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第 5 页 共 5 页2013福建高考英语作文2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试【福建卷】第二节书面表达(满分25分）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面 的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容；2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数120左右;4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pave the wayFrom the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. _题型分析这是一篇看图写作题，是高考英语写作中对考生来说相对比较难的一题。它主要考查考生综合运用语言的能力，要求考生通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文字信息。但是，它并不是要求考生按照试题里的“提示”进行逐句翻译，而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下，用自己的语言写成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。审题要素（1） 要认真审图（2） 需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容，处理好人物与时空及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题（3） “丰满的想象+变化的表达”思路导引 第一段：描述漫画：描述这幅图所要呈现的内容 第二段：揭示画旨：分析漫画所揭示的问题第三段：发表看法：提出自己的看法标准范文From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.赏析：重点短语well dressed穿着体面的；a common phenomenon一种普遍现象；pave the way 为铺平道路，为做准备；spare no effort不遗余力，不计代价；高级句型Only in this way can they只有这样他们才能8. 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语（福建卷）One Possible Version一个可能的版本From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.从这幅图中我们可以看到一个家庭三个走在红地毯。 The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.儿子,穿着得体,骄傲地在父亲身后向前弯曲的夹克和母亲面前推出地毯,出汗了。It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.现在它显示了一个普遍现象,孩子是家庭的中心,肩负着父母的希望。 Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.父母为孩子安排一切,不遗余力地为他们的成功铺平道路。As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.因此,孩子变得依赖他们的父母,他们没有独立的想法或创意。Such a situation is of great concern.这种情况是十分关注的。 In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children s development.在我看来,过度保护和太多的保健非常不利于孩子的发展。 Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.而不是为他们做的一切,父