初三英语写作课ppt课件.ppt

Loveanimals lovetheworld Awritingclass 1 HangzhouZoo地址 杭州虎跑路 西湖之南 tothesouthof 建园时间 1958年1 有种类170多种 如老虎 狮子 熊猫等2 有很多花草树木 因此非常漂亮 3 附近有许多宾馆 可以住宿 离西湖很近4 有许多公交车直达 交通便利 It sonHupaoRoad ItistothesouthoftheWestLake Itwasbuiltin1958 Therearemorethan170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Therearemanyflowersandtrees Itisverybeautiful Therearemanyhotelsnearbytolivein TheyareneartheWestLake Itisveryconvenienttogetthere Alotofbusesgothere 2 1 覆盖了所有信息点 2 注重文章的开头与结尾 做到开头 开门见山 收尾 干净利落 3 注意文章信息的自然过渡 以提升文章的文采 增强文章的可读性 可适当使用一些连词或过渡词 如 and so then but what smore ofcourse bytheway ontheotherhand asyouknow inaddition asfor 等 4 避免同种句型连续多次使用 可采用变通的方法 用不同的句式表达同一种意思 如何算是一篇好文章 3 ItisonHupaoRoad ItistothenorthoftheWestLake Itwasbuiltin1958 Thereare170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Therearemanyflowesandtrees Itisverybeautiful Therearemanyhotelsnearbytolivein TheyareneartheWestLake Itisveryconvenienttogetthere Alotofbusesgothere I dliketotellyousomethingaboutHangzhouZoo ItliesonHupaoRoad andistothesouthoftheWestLake Asamodernzoo itwasbuiltin1958 Nowtherearemorethan170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Treesandflowersareallaroundthere soitisverybeautiful Ifyouwanttostayinhangzhouforsomedays thehotelsnearbyareyourbestchoice whicharenotfarfromtheWestLake What smore alotofbusesgothere youcantakeanyofthem Itisveryconvenient Anyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime 4 Hangzhou It onHupaoRoad istothesouthoftheWestLake As itwasbuiltin1958 therearemorethan170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Treesandflowersare itisverybeautiful IfyouwanttostayinHangzhouforsomedays thehotelsnearbyonNanshanRoadare arenotfarfromtheWestLake alotofbusesgothere youcantakeanyofthem Itisveryconvenient I dliketotellyousomethingabout lies and amodernzoo Now allaroundthere So yourbestchoice which What smore Anyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime 5 1 禁止投食2 不要离凶猛动物太近3 禁止恐吓动物 frighten 4 保持环境清洁 不乱扔垃圾 v ARule 6 假如你是杭州动物园维护队的一名志愿者 请你为动物园用英语写一个维护规则 7 1 禁止投食2 不要离凶猛动物太近3 禁止恐吓动物 frighten 4 保持环境清洁 不乱扔垃圾 1 Don tfeedtheanimals 2 Stayawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals 3 Youarenotsupposedtofrightentheanimals 4 Don tthrowlitterabout Keeptheenvironmentclean v ARule 8 今天 你陪一位来自美国的笔友汤姆参观杭州动物园 请你用英语向他解释这个木牌上的内容 开头已给出 并适当增加解释 Tom Itisjustaruleofthezoo Itsays 1 Don tfeedtheanimals 2 Stayawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals 3 Youarenotsupposedtofrightentheanimals 4 Don tthrowlitterabout Keeptheenvironmentclean 9 Tom Itisjustaruleofthezoo Itsaysthatyoushouldn tfeedtheanimals thatisbecausesomefoodmightbebadforthem Andkeepawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals fortheymayattackyou Itistoodangerous Alsoyouarenotsupposedtofrightenthem eveniftheysometimesarenotfriendlytoyou What smore don tthrowthelitterabout Itisourdutytokeeptheenvironmentclean 10 审题要 三审 1 审话题信息 切忌粗枝大叶 东遗西漏 2 审话题范围 准确把握出题者用意 搞清写作重点 3 审文体形式 11 Let swatchashortvideo 12 Whyaremoreandmoreanimalsbecomingendangered 13 Writing Writing 假设你是学校动物保护协会的成员 请你以Whatshouldwedotoprotectthewildanimals 为话题 根据中文提示叙述动物濒临灭绝的原因并阐述保护措施 用英语写一份发言稿 注意 开头和结尾部分已写好 可适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语 使所写内容连贯 所写内容必须包括上面表格中观点和你自己的至少三个观点 词数 个左右 14 Hello everyone Animalsareourbestfriends buttheseyearsmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangered Whatcausedthisproblem Inmyopinion firstly Ithinkcuttingdownthetreesbythefarmersisoneofthereasons Asaresult animalscannolongerhideorhavenoplacetolivein Also manyanimalsarekilledbypeoplewhowanttoselltheirfursformoney Besides somepollutionlikewaterandairpollutionhasmadethesituationsmoreserious Sowehumanbeingsshouldtryourbesttoprotectthem Ithinkthebestwaytotakegoodcareofthemisbuildingmorewildlifezoos Andthegovernmentshouldpassmorelawstopunishthepeoplewhohuntthewildlifeorcutdowntoomanytreeswithoutpermission Finally keepingtheenvironmentcleanisalsoaquiteeffectivewaytoprotectthewildlife Thankyouforlistening Thankyouforlistening