高三英语写作练习：图表作文.ppt

高三英语写作练习 anenglishwritingpracticeforthestudentsofseniorthree leadin atalkonwriting 1 howdoyoufindwriting 2 isthereashortcuttowriting howtowriteacompositionaccordingtotablesandgraphs teachingaimsandrequirements 1 findingouttheproperwritingmethodsbyanalyzinganexampleofgoodwriting 2 masteringhowtowriteracompositionaccordingtotablesandgraphsbyimitatingthesample 3 writingacompositionyourselfaccordingtotablesandgraphs optional 范文赏析 step1studyanexampleofgoodwriting teachingprocedures 1 情景作文 某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查 结果如下 请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动 并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法 词数不少于60 生词 图表chart 一 内容要点 1 图表1中六项活动及所用时间2 图表2中一个数据反映的情况3 自己的一个看法二 说明 1 内容要点可用不同方式表达 2 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分 2 abriefdiscussionofthewritingprocess a whatdoyousupposethebasicwritingprocessofthisessayshouldbe 1 haveacorrectunderstandingofthegiveninformation andgraspthemainidea 2 makeacarefulanalysisoftheinformation askyourselfthequestions3 writeanoutline 4 usetherighttechniqueofwriting themostcommontechniquesusedinthiskindofwritingis comparisonandcontrast b questionsovercharts 1 whatisthemainideaofchart1 thedailyaverageamountoftime differentafter classactivities 2 howlongdothestudentsspendontheirhomework 93minutes 3 howmuchtimedoesittakethemtowatchtv 46minutes 4 howmuchtimedoeslisteningmusicandworkingonthecomputertakeup 34minutesand30minuteseach 5 dotheyhavemuchtimeleftforsports 25minutes 6 dotheystillhavetimeforhousework 12minutes 7 anycommentsononeofthedatagiveninchart2 littletimeforsports 8 anysuggestions domoreexercise 1 chart1showsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsspendondifferentafter classactivities 2 thestudentsputthemosttime 93minutes intotheirhomework 3 watchingtvtakesup46minutes 1 thedailyaverageamountoftimedifferentafter classactivities 2 theirhomework93minutes3 watchtv46minutes 3 jointhephrasesintosentence 4 theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer 34minutesand30minuteseach 5 25minutesisspentonsports 6 12minutesgoesintohousework 4 listeningmusicandworkingonthecomputer34minutesand30minuteseach5 forsports25minutes6 housework12minutes 10 ofthetimeistakenupwithsportsactivities encouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass 7 chart2 littletimeforsports 8 suggestions 3 demonstrationandanalysisoftheexampleofgoodwritingwhatdoyouappreciatemostwiththesamplewriting canyoufindoutsomegoodpoints chart1showsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsoftheschoolspendondifferentafter classactivities thestudentsputthemosttime 93minutes intotheirhomework andnextinlineiswatchingtv whichtakesup46minutes theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer 34minutesand30minuteseach while25minutesisspentonsports only12minutesgoesintohousework asisshownonchart2 only10 ofthetimeistakenupwithsportsactivities ithinktheschoolshouldencouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass thisway theymaybehealthierandmoreenergetic chart1showsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsoftheschool spendondifferentafter classactivities thestudentsputthemosttime 93minutes intotheirhomework and nextinlineiswatchingtv whichtakesup46minutes theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer 34minutesand30minuteseach while25minutesisspentonsports only12minutesgoesintohousework mainidea spendputintotakeupputingointo 补充说明 inversion 同位语 contrast asisshownonchart2 only10 ofthetimeistakenup withsportsactivities ithinktheschoolshouldencouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass thisway theymaybehealthierandmoreenergetic 定语从句 concerning asto commentsandsuggestions 形容词比较级 step2sumupthefeature introductionthiskindofwritingisaninformationinterpretationprocess theinformationmaybegiveninnumbers linesorcurves etc usuallyafewexplanationsaregiven theorganizationofthewritingisessentialtoagoodessayoftablesandgraphs generally itisasfollows thatis inthefirstparagraph youhavetodemonstratethegeneralsituationofwhathasbeenreflectedinthetableorgraph then inthesecondparagraph youhavetoanalyzecarefullythenumbers linesorcurves andpointouttherateofincreaseordecrease intheend youhavetowriteyourownopinionorcomment generalintroduction analysis conclusion概要介绍 分析图表 总结概括 step3 howtowriteacompositionaccordingtotablesandgraphs图表作文 1 sampleitemdirections writeacompositionbasedonthetitleandthefollowingchartinnolessthan120words thecausesaregivenunderthehorizontallineandthepercentageofthetotalof80fireincidentsisgivenintheverticalcolumnontheleft writeclearly leadingcausesoffiresinchina 1997 2 analysisofthesampleitem1 themainideaofthegraphis firecauses 2 fromthegraph weknowthattherearethreemaincausesoffires a smokers nearly50 b defectiveinsulation 38 c childrenplayingwithmatches 12 3 thus wecan bycomparingtheaboveinformation makeacommentofthemaintopic thenreachaconclusion ananalysisofthewritingsofthestudents modelessayfromthegraphabove wecanseethatfire oneofthemostterriblekillersinchina ismainlycausedbysmokers defectiveinsulationsorchildrenplayingwithmatches in1997 80fireincidentstookplaceinchina whilenearly50 werecausedbysmokers 38 werecausedbydefectiveinsulation and12 werecausedbychildrenplayingwithmatches nomatterwhatthetypeofthefire wecanalmostbesurethattheywerecausedbycarelessness fromthegraph wecanconcludethatsmokersaretheleadingcauseoffires butwealsoneedtoeducateourchildren warningthemofthedangersofplayingwithmatchesandinstructworkersbemorecarefulwithinsulation step4 awritingpractice请根据下面曲线图 graph thenumberofcaraccidentsin2001 写一篇文章 1 描述2001年不同月份汽车事故分布 distribution 及总趋势 2 描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策 3 词数 100左右 4 参考词汇 高峰 peak 多雨的日子 rainydays mainpoints part1 demonstratethegeneralsituation1 twopeaksinaccidentsin20012 march numberofaccidents 353 august numberofaccidents 424 accidentsdecreasefromaugu