英语四级作文模版范例范文.doc

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法Certificate Craze On Campus _行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。高分范文Certificate Craze On CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. 1Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, 2quite possibly, you may get the answer 3that he or she is preparing for a certificate 2of some kind. 4Why does this craze appear?4There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, 5it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards 6by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.7From my point of view, we should be more rational 8when it comes to certificates, 9since certificates 2do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is 10nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability 10but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮点点评】1祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。2限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。3that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。4设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。5强调句型，此处是强调主语。6which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。7用于引出“我”的观点。8“当谈到或提及时”。9since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。10“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。佳句临摩1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。_.2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability.临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。_.3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌 2)产生这种现象的原因是什么 3)你如何看待这一现象 Students Pursuit for Famous Brands _ _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。 高分范文 Students Pursuit for Famous Brands Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they 1are inclined to buy famous brands. 2Moreover, many students from poor families begin to 3follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention. 4The following reasons can account for college students preference for famous brands. 2Above all, in many college students eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. 2Whats more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, 5which has a great attraction to young college students. 2Besides, parents spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit. 2As far as I am concerned, 6it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. 3After all, most of famous brands are 7far beyond their consumption ability. 3Besides, 8it is not famous brands but a persons noble character that really makes him high class. 3Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character 9rather than pursuing famous brands. 【亮点点评】 1“有倾向”。 2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。 3 follow表示“跟随，追求(趋势或时尚)” 4用于引出原因。 5which引导非限制性定语从句。 6 it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语。 7“远远超出他们的消费能力”。beyond表示“超出范围”。 8强调句型，此处是强调主语。notbut连接并列成分。 9“而不是”。 佳句临摹 1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. 临摹：对大学生来说，了解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。 _ 2. 佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students. 临摹：在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博 像赌博的那么有害和危险了，它经常会导致一个人破产，还会玷污人的心灵。 _ 3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands. 临摹：很多同学经常玩电脑游戏，这是浪费时间，而不是一种有益的放松方式。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：1)简单介绍个人情况2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan_行文思路本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心，最后表示感谢。高分范文A Letter Applying for a Bank LoanSep 12th, 2008To whom it may concern,I am a freshman of Lianhe University, 1majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.My parents are both laid-off workers, so its 2beyond their power to finance me through the college education. 3To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. 4Therefore, 5with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.6I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. 4Meanwhile, Ill 7spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,Song Xue【亮点点评】1“主修”，现在分词作伴随状语。2“超出的能力范围”。3“使事情更糟糕的是”。4过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。5“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。6“我保证”，that引导同位语从句。7“不遗余力”。佳句临摩1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.临摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。_.2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.临摩：由于周围交通不便利，人们只得步行回家。_.3.佳句：Meanwhile, Ill spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.临摩：全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办奥运会。On the Celebrity Spokesperson Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media. This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product. A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items. This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized. Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides. Some stars endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior. In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public. To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.关于选秀节目 Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth. This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.There are a couple of reasons behind the tide. To start with, young folks need role models to learn from. So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs. This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences. Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves. Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.This is a divisive topic. On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains. As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies. 食品安全问题 On the Food Security Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead. 社会不文明现象 On Uncivilized Behaviors We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth. All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of. As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of. Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected Chinas image, according to an editorial posted on People Dailys official website.As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves. We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them. There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend. To name only one: the lack of moral education. The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives. As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role. 感恩 On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache. As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on. 大学生使用信用卡现象 On Credit Card At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders. Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests. Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off. On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldnt afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents 6级作文模板:1）先背3个句子1 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ., more and more. are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)2 The popularity of digital will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life. On the one hand , But on the other hand.（讲影响）3To conclude, .are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（结尾段）Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句，根据不同模板自由组合。2）模板（2个模板）1 开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。 中间段：措施 结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ., more and more. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is that中间段 Firstly.Secondly.Lastly but in no means least结尾段 To conclude, .are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.2 开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论 中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点) 结尾段：直接进入总结（即你的观点）保证你四，六级作文110分以上！Chapter One 文章开头句型1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如(e.g)1. When asked about., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that . But I think/view a bit differently.2. When it comes to . , some people bielive that . Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter .)3. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that . They claim/ believe/argue that . But I wonder/doubt whether.1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .e.g1. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.2. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)3.Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.- To be continued !1-3 观点法 -开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.e.g:1. Never history has the change of . been as evident as . Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of . benn more visible/popular than.2. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that.3. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot