十年上海中考英语作文.doc

十年上海中考英语作文2011年上海中考英语作文题: Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im a member of _”. 以“我是的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子。提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作家庭，班级，社区的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。Use the following points as a reference. Are you glad to be a member of ? What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member? 例文+点评：2010年上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60字范文：I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know, The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me:“ impossible is nothing, ”“you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself ,though I didnt get the good mark, I knew ,I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!满分作文+点评：2009年上海中考英语作文题:I want to do something for my school以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 学生习作：I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean.But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple? 点评：此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。例文：My school is in the centre of the city and the air around is not fresh enough because of the heavy traffic. Our school hasnt noticed it, so I want to plant more trees in my school to take in polluted gases. I will use my savings to buy some plants and seeds. In addition, I will call on my schoolmates to be responsible for them when I graduate from school. I hope that my school will be cleaner and prettier.2008年上海中考英语作文题:网络上有两个版本：（1）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)”. 以“爸爸 / 妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。例文：My mum was born in a small village. In her family, there were seven people: mums parents, mums two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker. At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework. For example, they help to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.（2）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”. 以“我身边的爱”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。（总分16分）Use the following points as a guide. （短文须包含下列要点）Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)How do you feel when you get love from him/ her/ them?What are you going to do to show your love?范文：My life is full of love. My parents always give their love to me generously. When I was in trouble, they encouraged me and stayed by my side all the time. They asked me never to give up. I feel warm and thankful when I get love from them. In return, Im determined to win still greater progress in my studies and to be a good person. I know this is just what they want most.2007年上海中考英语作文题: Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”. 以“我不喜欢”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。段文开头已给，所给部分不计入字数。Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)What are the things that you hate to do?What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least two reasons.)Things I Hate to DoMost of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do. 范文（1）：Most of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do. For example, I hate to go swimming. I am able to swim but I think it is dangerous. I hate to read ghost stories, too, because they are not only frightening but also boring. Besides, they teach me nothing. In fact, I hate telling lies most. A person who tells lies is dishonest. If you tell lies, nobody will believe you any more when they find out the truth. So I hate to tell lies most. I want to be an honest person.范文（2）：I hate to keep pets and tell lies. The thing that I hate doing most is smoking. As we all know, smoking is not only bad for ourselves but also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes, I feel rather sick. Besides, it is a waste of money to smoke, I think. Whats more, smoking pollutes the air. So I hate smoking most.2006年上海中考英语作文题:Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”. 以“我有一个梦想”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。Sentence patterns for reference （以下句型仅供参考）l My dream is to be / to do / to gol I enjoy / like / preferl To make my dream come true, IIf my dream comes true, 例文：I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor. Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain. May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.2005年上海中考英语作文题:Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Growing pains and gains”. The pictures below are for your reference only.以“成长的烦恼与欢乐” 为题写篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。以下图片仅供参考。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 学生习作： I think I have a happy life, though I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. Thats boring.I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homeworks. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. Thats my growing pains and gains.2004年上海中考英语作文题:2003年上海中考英语作文题:2