高三英语二轮复习专题讲座书面表达开放作文1.ppt

现在让我来谈一谈如何学好英语 我经常大声朗读 这样容易记住并形成用英语思考的习惯 我每天收听英语广播 用英语和别人交谈 我的听力和口语进步很快 我坚持练习写作 我的写作能力不断提高 nowi dliketotellyouhowilearnenglish ioftenreadaloud whichhelpsmetorememberthemeasilyandformagoodhabitofthinkinginenglish ilistentoenglishprogrameverydayandcommunicate talkwithothersinenglish inthisway i veimprovedbothmyhearingandmyspokenenglish ikeepwritingenglishcompositionsandmywrittenenglishisbecomingbetterandbetter 收到你的信我很高兴 你问我如何提高英语写作能力 写作能力只有通过写来提高 写得越多 水平提高越快 用你学过的词 短语和句子 不要用那些不熟悉的 希望你在英语方面取得成功 i mverygladtoreceiveyourletter youaskedhowtoimproveyourabilityofwriting inmyopinion onecanonlyimproveone swritingabilitythroughwriting themoreyouwrite thebetteryoucanwrite trytousethewords phrasesandsentencesyouhavelearned don tusethoseyouarenotsureof wishingyousuccessinyourenglishstudy 62 iforgot herthebook i llgobacktotakeit iforgot herthebook soiwentbacktotakeitagain a toreturnb returningc toreturnbackd return a b 63 hehadthesickgirl tothehospital hehadthesickgirl medicinetothehospital a carryb tocarryc carryingd carried d a 65 wehadthoughtwhatwedid him wehadthoughtthatwedid him a satisfyingb satisfactionc satisfiedd satisfy c d 66 sheisconsidered thedancehall shehasconsidered thedancehallsofar a howtobuyingb tobuyc tohaveboughtd buying b d 67 inthemagazine imadeadecisiontoreaditagain bythemagazine imadeadecisiontoreadit a interestb interestedc tointerestd beinginterested b d 开放作文 sabrina onesaturdayafternoon lihuaandwangpingwereplayinginthewoodswhentheyfoundabirdontheground theypickeditupandfounditwounded supposeyouarelihuaandwangpingpleasetelluswhatyoudidwiththebird 审语境 审人称 审时态 抓关键词 一个星期六的下午 李华和王平在树林里玩 他们在地上发现一只受伤的小鸟 supposingyouarelihuaandwangpingwepleasetelluswhatyoudidwiththebird 过去时whatyoudid 解题步骤 认真审题 巧妙构思 展开细节 语言表达 onesaturdayafternoon lihuaandwangpingwereplayinginthewoodswhentheyfoundabirdontheground theypickeditupandfounditwounded did 细节描写 巧妙构思 tookithometookittothehospitalburieditwhenitwasdead展开细节 恰当的语言表达语言应地道 规范 得体 onesaturdayafternoon lihuaandwangpingwereplayinginthewoodswhentheyfoundabirdontheground theypickeditupandfounditwounded 范文thinkingthatitmightdiewithouttreatment wetookithome imadealittlenestforitandgaveitsomericetoeat somedayslater thebirdrecovered wetookitoutandletitreturntothewoods ithoughtwehaddonesogoodathing weputthebirdinmyhatandtookittotheanimalhospital thedoctorsaidoneofitswingswashurt hegaveussomemedicineandtoldustoputitonthewoundonceaday wetookthebirdhomeandtookgoodcareofit afewdayslater thebirdcouldflyagain 3 wetriedtosavethebirdbygivingitsomewaterandfood andthenwedecidedtotakeittotheanimalhospital butitwastoolate afterashortwhile thebirdcouldn tmoveatallanditwasdead sowedugasmallholeandputthebirdintoitasabomb whatapity 问题范文firstfindthewoundofthebirdquickly second tidythewoundcarefullyandsoftlyandremembernottomakethebirdpainalot thenputsomemedicineonitandtieahandaroundthewound 时态问题2 firstwearelookingatthebirdcarefullyinordertoknowwherethebirdhaswounded thenwetreatedthebirdcarefullyanddecidedtotakethebirdtoahospital whereitcouldhaveabettermedicalcare afterthat whenthebirdisgettingbetter weletitfree 缺乏细节 3 onedayintheafternoon wangpingandiwereplayinghappilyinthewoods wewereplayingballsandsuddenlytheballrantotheothersideoftheroad ihurriedtogetitwhenisawabirdlyingthereandifounditwaswounded wequicklytookittothehospitalandthedoctorgavethebirdsomemedicineandwetookitbackhomethen itwasgettingbetterandbetterandwedecidedtosetitfreethenextday onedayintheafternoon wangpingandiwereplayinghappilyinthewoods wewereplayingballsandsuddenlytheballrantotheothersideoftheroad ihurriedtogetitwhenisawabirdlyingthereandifounditwaswounded 缺乏主次 离题话偏多 重复原文 4 wangpingtoldmethathewasalittlehungryandwecouldeatthebird iagreedwithhimandwefoundsomedrywoodandputittogether thenwecookedthebird itwasreallydelicious whatahappyday found put cooked 思想格调不高 开放作文的写作要领 认真审题 即 审情景 人称 时态 抓关键词大脑风暴 发散思维 尽可能想出多的思路紧扣主题 符合要求 首尾呼应注意写作对象和语言风格 要有读者意识要进行细节描写要力求内容新颖 逻辑合理要做到思想健康 积极向上注意语言表达的准确性 youandyourfriendareinyourroom hefindsoneofthewindowsisbrokenandsays yourwindowisbroken whathappened youtellhimwhathappened 03北京高考样题 1 认真审题情景 时态 人称 关键词 你所面对的对象是你的朋友 他在你的家里 他发现你家的玻璃碎了 问其原因 whathappened过去时第一人称 其他人称不能用第二人称inyourroom window broken whathappened 2 大脑风暴afootballbrokethewindow athiefbrokethewindow myparentsquarreledandthrewavasetothewindow ahardcoverbookwasthrownoutofthewindow anearthquakehappened 选出自己熟悉的 容易发挥的 新颖的素材3 紧扣主题 符合要求 首尾呼应题目要求写出 玻璃是怎么碎的 所以全文都要围绕 碎 来写 4 注意写作对象和语言风格 要有读者意识交流的对象是你的朋友 交流的内容是玻璃碎的原因 所以要用口语化的语言5 要进行细节描写itwasiwhobrokeit ifeltverysorryaboutit 文章必须要回答how6 要力求内容新颖 逻辑合理应力求避开大众化的想法 写出富有创造性的文章 但不能违背逻辑 myfatherandiweredoingthepaper foldinggames wefoldedalotofpaperplanes whenwetestedwhichonecouldflyhigher oneofthepaperplaneshitthewindow andmywindowwasbroken 7 要做到思想健康 积极向上教育就是要把学生培养成对社会有益的好公民 写作要遵循的指导思想就是中学生应该做的 应该想的一些行为准则 8 注意语言表达的准确性基本功 开放作文的写作要领 认真审题 即 审情景 人称 时态 抓关键词大脑风暴 发散思维 尽可能想出多的思路紧扣主题 符合要求 首尾呼应注意写作对象和语言风格 要有读者意识要进行细节描写要力求内容新颖 逻辑合理要做到思想健康 积极向上注意语言表达的准确性 范文iguessitwasallmyfault mymotherwasdoingsomereadingbythewindowyesterday andsheaskedmetogetabookfromthebookshelfforher itwasahardcoverandalittlethick igotthebookanddecidedtothrowittoher butshemissedit anditbrokethewindow exerciseclassisoverandthestudentsaregoinghome atthistime theheadteachercomesinandsayshehasanannouncementtomake ifyouaretheheadteacher pleasemakeyourannouncement mayihaveyourattention please withthesars wewillstayathomefromtomorrow thedateofcomingbacktoschoolwillbeinformedbyphonecall ofcourse themidtermexamwon tbeheld hereisyourhomework ithinkititsenoughforyounow butmorehomeworkwillbeputontheinternet pleasecheckitassoonaspossibleandtakecareofyourselves remembertocallyourmonitoreverydaysincetomorrow attention please ihaveanannouncementtomake astheinternetfacilitieshavebeenintroducedinourschool youareexpectedtomakefulluseofthem allthedigitallibrariesareopenatnoonandyoucandownloadfreesoftware chat listentomusicandsende mailsacrosstheworldinaflash what smore 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iturnedmypocketinsideout butijustcouldn tfindit thenirememberedihadleftitinthefittingroom irushedbacktothestoreimmediately thankgoodness acustomerhadfoundmypurseandgaveittothesalesgirl exerciseyouandyourcousingoclimbinginthemorning butyoucomehomealonelateintheafternoon yourmotherisverysurprisedandasks whereisyourcousin whyareyousolate pleasegiveyourexplanations 范文wewereclimbingthehillwhenwesawamonkeylyingontheground unabletomove shewasinjuredseriously afteraquickexamination wef