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2009、2010年高考写作任务的共同特点： 关注学生生活、关注情感体验、关注表达的开放性描述所给信息：2009 ：志愿者去敬老院开展志愿活动（时间、地点、人物、活动）2010 ：李越的事迹（时间、地点、人物、活动）分析原因、影响或结果2009 ：老人们的反应2010 ：李越的事迹对同学的影响阐发你的简短评论或看法2009 ：简短评论2010 ：你的评论书面表达最忌 :要点不全，内容不完整； 字( 字迹潦草, 字迹不清 ) ；不分段( 分段是为了文章更清晰, 至少要分成两段 ) ；低级错误 ( 主谓不一致 , 时态不一致 , 词性变化不正确 , 单词拼写错误等 ) ；词汇堆砌 ( 整篇几乎无完整句子 , 一塌糊涂, 某个词汇过频重复使用 ) 。书面表达解题策略一、 作文的卷面与书写；整洁、规范的书写是写作得分的亮点 规范策略 二、 语言表达的层次性与丰富性；a. 词汇的选择灵活多样； 词汇策略 b. 句型结构运用灵活多变;句式策略 三、 行文的逻辑性与流畅性；a. 突出文章段落中的主题句；b. 归纳各种功能的连词； 行文策略 四、 文章的思想性与开放性；如要表示 “使”，不要仅依靠 make:? a) this society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights.? b) women are still denied equal rights.? a) the incident made me recall one of my past experiences.? b) the incident reminded me of one of my past experiences.如要表达 “越来越 ”，不要只使用 more and more:? a) more and more studentsfind learning english has become more and more difficult.? b) students in growing numbersfind learning english has become increasingly difficult.? a) more and more teenagerssmoke cigarettes in recent years.? b) teenage smokingis on the risein recent years.? a) more and more teachersare demanded with the development of economy.? b) there is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.如要表达 “大多数 ”，不要一味用 most:? a) most students take a part-time job after class.? b) the vast majority of studentstake a part-time job after class.? a) most people take part in sports of different kinds.? b) the considerable proportion of peopletake part in sports of different kinds.? a) most college students take a negative attitude towards smoking.? b) the large percentage of college populatiotnake a negative attitude towards smoking.如要表达 “不仅，而且”不要只用not only. but also:? a) taking a part-time job can not only earn a little money, but also have an opportunity to contact society.? b) taking a part-time jobmeans more than a little money you can earn. it also means an opportunity tocontact society.词汇策略1、因为生病了他昨天没有参加会议。he didnt come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill.he didnt attend the meeting yesterdayon account ofhis illness. he was absent fromthe meeting yesterdayowing to his illness.his illnessaccounted forhis absence fromthe meeting yesterday. his illnessprevented him from attendingthe meeting yesterday.2、当他是孩童时，就喜爱学习。when he was a child, he liked to learn everything. as a child, hewas fond of learning.as a child, hetook great pleasure in learning. when he was a child, hewas crazy about learning.when he was a child, hehad a strong desire for knowledge. when he was a child, hehad a strong appetite for knowledge.词汇策略3. 如果能考虑我的申请，我不胜感激。i ll thank you if you can think about my application.i ll be grateful to youif you can think about my application.i ll thank you from the bottom of my heartif you can take my application into consideration.i ll appreciate it if you can take my application into consideratio.n4、对于空气污染问题，人们非常担心。peopleare very worried about the problem of air pollution. peopleare greatly concerned abouthe problem of air pollution. peopleshow great concern abouthe problem of air pollution.the problem of air pollution hascaused wide public concer.n词汇策略5、我们将尽力按时完成任务。well do our best to finish our task in time.well do whatever we can to finishthe task in time. well make great efforts to finishthe task in time.well devote our efforts to finishingthe task in time.well spare no efforts to finishthe task in time.6、我突然想到了一个好注意。suddenly i had a good idea.all of a sudden, i thought of a good idea. all of a sudden, i came up witha good idea. all of a sudden,a good ideaoccurred tome.all of a sudden, a goodideaflashed across my mind.词的讲究简单词汇建议使用词汇? about concerning, involving, with regard to? be being discussed/built be under discussion/ construction/way/threat? cause bring about, give rise to, result in, lead to, contribute to? didnt failed to do? do perform/ undertake/ conduct/ fulfill/ carryout/ accomplish?explain account for?have possess/be equipped with/be armed with?have no more run out of?it is likely that chances are that?keep, to be remain?make sb. realize awaken sbto?no matter what regardless of?the purpose ofis tois intended to do?rapid growth boom?take place arise/occur句子的丰富性学会用一些常见句型用不同形式表达同一句意学会使用复杂句掌握几种表达技巧学会机智、巧妙地借鉴和运用试卷完形或阅读中的语言表达与观点熟读好词好句，熟读乃至背诵书面表达题范文，所谓 “它山之石，可以攻玉”。常用句型 ( 原因、影响 )?it can be easily proved that?no one can deny that?this can be expressed as follows:?to takeas an example,?a number of factors could account for the development in?it is chiefly responsible for?there are several possible reasons for thatexcept that?i personally think?when it comes to the increasing use of motor vehicles in beijing, some people think that use should be limited. others argue that. there is probably some truth to both arguments， but常用句型（论证、说明）? it has been illustrated that? we may cite another instance of? according to a latest study, it can be predicted? there is no sufficient evidence to show that? we may face the undeniable fact that? there is no denying that? it is widely acknowledged thatcontributed to .experts argue thatbut i doubt whetherwill? many experts point out thatcontributes directly to? there is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.? she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.学会使用复杂句（定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）1） tom was born in a small village. he received a good education in new york. he became a successful businessman later in new york.though born in a small village , tom received a good education in new york, where later he became a successful businessman.2） if you come back before six oclock, you can go out.you can go out on condition that /provided that you come back before six oclock.使用名词性从句他没有出现，使每个人失望。to everyones disappointment, he didnt turn up.what disappointed everyone was thaht e didnt turn up.it disappointed everyone that he didnt turn up.the fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everyon.e他又迟到了，这使老师非常生气。he was late again and it made the teacher very angry. his being late again madethe teacher very angry.it made the teacher very angry thathe was late again.the fact that he was late againmade the teacher very angry.合并句子1）中国面积 960万平方公里，是世界上第三大国。china is the third largest country in the world. it has an area of 9,600,000 square kilometres.china is the third largest country with an area of 9,600,000 square kilometres.2) 他喜欢踢足球，也喜欢打篮球。he enjoys playing football. he also enjoys playing basketball.not only does he enjoyplaying football, but also he enjoysplaying basketball.不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头? a) people have seen great changes in shanghai in recent years.? b) shanghai has witnessed great changes in recent years.改变语态a) many people think birth control is quite necessary in china.it is widely (commonly) thought /believed /held/(accepted) that birth control is quite necessary in china.b) he has made rapid progress in english. rapid progress has been made in english.c) we should make great efforts to prevent the environment from being destroyed.great efforts should be made to prevent the environment from being destroyed.使用非谓语动词a) i would like to be a volunteer for the meeting which will be held next monday.ihave a strong desireto be a volunteer for the meeting to be held next monday.b) once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. once seen, it can never be forgotten.c) when i found that so many people were sitting in the classroom, i was very nervous.finding so many people seatedin the classroom, i was very nervous.要学会用名词结构来表达意思the style of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.the style of living has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people.if we dont recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big mistake.if we are watching too much tv, our reading ability will be seriously affected.heavy exposure to tv will have a negative effect on our reading ability.star student of the weekli yue has been awarded the title of “star student of the week ”for what she did for our class. on the hot afternoon of last saturday, li yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumeswe would wear in the singing contest. while the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. finally, she found the right clothes. deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.li yue is always warm-hearted andcares a lot about the class. besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.it was a hot afternoon(阅读 a篇 第二段开头）years later, when i stood in the kitchen of, thinking how i wanted to make(完形 第二段首句）some of the best housing is never advertised but it passed from one group of students to another by word of mouth.( 阅读 b篇）so i went on the net, spent 15 minutes readingproduct reviews(阅读 e 篇 第一段）famous companies care more about profit than quality(阅读 e 60 题d选项）2011年绍兴一模书面表达：if parents take care of almost everything for their children, iwt very difficult for the children togo through the process of transforming from a little child into a real adu. ltill beparents shouldencourage their children to give every opportunity a chance and leave no ro