英语4级写作(2)

写作 阐述型议论文 适用范围要求考生针对某一问题 正面阐述自己的观点 并说明自己的理由 一般来说这种议论文有两类第一类是对两种观点提出自己赞成其中那一个并自己说明的理由 第二类是对某一观点表示赞成还是反对同时说明理由 第一段 开门见山 引出现象 对此人们的看法不一 第二段 第一种看法给出理由或者举例说明 主题句 理由1 举例1 理由2 举例2 理由3 举例3 第三段 第二种看法 给出理由或者举例说明 主题句 理由1 举例1 理由2 举例2 理由3 举例3第四段 表明自己的观点 结束全文 阐明我的看法或态度 理由1 理由2 重述我的看法 Some others I 1 现状 现象 Somepeople viewsupportingsentences2 Others view transition supportingsentences3 Myview transition supportingsentencesconclusion Ontheimportanceofaname Itisacontroversialtopicwhethernamesareimportantornot 现状 Someholdthepositiveview 观点 Theyclaimthatagoodname oranamethatcanbeeasilyremembered canbringonealotmoreopportunitiesthanothers SomeChinesemayalsobelievethatanamedesignedaccordingtothetraditionaltheoryoffiveelementscanbringgoodluck 理由 Others however 过渡 holdtheoppositeview 观点 Theyarguethatanameisnothingbutacodetodistinguishonefromanother Apersonwitha good namemaynotbeassuccessfulasthenameindicates Inthesameway apersonwhohasacommonorcasuallygivennamecanalsoachievetremendoussuccess Personally 过渡 Ibelievethatbothsideshavesomethingright soweshouldnotgotoextremes Ontheonehand wehavetoadmitthatawelldesignednamecanhelpapersontosomeextent Ontheotherhand weshouldnotexaggeratetheeffectofanameonaperson sfate Anyway aperson ssuccessmainlydependsonhishardworkanddesirablepersonalities 主题提升 作文提炼炉 现象 现状Itisacontroversialtopicwhether Thereisnoagreement consensusamongpeopleasto concerning over Recentlytherehasbeenaheateddebateon Whenitcomesto differentpeopleholddifferentviews hasbecomeahottopicamongpeoplerecently Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson 辩论式作文常用模块 Whenitcomesto differentpeopleholddifferentviews Somepeopletakeforgrantedthat Whileothershaveopposingideas Recentlytherehasbeenaheateddebateon Ononehand somebelieve claim arguethat Tobeginwith theymaintainthat Furthermore theyholdthat However onthecontrary while yet incontrast but ontheotherhand otherpeopletakeanoppositeside Theyhold claim 结尾 Butinmypointofview personally Ibelieve supposethat AsfarasI mconcerned Iagreewiththeformer latteropinionAllthingsconsidered Iremainfirmlyinfavorof I monthesideofthefirstargument Thefollowingarethereasonsformypersonalagreement ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourist 1 名校校园正成为旅游新热点2 校园是否应对游客开放 人们看法不同3 我认为 Nowadays manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsandordinarytouristsgointoTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChinaforsightseeing Theycannotonlyenjoytheintellectualatmospherethere butalsofeellikeapartofit Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions Ononehand somepeoplearguedthatmiddleschoolstudentscanbeimpressedwiththeuniversitiesandsetadefinitegoalforthemselves Ontheotherhand somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon Intheiropinion thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere Asforme thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield 第一段 提出问题或现象 Nowadays havebecomeoneofthepopular IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothat 第二段 正反列举人们的看法 Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned isitagoodorbadthingto Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions Ononehand somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingfor inthat Ontheotherhand somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon Intheiropinion willhavenegativeeffecton becauseitwillnotonlydoharmto butalsoto 第三段 摆明自己观点 Inmyopinion isnotagoodthing Withtheincreasing itwillruin 1 Ithasbeenshownthat 类似句型 Itisknowntousthat Itissaidthat Itisreportedthat Itiscontroversialthat 2 enablev 使 能够Igavehimfulldirectionstoenablehimtofindthehouse negativeadj 否定的 相反的holdnegativeview holdoppositeopinions 1 有些人决定毕业后读研 2 有些人决定毕业后工作 3 我的看法 Shouldcollegestudentsgotoworkimmediatelyorpursuetheirpostgraduatestudyaftergraduation Whenitcomestosuchaquestion peopleopinionvarieswidelyfrompersontoperson Somepeopleconsider Intheireyes Besides isalsoanimportantfactorfor However someotherholdthat Accordingtothem And Personally Iaminfavoroftheformer lateridea Foronething Foranother Therefore asmentionedabove willbemychoice ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively 1 有人认为读书要有选择2 有人认为应当博览群书3 我的看法 Whenitcomestotheissueofreadingselectivelyorextensively differentpeopleholddifferentviews Somepeoplethinkwhenwereadweshouldreadselectively Thatistosay weshouldselectsomebooksweareinterestedinandignoretheothers Readingselectivelycanhelpusconcentrateourlimitedtimeandattentiononthoseselectedbooks Whileothersholdtheopposingidea Theyargueweshouldreadextensively Nomatterwhatkindofbookitis weshouldlookitover Weshouldreadvariouskindsofbooks whetherweareinterestedinthemornot Theymaintainthatreadingextensivelycanhelptoenlargeourviewandgraspthegeneralknowledgeindifferentfields personally thetworeadingwayshavetheirrolesrespectivelyinourreading However thedisadvantagesofeachmethodsareeasytosee Ifweonlyreadthebooksweselectorprefer theframeworkofourknowledgemaynotbecomplete Ourknowledgewouldberatherlimited Andifwereadwithoutselection wemaynothavesomuchtimeandenergytobespecializedinoneparticularfield Therefore thecombinationofthetwomethodsismorereasonable IsItGoodorBadtoOwnPrivateCars 1 拥有私家车的人越来越多 2 有人支持 有些人反对3 提出你的看法 Withtherapiddevelopmentofindustryandeconomy thenumberofpeoplewhocanownprivatecarshasincreasedgreatly Somepeoplehaveboughtcarsoftheirown andsomeareplanningtobuycars Somepeopleclaimthatmanyadvantagesarebroughtaboutbycars Firstly theautomobileindustryprovidescountlessworkerswithjobsandoffersstrongsupportforotherindustry Secondly ifpermitted owningacarcanhelpusworkmoreefficiently andfinally lifewillbemoreconvenientbecausecarsallowustotravelatanytime However somepeoplestronglyopposetoincreasingprivatecars Theyinsistthatautomobileswillcausemanyproblems Foronething themorecarsareproducedandruninthestreet themorepoisonousgaswillbegivenoff Asaresult boththeenvironmentandhumanbeingswouldsufferalot Foranotherthing moreprivatecarsleadtotrafficjamssothatthesenseofcomfortandfreedomisoftendestroyedbythefrustrationcausebytrafficjams Tosumup automobileshavebeenplayingavitalpartinpeople sdailylife butheyalsobringaboutsometroubles Ithinkweshouldlimittheincreaseofprivatecarsonthepremisethatpeople slifewouldn tbeaffectedgreatly Sample1 1 有些人主张发展私家轿车2 另一些人提倡优先发展公共交通3 我的观点 ShouldWeEncouragetheDevelopmentofPrivateCarsorPublicTransportation weshouldencouragethedevelopmentofprivatecarsorpublictransportation somepeoplebelievethequickdevelopmentofprivatecarsistheboomofoureconomy prioritiesshouldbegiventothelatter isthatChinaisacountrywiththelargestpopulationi