专四英语作文考点模板.docx

专四作文考点串讲 一、大作文1、评分标准成绩思想内容50%结构10%语言40%优秀（15-14）观点清楚、论证充分、内容切题条理清楚、层次分明、符合逻辑基本无语言错误、用词准确、语言得体良好（13-11）观点清楚、例证稍显不足、内容基本切题条理不清楚但无伤大体、结构较合理句子或用词有少量错误但不造成误解、语言较得体、有一定说服力中等（10-9）观点大体清楚、例证不足、偶有不切题的内容结构尚可、有些地方思路不清语言错误较多但能表达主要内容、语言还算得体、说服力较差及格（8-6）观点大体清楚、缺乏论据、很多不切题的内容结构不够清楚、很多地方思路混乱语言错误较多、勉强表达主要内容、语言不很得体、缺乏说服力不及格（5-0）看不出观点、内容不切题条理不清、思路混乱语言支离破碎、不得体、无说服力2、历年真题解析分类 专四考试中的大作文题材主要有文化教育、经济发展、环境保护、生活就业和社会热点。时间 题目 类别2011 Should private car owners be taxed for pollution? 立场类2010 Should College Students Hire Cleaners? 立场类2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment 立场类2008 The Benefits of Volunteering 给定观点类2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online 立场类 2006 Using Tomorrows Money or Saving It 立场类 2005 My Idea of a University Art Festival 问题解决类2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing 立场类2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 给定观点类2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy 问题解决类2001 Travel Broadens the Mind 给定观点类 2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities 给定观点类1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 对比类1998 One Way to Solve the Pollutions in Cities （自拟题目）问题解决类1997 More Pressure from Academic Studies Does (or Does no) to Us 立场类1996 My College Life and My Middle School Life 对比类1995 The Advantage or Disadvantage of Students Finding Part-time Job（自拟题目）立场类1994 TV: a good thing or a bad thing? 立场类1993 My Idea of Becoming a Teacher in the Future立场类1992 My Views on Reading Extensively立场类 1991 What I Usually Do after Class立场类 模板大全（三段式）模板一（立场类） Now there is a growing concernawareness about话题, different people have/hold different views/attitudes. Some claim/take it for granted/believe that 观点一. However, others argue that 观点二. From my point of view, /as for myself/for my part,/as far as I am concerned, 自己的论点. First and foremost/first of all/to begin with/ on the one hand, 理由一，展开/例子. In addition/besides/on the other hand, 理由二，展开/例子. Last but not least/finally/at last, 理由三，展开/例子. From the foregoing/on account of this/ a natural conclusion can be drawn/we can safely draw a conclusion that/ on the whole/to sum up/in brief/in a word/in conclusion, 重申观点. 模板二（立场类） When it comes towhen asked about 话题, some people believe /argue/recognize/ think that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to/see eye to eye on the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申观点或表决心.模板三（立场类） People hold different views about 话题. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申观点或表决心.模板四（给定观点类） The past few years have witnessed a phenomenon that 现象背景。Some people hold that 观点。However, I believe that 展开题目 The benefits/significance/importance of 关键点lies in the following aspects. Firstly, 理由一，例子一。Secondly, 理由二，例子二。Finally, 理由三，例子三。 To sum up/in brief/in conclusion, 重申观点 only 措施 can 结论。模板五（问题解决类） There is no doubt/it is true that 现象。However, as to the ways to 问题提出，different people hold different views. Some suggest that 建议一。Others argue that建议二。As far as I am concerned/in my opinion, I agree with the former/latter, the best way to solve the problem is 个人建议。 The reasons can be listed below/as follows. First of all/on the one hand, 理由一，证明一。Whats more/on the other hand, 理由二，证明二。Thirdlybesides, 理由三，证明三。 In a word/all in all/in a summary, 重申观点。Therefore, I suggest措施。模板六（对比类） 复述题目，陈述现象。Some people are in favor of 现象while others take an opposite side. As far as I am concerned, 个人观点。 On the one hand, 阐释优点。Firstly, 原因一。Secondly, 原因二。 On the other hand, 阐释缺点。例子。 Therefore, 结论。 However, we should be clear that 利大于弊/弊大于利，so I suggest that个人建议。小贴士：专四大作文最关键之处在于两点：一是文章结构紧密，条理清晰，尤其是开头，中间段落过渡以及结尾要能抓住判卷老师的眼球，这就需要考生熟悉常用开头，过渡与结尾的经典句型和模式；其次是理由或原因的合理罗列，这需要考生掌握一些真题背后的公共原因或理由，真正考试时就可以信手拈来，而不至于紧张过度没了思路。 理由或原因需要二点的话，就常用on the one hand, on the other hand从个人，社会角度展开论证；而三点的话，一般用first of all, in addition, finallylast but not least从个人，社会和家庭朋友三角度分析原因。由于专四考试的特殊性，命题者一般会从社会进步，经济发展，环境保护，人与自然，人际交往和日常生活热点焦点事件等方向出题考察学生的英语思维与表达。基于这点，掌握一点量的所谓“公共原因和理由”就显得十分必要，比如有利于开阔眼界，增进友谊，家庭和睦，社会和谐，对经济的促进作用。3、作文高分策略无论是英语专业学生还是非英语专业学生，作文往往是考试中的拦路虎，难以获得高分。模板也背了，基本语法也掌握了，句型也会使用了，可就是得不了高分数。 高分作文策略 1.适当用不同句型结构表达语意，比如主动变被动，利于表现事实的真实客观。结尾时的we should pay great attention to可以换为great attention should be paid to. E.g. Great attention should be paid to the all-round development of each individual student.我们应该更好地关注每个学生的全面发展。 2.善用插入语，无论是口语还是笔试作文，灵活使用插入语会文章更紧凑，起到某种修辞作用，如强调、过渡等。一般是把副词或连词等放在主语、动词或助动词后，两边加逗号隔开。如however, whats more, actually, for example, I think, etc. E.g. Other people, however, take it for granted that 3.勤换词、换表达 文章用词不能单调，重复，比如good, bad, thing, we, can, many, it is等。E.g. I havent forgotten the very exciting day when mom bought me a computer as birthday gift, which I am interested in so that I indulged myself in searching a lot of information I want, and enjoy a lot of beautiful music. That night I couldnt sleep, because I can feel the whole world. 替换为I never fail to remember the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. 小贴士：经典30词替换1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换 e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of)替换many. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6: take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think 7.affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits 10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.E.g. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything或little or nothing替换hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. Be interested in 18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember26. enjoy, possess 替换have27. interaction替换communication28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible4、专四作文句型活用1.引话题When it comes to 话题, some people think/hold/believe.Nowadays, there is a growing concern about 话题.Recently, 话题 has been brought into focus.Presently, there is a heated discussion about 话题 both on and off campus.It has been a contentious/controversial issue as to 话题.话题 has aroused great public concern in China.There is no denying the fact that 话题.It is a common scene around us that 话题.2.提论点In my view/opinion, personally, 论点.My view is that 论点.From my point of view, I hold/think 论点.As for myself/for my part, I would like to 论点. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to 论点.3.举例子For example/instance A good case in point isA particular example for this isConsider the case ofLet takeas an exampleLet me make an analogy for you.4.找原因There are many reasons forThe answer to this problem involves many factors.The first reason can be obviously seen.Most people would agree thatPart of the explanation is5.结尾In summary, in short, in brief, to sum up, from the foregoing, in conclusion, all in all, on the whole, in a word, on account of this, it can be concluded that, From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion thatTake into account of all these factors; we may reach the conclusion that二、便条1、评分标准评分构成分值要求 扣分标准日期2右上角，大多可以只写月份和日期。April 22nd, 2007/ 22 April, 2007/ Apr. 22, 2007/ 22/4/2007/ 4/22/2007/ April 22nd/ Apr. 22/凡不符合上述正确格式要求均扣1分。称呼在日期下一行左侧。/Dear Jimmy, /Dear Jimmy: /Jimmy:结尾署名的正确位置是正文结束后空一至两行的右侧。结束语和谦称不能在同一行。一般只写留条人的姓名。请假条和借条的格式比较完整、正式，通常在姓名的上一行加上Your friend, Your sincerely,等，以表示恭敬。Truly yours,/ Yours truly,/ Yours sincerely,/ Sincerely yours,/Yours,/Tom/签名要根据题目的要求写，如果题目未提供姓名，则随便写上一个英文名，请勿用XXX代替，如果代替，扣0.5签名要符合要求，如果一点不符合要求，扣0.5，超过两点不符合要求，扣1分，无署名，扣1分。内容3内容不够清楚全面 （一个信息点1分）首句需要用自己的语言表达（1分）是否有严重的语法错误 （0.5-1.5分）少1点扣1分，最多3项内容扣3分语言 4语法、词法正确严重语法、词法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误2个扣1分，最多扣4分总字数1字数在40-80之间。少于40或多于80字扣1分2、基本写作格式 便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素；1）Date：便条日期 （写信日期，通常写在信笺的右上角日期通常有下列两种定法：（a）月、日、年：如August15,200_ （b）日、月、年：如15thaugust,200_ 2）Salutation：称呼(顶格写起，自成一行）3）Body：正文4）结束语（在正文之后隔两三行偏右方开始写，开头字母大写，最后一个词后面用逗号，Yours sincerely, Yours truly,5) Signature：署名 （在结束语的正下方 ）3、历年真题分析 从历年真题的便条题目来看，便条的题材主要是围绕学生们日常生活中常发生的情况来命题。 常见的体裁有告示、祝贺、道歉、请求、拒绝、安慰、留言、邀请等简单的应用文。年份主题或题目 题材1991 邀请朋友一起逛街 建议1992 因为未能参加朋友的旅行而道歉 道歉 1993 接受邀请参加朋友生日派对 接受邀请1994 因未能及时交作业说明原因 留言并道歉1995自行车出售 告示1996祝贺同学演讲获奖 祝贺1997为没邀请某人而道歉 道歉1998入场券转让 告示1999安慰病人 安慰2000留言劝说应聘 建议2001失约道歉 道歉2002询问所转让的随身听的情况 咨询2003婉拒晚会邀请 拒绝邀请2004对同学考试失利安慰 安慰2005邀请参加音乐会 发出邀请2006希望参加短途旅行并询问两个细节咨询2007婉拒加入游泳会的邀请 拒绝邀请2008 向朋友推荐一款报纸 建议2009 向朋友推荐工作 建议2010 帮助朋友组织晚会 建议2011 邀请朋友去你家乡 邀请4、专四作文便条类型范文1. 邀请便条： 发出邀请 April 20, 2008 Dear Fiona, I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it. Yours, Amelia发出邀请（通知） April 20, 2008Dear girls and boys in Class 0403, This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various games. And well have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together. Yours, Mike Monitor of Class 0301接受邀请 April 20, 2008 Dear Amelia, Its so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Fiona2. 道歉类别便条在你不小心损坏他人东西时，在你失约时，在你违背自己的诺言时，你需要向别人道歉。道歉类便条的要领是：真诚地表达你的歉意；措辞规范、表达真切、释义明了。 1997（为没邀请某人而道歉）；2001（失约）套句：道歉行为： Im writing to show my apology for/ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to/Im sorry to say that Ive not finished reading it through, and have to keep it until next Sunday. / Excuse me for my delaying in turning in my assignment.道歉理由：I had a minor accident./ I had a minor operation.弥补纠正及其承诺：I am sure I can make up the loss by/ I promise it will never happen again. / It would be very kind(considerate) of you to give me another chance to( to give me another two days进一步致歉： Many apologies. / Do please forgive me.范文： April 20，2008Dear Fiona,I am writing to you to apologize for the abrupt way I departed just after the exams finished. It was terribly rude of me to have left without saying good-bye to you. The fact is that I was so excited when I learned I had passed the exams with high marks that I couldnt wait to get home and tell my parents. I am sure you will understand my feelings. Please accept my sincere apology, and with you a really happy holiday. Yours truthfully, Amelia3祝贺类别便条祝贺类便条的写作步骤为：表祝贺之情，然后说明所做事情的意义，最后表达白己的祝福。该类便条在语体上的要求为：欢快、分享喜悦、流畅常用句型：It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time. I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world.I was pleasantly surprised to read in the newspaper that you We hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life and in your career.Congratulations on your promotiongraduation successprogress achievements. Wish you the best luck and every happiness. Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year！Here is a word of cheer on your birthday from a warm friend. Congratulations and all good wishes to you! 范文： January 19, 1996Dear Gary, I have learned with delight that you won the second prize in the Municipal English Speech Contest. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your success. I know this is surely owing to your diligence. It is a reward you richly deserve for your long term efforts. My best wishes for your further success. Sincerely yours, Tom4告示类别便条告示类便条具有很强的实用性，它可以用来表达转让信息，也可以表达求购信息。清楚简约地表达是该类便条写作的关键。1998年：入场券转让；1995年：自行车出售常用句型：I write to inform you that we have found your bag. A fax has just come to hand saying that All the students are invited to attend the party to be held at 8 p.m. tomorrow。All the party members of the university are requested to attend the meeting All students who are interested in calligraphy are warmly welcome. Please notify the others concerned范文：Offer to Buy April 20, 2008Dear boys and girls,I badly need a ticket for postgraduate entrance examination instruction by the New Oriental School. If you have one to sale, Id like to pay it for twice the original price, for I have been longing for it and hence have canceled my trip to Hong Kong. Call me at 1234567; my cell phone will be on for 24 hours. Yours, AmeliaOffer to sell April 20, 2008Dear Schoolmates,Im a four-year student from the English Department. In two weeks, I will graduate from this university. Ive decided not to bring my bike with me when I leave. So Id like to part with it, and sell it to someone who might need it. It is half new, dark and light. With curved bars, it is mainly for ladys use. As far as the price is concerned, Id like to sell it for eighty yuan. Those interested in it can come and have a look at it before making a decision.Add: Room 402, Student Dormitory Building No. 5Tel: 16688895. 咨询类别便条欲向他人咨询某事而所要咨询的人不在时使用。写作要领：注意清楚简洁地阐释自己的问题