Firstly,Secondly,（常用引出原因句型） 背后的原因可以罗列如下。第一，。第二，。 3As far as I am concerned,（常用引出作者观点句型） 在我看来，。Topic 23 Urbanization 关于城市化 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Urbanization. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1目前城市化已成为热点话题 2城市化有利也有弊3我怎么看1 The 2010 World Expo has turned “city life” into a heated issue. Evidence mounts that a better. However, urbanization has brought about problems as well. 2On the one hand, urbanization boosts regional economy and introduces moretechnologies, which enhance peoples living standard. Residents are able to enjoy not only convenient transportation, but also various types of entertainment. On the other hand, along with regional development, there also comes pollution. Car exhausts, factory emissions and wasted water damage the environment and city expansion causes extinctions of certain species. Moreover, there have been a growing number of people in city suffering from sub-health problems and physical and mental fatigue due to the stressful and rapid-paced life. 3From my viewpoint, urbanization does bring benefits to our lives. Yet, we should by no means ignore the problems that it causes and take measures to handle them.1首句用上海世博会引出“城市化”这一热点话题。随后两句概述城市化存着利与弊。2具体分析城市化的好处和弊端。好处包括：区域经济增长、技术引入、生活水平提高等。弊端包括：环境污染、物种灭绝等。论述比较充分，但由于使用了on one hand和On the other hand作引导, 层次依然分明。3发表作者自己的看法：肯定其好处的同时，要不忘其导致的问题并采取措施解决。第二章范文磊磊雨蟊i翠攀哟写作思路 这是一篇议论文，要求讨论城市化对我们生活的正负面的影响。文章内容安排 如下： 第一段引出话题。 第二段分析城市化的利与弊。 第三段发表作者对城市化的看法。全文翻译 2010年世博会使“城市生活”成为了一个热门话题。越来越多证据表明，城市的确能让生活变得更美好。然而，城市化也带来了一些问题。 从一方面来讲，城市化促进了地区经济增长，引入了更多新科技，这些都提高了人们的生活水平。人们不仅能享受便捷的交通，也能参与各类的娱乐活动。 从另一方面来讲，在地区经济发展的同时，污染也随之而来。汽车尾气、工厂废气、废水破坏了环境；城市扩张也导致了某些物种的灭绝。此外，由于紧张的和快节奏的生活，越来越多居住在城市的人深受亚健康和身心疲惫问题的困扰。 我认为，城市化确实能给我们的生活带来益处。然而，我们决不能忽略其造成的问题，我们应当着手去解决它们。亮点词汇口tum sth. into sth.把变成 口urbanization /,a:banaizeijan/n城市化口boost v. 促进 口enhance v提高口convenient transportation便捷的交通 口car exhaust汽车尾气口city expansion城市扩张 口fatigue /fati:g/n疲劳口take measures to handle 口a heated issue热点话题口bring about sth.带来某物 口regional economy区域经济口living standard生活水平 口along with.在的同时口factory emissions工厂废气 口extinction n灭绝口take measures to handle sth采取措施处理某事万能句型 1.has tumed. into a heated issue.（引出现象句型） 使成为了一个热门话题。 2. Evidence mounts that. does make peoples life better. However, has brought about problems as well.（引出优缺点，并0与弊句型） 越来越多的证据表明，的确能让生活变得更美好。然而，也带来了一 些问题。 3From my viewpoint,（表明作者观点句型） 我认为，。Topic 24 TV Talent Shows 关于电视选秀节目题目要求 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled TV Talent Shows. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1如今电视选秀节目非常流行，不少年轻人参加 2选秀节目有利有弊 3我的看法 lNowadays TV talent shows have become very popular and it is not uncommon to see many young people attend these shows. 2TV talent shows, as is the case with many issues, have both merits and demerits. On the one hand, these shows can provide excellent opportunities for the young people to express themselves and to perform their talents of singing, dancing, and so on. On the other hand, they may mislead the youth and make them believe that they can make a big fortune or become famous overnight, ignoring the fact of No pains, no gains. 3As far as I am concerned, TV talent show is like a double-edged sword, which can do both good and harm. It is extremely important for us to face it properly.l开篇用一句话简洁明快地交代了电视选秀节目的现状2先概述电视选秀节目有利有弊，继而分别对此进行说明。TV talent shows，have both merits and demerits是概述。On the one hand和 Ort the other hand则分别引出电视选秀节目的利和弊。3发表自己的看问题：电视选秀节目是双刃剑，要慎重对待。写作思路 这是一篇议论文，要求就电视选秀节目做阐述，文章内容安排如下： 第一段指出选秀节目流行的这种现状。 第二段分别说明电视选秀节目的优点与不足。 第三段发表个人对选秀节目的看法。全文翻译 如今电视选秀节目非常流行，可以见到很多年轻人参与此类节目。 正如其他许多事物一样，电视选秀节目也是既有优点也有不足的。一方面，电视选秀节目可以为年轻人提供绝佳的表现自己，展现歌唱、舞蹈等才能的机会。另一方面，它们有可能让年轻人误以为通过电视选秀节目能够赚大钱或一夜成名，以至于忽略了“一份耕耘，一份收获”的道理。 在我看来，电视选秀节目是一把双刃剑，既有利又有弊。正确对待很重要。亮点词汇 口TV talent show电视选秀节目 口attend v参加，出席 口merits and demerits优点与不足 口excellent opportunity绝好的机会 口express oneself表达自我 口perform ones talent展现某人的才能 口mislead sb.误导某人 口ignore v. 忽视 口a double-edged sword一把双刃剑万能句型 1Nowadays. have become very popular（提出现象句型） 如今十分流行。 2, as is the case with many issues, have both merits and demerits. On the one hand,On the other hand,（说明优点与不足的句型） 正如许多事物一样，也是既有优点也有不足的。一方面，。另一方面，。 3.As far as I am concerned,.is like a double-edged sword, which can do both good and harm（表明作者观点句型） 在我看来，是一把双刃剑，既有利又有弊。 Topic 25 On College Students Getting 关于大学生结婚Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On College Students Getting. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1如今的在校大学生可以结婚2人们对在校大学生结婚看法不一3我的看法 lIn the past, Chinese college students were not allowed to get married and if married, they must quit school. However, college students today can get married as long as they have reached the legal marriage age. 2lRegarding college students getting married, peoples opinions vary from person to person. Some people think that getting married in college would disturb the normal order of schools. In addition, most college students are neither emotionally nor financially prepared to start a family. Rushing into marriage may result in big problems in the future. Nevertheless, other people claim that college students have their right to get married. As long as they are well prepared and think thoroughly, we should respect their choices. 3In my opinion, college students should give careful consideration to the responsibilities of starting a family before rushing to get married.1交代论题的背景，由此引出下段对大学生结婚现象的讨论。2l转A说明正反双方对大学生结婚现象的不同看法。双方分别从仓促结婚的危害及学生享有的权利等角度展开辩论，各自理由都相当充分，有说服力。3提出个人的观点：大学生对婚姻要慎重。第二章范文否磊百夏磊F楚攀蔓写作思路 本文是一篇议论文，要求对大学生结婚这一话题做阐述，文章内容安排如下： 第一段交代背景，强调情况的今昔对比。 第二段分析人们对在校大学生结婚现象的支持和反对的声音。 第三段谈自己对大学生结婚的看法。全文翻译 过去在中国，在校大学生是不允许结婚的，如果结婚了就必须退学。然而，如今的大学生只要达到法定年龄就可以结婚。 关于大学生结婚这种现象，人们的看法各不相同。有些人认为大学生在校期间结婚会扰乱正常的学校秩序。而且，大多数大学生，不管是从情感上还是从经济上来说，都没有做好结婚的准备。仓促结婚可能会引起未来的大问题。然而，另外一些人称大学生有权利结婚。只要他们准备好了并且考虑清楚了，我们就应该尊重他们的决定。在我看来，大学生在着急结婚之前，应该好好考虑一下组建家庭的责任。亮点词汇 口allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 口normal order正常秩序 口be prepared to do.做好的准备 口nevertheless conj.然而 口think thoroughly仔细考虑清楚 口give careful consideration to考虑周详 口rush to do sth.着急做某事口quit school退学 口as long as只要万能句型 1. Regarding., peoples opinions vary from person to person. Some people think that. Nevertheless, other people claim that.（引出两种不同观点的句 型） 关于，人们的看法各不相同。有些人认为。然而，另外一些人称。 2In my opinion,should give careful consideration to. （提出作者观点句 型） 在我看来，要好好考虑。 Topic 26 On Celebrities Accepted by Universities关于名人被大学破格录取 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Celebrities Accepted by Universities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1近年来，体育影视名人被大学破格录取的现象不少见 2对此现象，有人认可有人反对 3我的看法是 1Nowadays, it is no surprise to find out that you enter the same university with a celebrity. Many colleges and universities in China are more than happy to enroll a film star or a sports star. 2Heated discussion has been generated by this phenomenon. It is held by some people that colleges and universities should take the lead in providing equal opportunities for each candidate and therefore no exception should be made on celebrities. However, others disagree with the view mentioned above. They argue that celebrities like film stars or sports stars, who contribute to our society in one way or another, deserve a more tolerant attitude and therefore a more flexible policy on their further education. 3As far as I am concerned, the current practice with regards to celebrities admission to universities should be improved and made more transparent. For instance, it is feasible to require celebrities to pass tests with equal importance to the national entrance examination before admission.1首段指出名人被破格录取现象的普遍性以及大学对录取名人的态度。2该段介绍人们对此现象的一正一反两种不同看法及论据。条理清晰，态度鲜明。3发表作者的观点并提出建议。写作思路 这是一篇议论文，要求对名人被大学破格录取现象发表看法。文章内容安排如下： 第一段描述现象。 第二段阐述人们对此现象的不同看法。 最后一段发表作者的看法。全文翻译 如今，发现自己和某个名人上同一所大学已不足为奇。中国的很多大学都非常乐意招收电影明星或体育明星。 这一现象引发了人们热烈的讨论。有些人认为，各大高校应该起带头作用，为每个考生提供均等的机会，不应让社会名人成为例外。然而，其他一些人不同意上述观点。他们认为电影明星或体育明星这些名人在某些方面为社会作了贡献，理应得到人们更多的宽容，因而在他们的进修问题上理应采取更为灵活的政策。 就我而言，录取名人进入大学的现行做法应该进一步改善，并且应该变得更加透明。例如，在录取之前先要求名人通过与高考同等重要的测试，也不失为一项可行的措施。亮点词汇 口enter a university进入大学学习 口more than happy非常愿意 口enroll sb招收某人 口heated discussion热烈的讨论 口take the lead in doing sth.在做某事方面树立榜样 口make no exception不容许有例外 口disagree with不赞同 口contribute to sth.为某事做贡献 口in one way or another在某些方面 口further education继续教育 口with regards to关于 口admission to university被大学录取口be feasible to do sth做某事是可行的 口require sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事口national entrance examination高考万能句型 1Nowadays, it is no surprise to find out that.（提出现象句型） 如今，发现已不足为奇。 2. Heated discussion has been generated by this phenomenon. It is held by some people that. However, others disagree with the