《书面表达解题技巧》进阶练习（二）.doc

书面表达解题技巧进阶练习I. 书面表达1. 假设你是陈辉，Tom邀请你和几个朋友周六去他家吃饭，你已经接受了邀请，但是你突然得了重感冒不能去了，请你根据以下要点提示给Tom写一封信，表示歉意。 (1)感谢Tom的邀请； (2)由于发烧咳嗽，医生建议休息几天； (3)希望Tom代你向赴约的其他朋友问好。 注意：(1)词数100字左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2. 假定你所在的学校最近要举办一次征文大赛，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇有关交友的短文。 注意：(1)文章需包含所有要点，结论部分可自由发挥。 (2)词数：100左右。 (3)开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。In life, we can hardly do without friends. _参考答案【答案】1.Dear Tom, Thank you for inviting me to have dinner in your house this Saturday. However, I regret to tell you that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have caught a bad cold. Ive been having a high fever and coughing badly. My doctor suggested that I should take a rest for several days. I must make an apology to you. Its a pity that I will miss such a good chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with so many friends. Please give my best regards to other friends who come to the dinner. Yours sincerely, Chen Hui2. In life, we can hardly do without friends. Friends are an important part in our lives. As we know, life is not easy. There are many difficulties and problems we cant overcome through our own efforts alone. We need friends to support and help us out of them. Also, we need friends to share our joys and sorrows. Otherwise, we will suffer from loneliness and feel sad. However, there are many kinds of friends. What is true friendship? As the popular saying goes, A friend in need is a friend indeed. True friends are those who never desert you when they are badly needed. Whats more, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and to avoid doing what is wrong or illegal, however stubborn you are. In conclusion, make friends with those who can share our feelings and will suffer from loneliness with us. 【解析】1. 本文是一封道歉信，需要注意文中的时态及语气。本文中应该注意在所给的材料的基础上，适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加上原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。 2. 根据提示信息可以判断文章应用一般现在时和将来时态，使用第一人称。而且文章需包括三个方面内容，即你对交友的看法、你对朋友的看法，最后得出结论。写作时要根据表中所列的信息进行适当发挥想象，以使文章内容丰满。在写作时要使用恰当的连接词把提示信息有效连接起来，使文章语言通顺流畅，上下文衔接紧凑。此外，在写作时还要注意使用高级词汇和多种句式表达。文章亮点：使用了短语：share our joys and sorrows分享快乐和悲伤；suffer from loneliness忍受孤寂；encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事；使用了定语从句：As we know, life is not easy.True friends are those who never desert you when they are badly needed.In conclusion,make friends with those who can share our feelings and willsuffer from lonelinesswith us.及让步状语从句：What