翻译常用之八大技amplification.ppt

翻译常用之八大技巧 二增译法Amplification 增词不能蛇足 减词不能损意 Syntactically semantically rhetoricallyorcustomarilynecessarywordsNoextrainformationormeaningornounfaithfultotheoriginalInformationindirectlyhidingintheoriginal ChairmanMaoisanactivist aprimemover anoriginatorandmasterofstrategyachievedbyalternatingsurprise tensionandeasement 毛泽东是活动家 是原动力 是创始者 是交替运用出其不意 紧张松弛而取得成功的战略家 Attention verbsaremorefrequentlyusedinChinesethaninEnglish Thedailynewspaperguides educatesandencouragesthemasses 这份报纸可指导群众 教育群众 鼓舞群众 Attention theonlyobjectinEnglishsentencesmustberepeatedinChinese Wemustanalyzeandsolveproblems FortheinternationalcommunitythemoststrikingconsequenceofthesechangesisthatChinahasgrowntobetheworlds eleventhlargesteconomy andissettogrowfurther 对于国际社会来说 这些变化所带来的最为引人注目的结果是 中国已跃居世界第十一位经济大国 而且今后定会更强 Attention amplificationforpurposeofstyleormannerofwriting Intheevening afterthebanquets theconcertsandthetabletennisexhibitions hewouldworkonthedraftingofthefinalcommunique ThefirstrequisiteofagoodcitizeninthisRepublicofoursisthatheshallbeableandwillingtopullhisweight Nottoeducatehim thechild istocondemnhimtorepetitiousignorance 如果我们不对儿童进行教育的话 那就会使他们沦入世世代代的愚昧状态 Attention someEnglishabstractnounsmustbeaddedbycategorywordssoastobeclarifiedinmeaning ThearroganceofthearistocracyhelpedtoleadtotheFrenchRevolution Timedropsindecay likeacandleburntout 时间一点一滴地逝去 犹如蜡烛慢慢燃尽 Attention meaningalreadyincludedintheoriginal Hepouredouthistaleofmisfortunes 笑 smile laugh grin giggle titter chuckle Youcanalmostputitdownasageneralrulethatpresidentsofteninvite honestcriticism fromtheiraides 你几乎可以把这一点看成一种倾向 历届总统经常请他们的助手们提出 直率的批评 Attention EnglishpluralformshavetobeclarifiedbymoreChinesewords Thejudgelethimoffwithwarningsnottocausetroubleagain Thesimpleperceptionofnaturalformsisadelight Theinfluenceoftheformsandactionsinnatureissoneedfultoman that initslowestfunctions itseemstolieontheconfinesofcommodityandbeauty RalphWaldoEmerson May25 1803 April27 1882 Americanessayist philosopher poet andleaderoftheTranscendentalistmovement 只要一想到自然万物的形体 我便心花怒放 自然界里各种形体和各种活动的影响 对于人类都是非常必需的 这种影响 就其最粗浅的作用来说 似乎只局限于适用性和审美价值 夏济安 Ihadimaginedittobemerelyagestureofaffection butitseemsitistosmellthelambandmakesurethatitisherown AnnBlackmore LambingTime 我原以为这不过是表示亲昵 但现在看来 这是为了闻一闻羊羔的味道 来断定羊羔是不是自己生的 Attention tenseinEnglishneedstobeaddedbyadverbstoshowdifferenttimeinChinese TheEnglishlanguageisinverygoodshape Itischanginginitsownundiscoverableway butitisnotgoingrottenlikeaplumdroppingoffatree Toattractforeigninvestment theUnitedStatesmustofferhigherinterestrate addingtodomesticborrowingandfinancingcosts whichboostinflation 为了吸引外资 美国必须提供较高的利率 而这样就会加重内债和金融开支 最终导致通货膨胀 Attention forlogicpurposeofthesentence toshowrelationshipbetweentheelementsofthesentence Thestrongestmancannotalterthelawofnature BedinSummerInwinterIgetupatnightAnddressbyyellowcandle lightInsummer quitetheotherway Ihavetogotobedbyday IhavetogotobedandseeThebirdsstillhoppingonthetree Orhearthegrown uppeople sfeetStillgoingpastmeinthestreet Anddoesitseemhardtoyou Whenalltheskyisclearandblue AndIshouldlikesomuchtoplay Tohavetogotobedbyday 夏之眠冬日里我夜里起床 借这昏黄的烛光穿衣裳 夏日里可不一样 我不得不白日里就睡觉上床 小鸟儿仍在树上蹦蹦跳跳 大人们的脚步声还在大街上回响 我却得早早睡觉上床 天空还那么蔚蓝 明亮 我多么想嬉戏 玩耍 你是否觉得这时候就睡觉难入梦乡 夏之眠冬天起床还未天亮 穿衣需借黄色烛光 夏天的情形完全两样 上床睡觉还有日光 上床睡觉 既能看见鸟儿在树上欢跳 也能听见大人的脚步迈过屋前的街道 此时的天空蔚蓝明亮 我多想去玩耍 嬉闹 此时要你躺到床上 是否能够进入梦乡 Homework1 Withinaveryshorttimeofcomingbackintopowerthepresentgovernmenthadtakenstepstostabilizetheposition 2 Firstofall weappliedourselvestoidentifyingtherootcausesofournationalailments examiningcontemporaryevidenceandrefusingtobeslavestooutmodeddoctrinairebeliefs 3 Secondlyweembarkedonareasonedpolicytoensuresteadyeconomicgrowth themodernizationofindustry andaproperbalancebetweenpublicandprivateexpenditure 4 Thirdlybyrefusingtotakerefuge asthepreviousGovernmenthadcontinuallydoneintheprecedingyears inpanic strickenstop gapmeasures westimulatedthereturnofinternationalconfidence 5 Asaresultofthoseimmediatemeasu