情绪描写之疲惫篇ppt课件

场景描写之疲惫篇 Adjectives exhausted Nouns tired fatigued weary exhausted drawn drowsy worn out haggard tiredness exhaustion fatigue verbs feelsleepy dozeoff canhardlyopenone seyes Reading 1 Settingofthepassage Time Place Characters WhatwastheauthordoingHowdidtheauthorfeel Howdidtheauthorexpresshisfeelings LastSunday onthewaytotheFragrantHills twofriends I WewereexperiencingtheexhaustingvisittotheFragrantHills Afteranhour longsubwayandtaxiride wefoundourselvesonavastringroadinterchange boilingwithtrafficandpeoplecomingfromalldirections ItseemedthatallChinahaddecidedtocome thatday Afterhalfanhourofstrugglingthroughtheseaofbodies aswephysicallymovedpeopleasidewithtwohands theonlywayofmakingprogress Acoupleoftimes weattemptedabitofwanderingoffthepath onlytobestungbypoisonivy Wesadlyreturnedtothecrowd Thensuddenly justpastatemple wespottedadirttrack Weweretheonlyonesthere Exhausted wecollapsedontorocks Butthetimecamewhenwehadtogritourteethandthrowourselvesawayagain Ittookanotherhalfhouroffruitlesswavingbeforewecouldcollapseintoataxi Ifinallyarrivedatmysubwaystation homesweethome tiredandaching Theauthorcreatedanexhaustingscenethroughthedescriptionofactions surroundings psychology surroundings psychology actions Usefulsentencestructures1 主句 todo eg Acoupleoftimes weattemptedabitofwanderingoffthepath onlytobestungbypoisonivy 1 他们搬起石头砸自己的脚 Theyliftedarock 2 Rat匆忙赶到现场 却被告知可怜的Toad已经被带走了 Rathurriedtotheplot onlytodropitontheirownfeet onlytobetoldToadhadbeentakenaway 2 adj 主句 主句 adj e g Exhausted wecollapsedontorocksandbroughtoutourlunchboxes Ifinallyarrivedatmysubwaystation homesweethome exhausted 1 一小时以后 他们又湿又冷 累得浑身酸疼 仍然不知道身在何处 Anhourlater they hadnoideawheretheywere 2 当一切再次准备就绪了 疲惫不堪的Moly坐在小船里浑身湿漉漉的 非常可怜 Whenallwasreadyagain thetiredMolysatintheboat 4 Molykeptmovingintheforestandfinallyclimbedonanopenareaatdusk 又饿又渴 wetandcoldachingwithtiredness verywetandverymiserable hungryandthirsty Writingskills 1 Letthesurroundingsspeak 2 Addpsychologicaldescriptions 3 Describeactionsspecifically Description1 Letthesurroundingsspeak Onehotsummerday SteveandZachwerecampingintheforestnearariver Butsuddenlytheysmelledsomething andtheyrealizedthatlightninghadsetthewoods fire Wind blownflamehadleapedfromthetopofonetreetoanother Thelongdrysummerhadturnedtheforestintoatinderbox 火绒箱 andthethunderstormwasn thelpingmuch Ithadmorewindandlightningthanrain ZachpulledSteve sarm StevepulledBrady sleash 皮带 andtheirheadsdownagainstthestrongfire wind theyhurrieddownthepaththeyhadfollowedearlier Theairwasfullofsmoke andpinebranchesbrokefromburningtreeswithacrispsound Stevekepthiseyesontheroute exhaustedthemwasthattheyhadtomakeitdowntotheriver Bradybarkedasharpwarning Aheadofthemlayadensecurtainofsmokeacrossthepath What on burning 1 地点状语 谓语 主语 主谓全部倒装 e g Aheadofthemlayadensecurtainofsmokeacrossthepath 1 这时 他们恰好看到一辆地铁经过 里面坐着一只短粗肥胖的动物 正在非常吃力 非常笨拙地划船 Andjustthentheysawarowing boatgoingpast andinit 2 漆黑的森林力传来哨声和啪嗒声 疲惫不堪的Rat感到非常害怕 但是他仍然坚持在森林力搜寻并一直叫着 Moly Moly Insidethedarkwood Ratfelt and buthekept search thewoodfromendtoend call Moly Moly allthetime 3 站台上挤满了如此多的人以至于我根本不可能挤上地铁 Ontheplatform thatIcouldn tmakeitonthesubway satashortfatanimal rowingveryhardandverybadly flewthewhistlingsandthepatterings frightened wornout searching calling crowdedsomanypeople 2 What 情绪v sb is was that从句eg Whatexhaustedthemwasthattheyhadtomakeitdowntotheriver 句式翻译1 令他们感到高兴的是他们终于安全地到达了河边 句式翻译2 令他感到欣慰的是他的努力终于得到了回报 Whatdelightedthemwasthattheyreached arrivedat gottotheriverbanksafe Whatrelievedhimwasthathiseffortpaidoff Ihappenedtobeonthewaytoworkduringthemorningrushhour Becauseofarainstormandstrongwindlastnight thestreetscoveredwithbrokentreebranchesandadvertisementboardswereinamess Buses taxis andprivatecarscouldn tmoveabit crowdedinthestreets Eventhesubwaysystemalmostcametoastop Iwentfromsubwaylinetosubwaylineonlytofindthatmostservicehadstopped AftermakingmywaythroughcrowdsofpeopleIfinallyfoundasubwaylinethatwasoperating Unfortunately aheadofmelaythousandsofpeoplewaitingtoboardthesubwaysothatIcouldnotevengetdownthestairstotheplatform SoIhadtowalkseveralblocksintheincreasinglyheavyrain WhenIfinallygottomyofficeIwaswetthrough exhaustedanddiscouraged Sample 1 Letthesurroundingsspeak Readingandcompleting Feeling 身体 and 精神 exhausted Sullivancomplainedaboutthechaosofparenting 一 就 theywalkedinagrocerystore immediatelyshestruggledtopreventherkidsfrompullingflowers thenstabbingballoons thenbreakingfreesamples eveneatingthecandieswithoutany permit Atthattime shefelthersystembreaking down out about theyweredizzy touchingeverything andnotatallusingtheirinside sounds voices Meanwhile shesufferedthecomplaints pityorevenblamesfromthestoreownerandothercustomers Itseemedasifalltheworldwerewatchingher struggle tocontrolherkids After repeated askingherkidstoquietdownandbehave they shestartedtofeelextremely defeat Shethoughttoherself IfonlyIhadnotbroughtthemwithme IfonlyI have magic Oh myGod Whocomestohelpme Howmuchshewishedthatshecouldhaveeducatedherkidstobehavewell Feelingphysicallyandmentallyexhausted Sullivancomplainedaboutthechaosofparenting Themoment minutetheywalkedinagrocerystore immediatelyshestruggledtopreventherkidsfrompullingflowers thenstabbingballoons thenbreakingfreesamples eveneatingthecandieswithoutanypermission Atthattime shefelthersystembreakingdown theyweredizzy touchingeverything andnotatallusingtheirinsidevoices Meanwhile shesufferedthecomplaints pityorevenblamesfromthestoreownerandothercustomers Itseemedasifalltheworldwerewatchingherstrugglingtocontrolherkids Afterrepeatedlyaskingherkidstoquietdownandbehavethemselves shestartedtofeelextremelydefeated Shethoughttoherself IfonlyIhadnotbroughtthemwithme IfonlyIhadmagic Oh myGod Whocomestohelpme Howmuchshewishedthatshecouldhaveeducatedherkidstobehavewell Thinking Howdidshefeelaboutparenting Howdidtheauthorcreatesuchscene Shefeltphysicallyandmentallyexhausted Bypsychologicaldescriptions suchas shefelt shesuffered Itseemedasif Afterrepeatedlyasking Shethoughttoherself Ifonly Ifonly shewished Tips usesomeverbsornounsoradjectives oradverbs evensubjunctivemoodtodescribeone spsychologicalactions suchaswiththehopeof think thinktooneself wish 2 Addpsychologicaldescriptions 1 Usefulexpressions 1 Shefeltherself surround bydarknessandfear 2 Shefeltalltheanimalsandplantsintheforest spin roundher 3 看来她像是在做梦 4 仿佛有个好心人将她拽出了森林 5 要是她没有把手机落在包里就好了 6 她多么希望她丈夫昨天跟着她一起 surrounded spinning Itseemsasifshewereinadream Itseemedasifthegoodmantriedtodragheroutoftheforest Ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinherbag Howmuchshewishedthatherhusbandhadfollowedheryesterday Standingintheforest Isawnothingbutwildplants SuddenlyIrealizedthatIwaslost Ikeptmoving butthefartherIwalked themoreconfusedIbecame Althoughitwasonlyadayofwalking itseemedasifIhadbeentrappedhereforacentury IknewIhadtofindanopenareasothatIcouldbeeasilyfound SoIdraggedmyachingfeetforwardwiththehopeofmeetingsomeperson Fortunately Ifoundahugeflatrockinanopenareaatadistance Iclimbedontoitandcollapsedthere Allregretscrowdedinmymind IwishedIhadneverleftaloneangrily Ifonlymyhusbandwerewithme Sample 2 Addpsychologicaldescriptions Whenherecoveredhissenses hethrewhimselfonthebed rollingabout hekissedfranticallytheplace heremainedthereforseveralmomentsasmotionlessasthoughhewereabouttoexpire thenherose drippingwithperspiration 汗水 breathingquickly mad andbegantobeathisheadagainstthewall Atlengthhefellasecondtime exhausted hedraggedhimselfonhiskneesoutsidethecell andcroucheddownfacingthedoor inanattitudeofastonishment 3 Describeactionsspecifically Underlinethedetailsofdescribinghisexhaustion Creating Describeanexhaustingscenewhenyouwerelostinaforestbydescribingactionsspecifically 3 Describeactionsspecifically Afterwalkingforquitealongtime withnopathtofollow IjustrealizedthatIgotlost Ihadnochoicebuttokeepmoving fallingtotheground risingandthenmovingforward Afterclimbingtoahighplaceoutofbreath Isawnothingbutforestandfarbeyondasnowcappedmountaintop Asnightwasbeginningtofall IwassotiredthatIdraggedmyachingfeettoanopenareaandcollapsedmyselfonarock Sample 3 Describeactionsspecifically 1 Hewastryinghardtostaycalm buthisheartwasbeatingveryfast Hewasalone andfarfromhelp andthenightwascomingdownquickly Allthewoodseemedtobealive running following chasingsomethingorsomebody ThetiredMolebegantoruntoo butdidnotknowwhere Heranintotreesandbushes hefelloverthingsandintothings hepickedhimselfupandranon Atlasthefoundadeepdarkholeinthebottomofanoldtreeandfellintoit tootiredtorunanotherstep Helaythere shakingwithfearandlistenedtothewhistlingsandthepatteringsoutside 3 Describeactionsspecifically 2 WhenthefatigueoffindingnothinghaddisheartenedTristan whowasnoteasilydiscouraged Quasimodocontinuedthesearchalone Hemadethetourofthechurchtwentytimes lengthandbreadth upanddown smelling running calling shouting peeping thrustinghisheadintoeveryhole pushingatorchundereveryvault 教堂地下室 despairing mad Amalewhohaslosthisfemaleisnomoreroaringnormorehaggard 3 Describeactionsspecifically 3 Hefeltwornoutallover andhiskneesandlegswereshaking andthewindwasblowingovertheland andcloudsflewbyasthedarknessofeveningfell Leavesblewfromthetrees andthewaterroaredasitcrashedontotheshore 1 Letthesurroundingsspeak 4 Andawaytherivertookhim pushinghimalong ononeside thenontheother Thecottondresstieditselfroundhislegs tryingtopullhimunder andToadhadtofighttokeephisheadabovewater Atlast hemanagedtocatchholdofsomewaterplantsbytheriverbank Heheldon tootiredtopullhimselfoutofthewate