介绍事物类书面表达写作指导与训练.doc

介绍事物类书面表达写作指导与训练一、 写作情景 【写作提示】描写物体时应侧重物体的形状、规格、大小、颜色和功能。任何一段文字都应有其叙述的中心，对物体的描写也不例外。同样，主题句也应反映出作者对所要描写物体的看法、态度。【写作内容和要求】我厂生产G-17数码相机，请你用英语写一篇短文，对该产品作一下简单介绍。要点如下：1. 产地：上海2. 生产厂家：飞达照相机厂（生产相机30余年）3. 性能特点：G-17数码相机是我厂最新产品，有很多优点： 款式新颖、多样； 该机机身由轻金属制造，便携带； 该相机由电脑控制，易操作，初学摄影的人一学就会。4. 价格：物美价廉，是同类新产品价格的80%。二、写作步骤 1. 审题本文是一篇产品介绍，是一种说明文，亦是一种常见的应用文。首先确定其时态要用一般现在时态；其次语言要简练；最后要突出产品的的特色和优点。2. 构思首先开篇点明要介绍的对象(Let me have an introduction to the G-17 digital camera.)，然后按照一定次序来对该产品特点(features)进行说明，包括产地(birthplace)、厂家(factory)、性能(functions)和价格(price)等；最后用推荐性的语句来收尾。3. 草拟要点用英语把主要语句简单草拟出来，包括重点单词、短语和句子的主干等。如： It is produced in Shanghai, China, by Feida Camera Factory . It attracts people by its modern and different models . So it is small in size and light in weight . It costs only 80% of that of the similar .4. 组句成篇用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。使用过渡性词语必须根据上下文需要的原则，力求自然。如： first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next . thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that . finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short .5. 归纳结尾既然文章属于产品介绍，收尾就要有较强的推荐性，从而引起人们对该产品的兴趣，并注意首尾照应。如： Why wait? Its certainly a wise choice to buy a G-17. In conclusion, its really a good product with high quality and low price.三、常用句式和结构 1. Let me have an introduction to . / Here is an introduction to . 让我给大家介绍一下（常用于文章的开头）2. Above all ., besides ., whats the best . 首先，其次，最好的是 (产品介绍的次序性)3. that is to say, namely, for example, such as, to tell you the truth, for this reason . (表示解释和说明)4. Its certainly a wise choice to buy . 购买确实是明智的选择。 I am sure youll like it once youve tried it. 我确信你一旦用了它，肯定会喜欢的。(用于文章结尾)四、写作范文 Let me have an introduction to the latest digital cameraG-17. It is produced in Shanghai, China, by Feida Camera Factory, which has been making cameras for about 30 years. The G-17 digital camera has some good features. First of all, it attracts people by its modern and different models whose bodies is made of light metal. So it is small in size and light in weight, which makes it comfortable to carry. Whats more, this camera is controlled by a computer. So it is easy to operate and especially suitable for beginners. As for the price, it is surprisingly low. It costs only 80% of that of similar cameras.Why wait? Its certainly a wise choice to buy a G-17.五、教师点评 本文思路清晰，说明次序很有条理；语言简练，且有吸引力，具有较强的推荐性。文中使用了定语从句、it作形式宾语、代词that等复杂句式和结构，以及whats more, as for the price等连接成分，使文章更加流畅自然，前后连贯。不过文中有些地方还可以再改进，比如has been making cameras for改为has a history of，different改为various，这样会使文章更上水平和档次。【写作训练】现代社会，人们越来越离不开电脑。请你以第一人称“我”的口吻，介绍一下“自己”的种种用途。【参考范文】 One possible version：Hello! My name is Computer. Children and adults both like me because I can do a lot of things for them.Children use me to do many things, such as playing games, listening to music, watching television, and doing their homework. Adults use me to do even more things. They watch worldwide news on the Internet, buy stocks, send E-mails, and so on. Life becomes more convenient for people because of me.If you want to travel to other countries, I can help you buy airplane tickets and reserve a hotel. Whats